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Is this full of babbling? GKS 2024/ Undergraduate Scholarship - LANGUAGE STUDIES BEFORE AND AFTER

3 - Your essay is quite good. I don't know that why you are writitng the language plan ( whether for...

Scholarshipjennide - Sep 14, 2023sushiii - Oct 14, 2023
Gks Undergraduate Essay; I have been deeply intrigued by the world of business

3 - Hello, i am aware of the GKS-UG guidlenes. I read your essay and let me give you my honest...

Undergraduatequenshaa - Oct 8, 2023sushiii - Oct 14, 2023
Compare pie charts show the proportion of the energy produces from different sources in a country

2 - The summary overview lacks content. Always enumerate the information sources prior to setting up the trending statement. You cannot...

Writing FeedbackNgocAnk - Oct 9, 2023Holt - Oct 14, 2023
IELTS Writing Task 1: three main difficulties each age has to face when they live abroad

NEW - the problems people have when they go to live in other countries The bar chart demonstrates three main...

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Driving force to be a leader - leadership and influence chevening essay

NEW - I wish to have feedback regarding my essay. please do comment :) Chevening is looking for individuals who...

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[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] Juvenile delinquency. Cause/Solution?

NEW - IN SOME COUNTRIES, A HIGH PROPORTION OF CRIMINAL ACTS ARE COMMITTED BY TEENAGERS. WHY HAS THIS HAPPENED? WHAT CAN...

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A letter of motivation for DAAD master program scholarship in Neuroscience

NEW - They have asked me to write a letter of motivation outlining the academic, professional and personal motives for completion...

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The illustrations show how chocolate is produced. The process is quite lengthy and complicated

4 - You do not have reached the word limit. You get a low score when you don't complete the task...

Writing Feedbackanhtho06 - Oct 8, 2023TanzeelaWasti - Oct 12, 2023
Why have men's sports been give far more attention by society than women's s? IELTS Writting Task 2

4 - I think you should give the essay a proper stance; either be positive about it or be negative about...

Writing FeedbackCantor Zhukov - Oct 9, 2023TanzeelaWasti - Oct 12, 2023
Task 1 writing ielts - carbon dioxide released by four different countries

3 - @laiphuongthao two nations,Italy and Portugal Following up were Sweden... in the given order, respectively/correspondingly. on the other hand, You...

Writing Feedbacklaiphuongthao - Oct 3, 2023Duy Dang - Oct 11, 2023
[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] Begin learning a foreign language

NEW - SOME EXPERTS BELIEVE THAT IT IS BETTER FOR CHILDREN TO BEGIN LEARNING A FOREIGN LANGUAGE AT PRIMARY SCHOOL RATHER...

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Statement of Interest for admission to the Japanese university as a student from Ukraine

NEW - Hello, I wrote something like this at the first time and I really need help. What should I remove...

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The percentage of people who were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living.

3 - @Cao hong Ngoc You should be aware of the structure of sentence such as capital letters or end mark...

Writing FeedbackCao hong Ngoc - Oct 9, 2023Duy Dang - Oct 10, 2023
GKS-U An only child with 4 siblings aspires to become an IT Engineer

NEW - Global Korea Scholarship application essay - Motivations with which you apply for this program - Educational background -...

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It starts with a self-awareness - Chevening leadership and influence essay

NEW - Hi all, this is a draft I have prepared for Chevening leadership essay. Wish I could receive some feedbacks...

Scholarshipawispawit30 - Oct 8, 2023 -
"The challenges I had to go through to finally learn a language" - Common app personal statement

2 - Well, this is certainly a very impressive take on the struggle of a foreign student to learn the English...

UndergraduateKuvyl - Oct 7, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
How MS B analytics program align with your goals and values? How will you contribute towards cohort?

2 - You should be discussing points that would show you are more than qualified for the program. You are not...

Graduatetrustme123 - Oct 7, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
The diagram below shows the production of olive oil. Summarize the information - 7 stages involved

2 - You have summarized the presentation too much. In your desire to present the quickest version of information possible, you...

Writing Feedbackpminhanh - Oct 7, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
Why I want to become an anesthesiologist assistant

2 - Do you have an underlying condition that requires you to have regular check ups? Is this one of...

Undergraduatemicrowavedchild - Oct 6, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
'How does this affect Lebron's legacy' - National Merit Essay: Influential Person

2 - It is obvious that you have written this essay from the heart. It shows in the way that you...

Undergraduateomh66206 - Oct 6, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
Present your ideas about what you should or shouldn't do to live green

2 - This is a well written essay. it shows that the writer has a good grasp of the English language...

Writing Feedbackanhthueunsung - Oct 6, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
Commonwealth Development Impact Statement Part 1 - journalism challenges

2 - The impact statement you have chosen to use does not necessarily reflect the sentiments that you have presented as...

ScholarshipSanskriti - Oct 5, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
My academic journey - Chevening Leadership and Influence Essay

2 - This is not a leadership and influencing essay in line with the expected information for Chevening. What you wrote...

Scholarshiphabib_baharuddin - Oct 5, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
Writing task 1 Ielts: young people's expectations for change in five different areas

2 - Yes, statistics were provided in the image. However, you need to identify the type of image before you...

Writing Feedbackakane - Oct 5, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
The percentage of time adults spent on different activities in a country in 1958 and 2008

2 - You have misrepresented the number of pie charts in your summary overview. You need to use the plural form...

Writing Feedbackkhanh416 - Oct 4, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
Artist Statement - SAIC (School of the Art Institute of chicago)

2 - Since this is an artist statement, try to develop more insight into how you got your start in photography....

UndergraduateRuan_sds - Oct 3, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
The charts show the percentage of electricity consumed by different sectors in Eastern Australia

2 - I think you made a wrong word choice here. I believe you meant to say reverse. Which refers...

Writing FeedbacklemonadeA - Oct 3, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
Reasons why friendship is gradually dying

2 - You have provided reasons for friendships ending. Those do not necessarily reflect the death of friendships. You are speaking...

Writing Feedbackkieuuoanh - Oct 3, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
Global warming is one of the biggest threaten to our environment. Cause and solution ?

2 - I can understand what you are trying to tell me in the essay. The problem, is that even though...

Writing Feedbackpth1234 - Oct 1, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
Goverment should prioritize heathcare instead of orther areas. Do you agree or disagree?

2 - Do not confuse the well being of a person with healthcare. Well being is a larger field of personal...

Writing FeedbackGiahuy2107 - Oct 1, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
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