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Replacing a Kitchen Faucet - Process Essay

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Response to Brave New World

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Expository Essay: War, good or bad?

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Vocabulary Composition in my Storyline

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an altogether different way of understanding how we make observations.

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Autism is a spectrum disorder; Introduction to Autism

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Expository essay on my early years

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THEOLOGY OF LIBERATION RELAVANT, THEOLOGY OF HOPE TODAY

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an essay on - How we evolve

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persistence of external reality

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Essay about "What is work?"

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"Letter from Birmingham jail" - rhetorical analysis

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Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - May 2, 2007 / EF_Team2 - May 2, 2007
Short paper discussing SETTING

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Performance enhancing drugs in athletes.

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Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Apr 11, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Apr 25, 2007
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Death of a Salesman Essay

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6 - Greetings! I think you've done a fantastic job! The additional tidbits you found are good. What about just...

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"Koran" - Narrative Argument about a social issue

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Have to write 13 Media Logs...

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Writing Feedbackmaria - Apr 18, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Apr 19, 2007
Essay on the sociological influences of the Greek Orthodox Church

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12 - Sarah, Thank you for all of your help. I really appreciate you for letting me use your rewrite...

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2 - Greetings! Your essay is very well-written and informative! Content-wise, I think you're fine; I just have a few...

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The Myth of Love - An Athology that relates most to me

3 - I'm not sure where to find the Viorst work, but I'd recommend checking your school library's database. If you...

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the New York Times selects its reader; Times Fashion Magazine

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Writing Feedbackbizkitgirlzc - Apr 13, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Apr 13, 2007
My personal understanding of the word "privilege" - Paper on a 'Current Law'

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Writing Feedbacktwinsxtwo - Apr 12, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Apr 13, 2007
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Writing Feedbacktbrodgins - Apr 12, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Apr 12, 2007
Literature Review - Child Sex offenders

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"Voice of Common Sense" - citations correct?

2 - Greetings! I'd be happy to give you some pointers! There are also many online sites which explain the...

Writing Feedbackrkslperez - Apr 11, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Apr 11, 2007
There is more to teaching than classroom transactions - philosophy

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