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a robotics club in my school - Tell us about a time you used your creativity.

3 - ...and together we properly organized a club that we named Quasics (short for quantum physics). With the invaluable...

Undergraduateyatindrahp - Dec 28, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2010
MUN delegate, George Washington University- Supplement Essay

2 - An hour-and-a-half hour later, I dismiss my students for recess, and our soccer game continues... Keep that verb...

Undergraduatejoosunggrace - Dec 28, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2010
"Football story" - U of Illinois

3 - This does not seem right. Proficisnt means skillful. Maybe you mean "adequate." y natural leadership ability really...

Undergraduatefightingillini - Dec 28, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2010
USC Essay + NYU Short answers critique

12 - Are you talking about the essay about epilepsy? It will answer the prompt if you end the first or...

UndergraduateAIRanimechiic - Dec 28, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2010
Why Tufts? Distinct Mission; INTERNATIONAL RELATIONS

8 - I like the new one better, its more personal so they can get to know who you really are....

Undergraduatejyu104 - Jan 3, 2010AnnAsburY - Jan 3, 2010
I was completely ignored by Freshman Mentor; COMMON APP

19 - I'm confused about this part. If you earned good grades, why did he need to show concern about...

Undergraduateemorris - Dec 27, 2009jampamz - Jan 3, 2010
Why Tufts Essay- A Mirror Reflection?

9 - Don't use world-class dining. That hurts it a lot. I know Tufts has a pretty good dining plan but...

Undergraduateddragonx34 - Dec 29, 2009jyu104 - Jan 3, 2010
Alaskan's cornell engineering essay

2 - ^Did the passion grow older? ^How is this related to stimulating the visual mind,...

Undergraduatechelseas42 - Jan 3, 2010Liebe - Jan 3, 2010
fantastic academic programs - Stanford Essay-Why Stanford?

4 - Choose the one that will give you the most access to and experience with both. You can do...

UndergraduateNeoGeo - Dec 27, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2010
MIT - significant challenge or something that didn't go according to plan

3 - Hmmm, yes, I think what luminous might have meant was: My friends and I share many common ideas and...

Undergraduateyatindrahp - Dec 27, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2010
Freedom of speech, alternative energy, northwestern supplement essay - why NU?

4 - How fascinating that you thought a larger class size was a good thing. That makes the essay really interesting....

Undergraduateseattlelite - Dec 27, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2010
Impact of Tennis - Common App Essay

3 - Playing and watching sports has always been my passion. Tennis was my first love as I was growing up...

Undergraduatemdtennis92 - Dec 27, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2010
"to change my mindset" - Tufts University supplement essays

3 - You spend too much time at the beginning talking about how you like all kinds of music. Everybody says...

Undergraduateepirote901 - Dec 27, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2010
why tufts - strong psychology department

6 - What do those skeptics prefer... the "hard" sciences? Some people call psych a "soft" science, because it is so...

Undergraduatemmmargarita - Dec 27, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2010
our trip to Costa Rica, Essay topic: evaluating a significant experience

5 - I think it can work for both, and I think that in both cases it is important to write...

Undergraduatealiyoung8143 - Dec 27, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2010
Emotional, multicultural, and optimist - My BU Essay

5 - It seems nicer if we make all three words adjectives: ...use just three words they are emotional, multicultural, and...

Undergraduatenewsdrms - Dec 27, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2010
My respect for my ideneity in Quito, Ecuador- Common App

6 - No worries, I'm not that great with grammar myself...(I have to read over my essays like A MILLION times...

UndergraduateJimmyzg213 - Jan 2, 2010cheetah777 - Jan 3, 2010
NYU Supplement - Multiple Prompts + Topic Ideas

12 - Those who studied calculus Tried to be miraculous... I was thinking of that for the meter... Ha...

UndergraduateSignifica - Dec 27, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2010
U Chicago Supplements: Something you have outgrown and Why chicago?

3 - When I thought of a modern day chemist, I had often visualized a smartly-gowned scientist with the famous hair...

Undergraduatekiwi90 - Dec 27, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2010
Paramedical Experience -- Common App Essay

4 - I liked your essay. One thing that stuck out was the use of "horror". You have the phrase "mind...

UndergraduateIvanD - Dec 30, 2009Borik - Jan 3, 2010
math, science, or engineering, CalTech Interest Essay

3 - I think you could say all of this in half the amount of words you used. Don't use...

Undergraduatebirthdayattackr - Dec 27, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2010
an excellent liberal arts education and the choice - Cornell CAS Essay

4 - The first paragraph is confusing, but I figured out the way to fix it!: I was in my own...

Undergraduateapplesandtea - Dec 27, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2010
Caltech Essay- How do you express your interest in math, science or engineering?

3 - Thanks for trying to help, but can you try to read the last two paragraphs? None of the...

Undergraduatehope_21 - Jan 3, 2010hope_21 - Jan 3, 2010
Cal Tech Essay-Interests in Engineering!

5 - Number agreement: can take my abstract ideas and turn them into concrete realities. Your intro is excellent writing;...

Undergraduateletsgetfroyo - Dec 27, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2010
"Community and Equity as a battey and its charger" - Lehigh supplement

5 - A comma is necessary in this kind of sentence: ...without the battery the charger has no meaning, and without...

Undergraduateaikd80cn - Dec 27, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2010
History with neuroscience - Brown PLME

3 - I love the beginning, but I have to challenge you to do an operation on that first paragraph. Right...

Undergraduatepbhat - Dec 27, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2010
What would you choose to do over and what changes would you make?

4 - Ha ha, at first, I did not realize you meant the organization of your essay. I thought you...

Undergraduatedaft123 - Dec 27, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2010
'Research into rare medicinal herbs' - Why Franklin and marshall college?

8 - ^^ thnx for the comments..ill try to work on those sections....

UndergraduateHemin12 - Dec 21, 2009Hemin12 - Jan 3, 2010
Caltech Humor Prompt

4 - Uh... I gotta disagree with Punpunpun that it sounds all that "artificial and disengenuous." Okay, this maybe. ...

UndergraduateKatlynedwards - Jan 2, 2010Logical_Fella_C - Jan 3, 2010
Tufts Supplement Prompt #2 [What voice would you add?]

4 - Maybe it's just me, but I don't quite understand this part of the sentence. How about:...

UndergraduateIvanD - Dec 31, 2009achen92 - Jan 3, 2010
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