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WRITTING TASK 2 : OPINION ON FREE COLLEGE

3 - Besides of the length of words that insufficient for the test's standard, there are so much lacks from your...

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[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] Free libraries vs Internet

4 - Well written essay, yet too long since the maximum count words is 350 words only. Try to use more...

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The urbanisation rate in South Korea and Indonesia

2 - Point deductions will be applied for the insufficient image description. Majority of the images presented in a task...

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IELTS Writing task 1:The process diagram details the steps by which pineapples are produced for sale

5 - @hannah suitor thanks you so much...

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TASK 2 People are living longer after they retire. What are the problems? What can be done to solve?

3 - in the first paragraph, do not use 'I' if the question doesn't include the word 'you'. Besides, your introduction...

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The graph below shows the consumption of fish and three kinds of meat from 1979 to 2004

2 - While the presentation does indicate a chart, you did not identify the kind of chart presented, which poses...

Writing Feedbacklanhoangngoc - Oct 24, 2023Holt - Oct 26, 2023
IELTS task 1: The bar chart compares five countries in terms of movies' production from 2007 to 2009

2 - The essay is unnecessarily long. You wrote more than 250 words, making this a task 2 essay presentation instead...

Writing FeedbackLillingg - Oct 24, 2023Holt - Oct 26, 2023
Chevening Essay on Leadership and Influence - Forest Restoration Leadership

2 - Remove the reference to your parents, leading a nomad life, and the community participation that you had during your...

Scholarshipardiarmanto - Oct 24, 2023Holt - Oct 26, 2023
The graph and table shows the amount of water used for various purposes

2 - Your first paragraph is going to earn you a failing preliminary GRA score. Avoid writing long sentences in that...

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The line graph below shows changes in the youth unemployment rate from 2000 to 2012.

2 - The essay is overwritten. You should not be writing more than 200 words maximum for a 20 minute writing...

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[WRITING TASK 1] The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 & the plan for changes in 2024

2 - This vocabulary is too simple. You want to use somewhat advanced or intermediate English vocabulary to increase your...

Writing Feedbacklaura2024abroad - Oct 22, 2023Holt - Oct 26, 2023
[WRITTING TASK 1-MAP] The maps show the changes that happened to an island called Paradise.

2 - You are missing an important element in this essay. Where is the summary overview? You began with the trending...

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Task1 line chart - overseas travel to an european country

2 - This is a missing element in your summary overview. You need to mention these 3 places immediately for...

Writing FeedbackCandy123 - Oct 21, 2023Holt - Oct 25, 2023
Should English be the official language in Vietnam? Write an 400 word essay with clear explanantion

4 - Your writing demonstrates a good level of vocabulary accuracy and coherence. However, there are a few areas where you...

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IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - TRAFFIC CONGESTION ISSUE - CAUSES AND SOLUTIONS

3 - "Due to a dramatic rise in population, traffic jam has been a globally debatable issue. " In the beginning,...

Writing Feedbackwanttobebetter - Oct 21, 2023greattako - Oct 26, 2023
Writing a small research about the challenges of Derivative market in Vietnam

2 - Do not start your essaay without a proper introduction to the topic. Your current concluding paragraph will work well...

Research PapersAgnes Thao - Oct 20, 2023Holt - Oct 25, 2023
A statement of purpose for masters in computer science for UIUC.

2 - You must know the difference between a statement of purpose and an extended discussion of your academic background. You...

GraduateWooper358 - Oct 20, 2023Holt - Oct 25, 2023
IELTS writing task 2 owing a home rather than renting one is very important

4 - It doesn't clear whether the instruction of the essay to provide the discussion between the both views or comparison...

Writing Feedbackjane223 - Oct 20, 2023ardiarmanto - Oct 27, 2023
The usage of "this" and "it" in a given example

2 - In this case, the word "this" is used to refer to the single and uncountable nouns. In this case,...

Grammar, Usagerubinguyen - Oct 19, 2023Holt - Sep 25, 2024
The bar chart below shows the data about British emigration to 5 destinations between 2004 and 2007.

2 - This essay would cause you to automatically fail both task 1 and task 2 essays. That is because you...

Writing Feedbackplihg - Oct 19, 2023Holt - Oct 25, 2023
Letter of Motivation Master Control, Microsystems, Microelectronics

NEW - Motivation letter Dear Members of the Admissions Committee, My name is XXX, and I am an Electrical Engineer...

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Access to experts - Scholarship Prompt for X University

NEW - Scholarship essay - study and own development PROMPT: Give three examples of how your intended studies at X...

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Advantage and disadvantage of watching tv of children

2 - Okay. This is an advantage v. disadvantage essay. It is not a personal opinion essay. Therefore, you are not...

Writing Feedbackthaomya_03 - Oct 18, 2023Holt - Oct 25, 2023
Task 2 essay on legislations against tobacco.

2 - The essay is missing an expanded discussion of your personal opinion. While you did discuss the 2 opinions as...

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Chevening Essay - Leadership and Influence - Lead a collaborative effort and develop the team

2 - This is a networking reference. it does not work well in the context and requirement of this essay....

Scholarshipauzan - Oct 16, 2023Holt - Oct 25, 2023
[Writing task 1] The main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019.

2 - When you summarize your presentation, make sure to indicate that the pie charts are individually assigned to each year...

Writing Feedbackhuydaoquang - Oct 15, 2023Holt - Oct 25, 2023
The restriction of using vehicles on certain days as a way to reduce air pollution

2 - Your prompt restatement + writer's opinion is too long. It should not be more than 3 sentences in length....

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Mental health disorders - Commonwealth Master's scholarships, development impact essay part 1

2 - I am not sure if this is a topic slant that can get you a Commonwealth scholarship. While mental...

ScholarshipPiperskm - Oct 15, 2023Holt - Oct 15, 2023
Essay about separate education for students with different academic levels

4 - There are some amendments I can give to improve your writing: (this is just my personal opinion) - Some...

Writing FeedbackAnhngoc12 - Oct 15, 2023wanttobebetter - Oct 21, 2023
Common App Essay - Describe a topic, idea, or concept you find so engaging

2 - Try to avoid using movie references as inspirations for a future career. Specially when you clearly claim that you...

UndergraduateMHJN - Oct 14, 2023Holt - Oct 15, 2023
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