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IELTS:In some places,young people find it difficult to communicate with older people? Why? Solution?

2 - This statement will immediately result in a failing score for this particular paragraph. You have informed the examiner...

Writing FeedbackRarmi - Aug 19, 2023Holt - Aug 21, 2023
The line graph depicts three companies in terms of tonnes of waste produced, over 15 years; TASK 1

2 - Please be consistent with your use of punctuation marks. You have some ommitted punctuation marks, as well as some...

Writing Feedbackcindyhoang - Aug 18, 2023Holt - Aug 21, 2023
IELTS task 1 (The line graph reveals information on the waste output of three selected businesses)

2 - The presentation has an error in the final presentation. You should have separated the trending sentence from the actual...

Writing FeedbackLily Eilish - Aug 18, 2023Holt - Aug 21, 2023
How individuals can contribute to environment protection.

2 - The prompt restatement is incorrect. You are expected to reword the whole original topic presentation in your version. Do...

Writing Feedbackhungdepzaivcl - Aug 18, 2023Holt - Aug 21, 2023
My Statement of Purpose for UT Austin for Electrical Engineering Program

2 - This is more of an academic biography than a statement of purpose. So you should consider rewriting the statement...

Graduatekanojreddy - Aug 18, 2023Holt - Aug 21, 2023
Prison privatizations - Maria

2 - I am unclear when it comes to the actual topic for discussion in this essay. The introduction paragraph is...

Research Papersmaria12 - Aug 18, 2023Holt - Aug 21, 2023
How does it feel moving towards the twilight?

2 - Please note that you only have 40 minutes to write a simple discussion for this topic. You will not...

Writing Feedbacktinnucbebe - Aug 17, 2023Holt - Aug 21, 2023
The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

2 - Good work. However, since there are 2 images involved, you should have used the 4 paragraph presentation. That way...

Writing FeedbackStacyNguyen - Aug 17, 2023Holt - Aug 21, 2023
THIS SENTENCE IS CORRECT, ISN'T IT? ANOTHER WAY TO REWRITE?

2 - The sentence is incorrectly written. The subject-verb agreement / placement is not correct. The sentence structure is also not...

Grammar, Usagelhnnee - Aug 17, 2023Holt - Aug 21, 2023
Overpopulation is the world's most serious environmental problem.

2 - Your paraphrasing was off to a good start. The basis for the succeeding discussions were also well established. However,...

Writing Feedbackthanhbui64 - Aug 17, 2023Holt - Aug 21, 2023
[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] EDUCATION - vocational training

2 - This is not an extent essay. You need not over state your opinion. Just keep it simple. You...

Writing Feedbackbhan - Aug 16, 2023Holt - Aug 21, 2023
The chart below show reasons why Americans travelled and the pie chart what problems concerned them

2 - There is an immediate problem to be found in the summary overview presentation. The first, is that you wrote...

Writing Feedbackntoaht17 - Aug 16, 2023Holt - Aug 21, 2023
SHOULD SCHOOL CHILDREN BE GIVEN HOMEWORK (OPINION)?

2 - What do you think about homework? Do you see it as a necessary part of learning? Why did you...

Writing Feedbackminwy - Aug 15, 2023Holt - Aug 21, 2023
Nowadays, mobile phones and internet have become increasingly important in people's social life

2 - The advantages presentation is far better than the disadvantages discussion. You clearly have a better idea of how to...

Writing Feedbackjadenguyen252 - Aug 15, 2023Holt - Aug 21, 2023
The graph below show the number of overseas tourist to three paricular areas

2 - The task is to complete a simple analysis of the given image. That should be completed within 200 words...

Writing Feedbackthuylinhdo - Aug 15, 2023Holt - Aug 21, 2023
Essay about behavior in schools is getting worse.

2 - Do not refer to a particular educational level in your restatement. This was not indicated in the original...

Writing Feedbacktrangnt - Aug 15, 2023Holt - Aug 21, 2023
In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books

2 - Good work on presenting the basis subjects for the discussion in your restatement and thesis section. However, you wrote...

Writing FeedbackDuy Dang - Aug 15, 2023Holt - Aug 21, 2023
Task: In the past lecture was the traditional method of teaching a large number of students

2 - It is not necessary to indicate how the essay will be written. You already made that clear in...

Writing Feedbackbuiha02 - Aug 15, 2023Holt - Aug 21, 2023
Writing task 2: Some people think that in the modern world, getting old is entirely bad.

2 - You are missing the personal opinion. The first paragraph is therefore incomplete. You cannot receive full scoring considerations...

Writing Feedbackdaniellee94 - Aug 15, 2023Holt - Aug 21, 2023
Historical information of residential areas is fascinatedly looked for by recent inhabitants

2 - There is no argument referenced in this discussion. An idea or public opinion was presented for discussion. Examiners...

Writing Feedbackquinlinn_21 - Aug 15, 2023Holt - Aug 21, 2023
Task 1 (barchart): Percentage of Canadians which gave money to charitable organisations by age

2 - The trending statement is too over emphasized. You do not need to present the middle part. The trend is...

Writing Feedbackeya123456 - Aug 14, 2023Holt - Aug 20, 2023
The questions received by the tourist information office by letter or email, and by telephone

2 - I am not sure if you can complete this essay within 20 minutes. You wrote almost enough words for...

Writing Feedbackhung12345612 - Aug 14, 2023Holt - Aug 20, 2023
IELTS Writing Task 1 - The use of water by four different countries (%)

2 - The summary is incomplete. The sector divisions should be listed to help add clarity to the references in the...

Writing FeedbackTonynhan - Aug 14, 2023Holt - Aug 20, 2023
IELTS TASK 2 ACADEMIC - TOPIC: EDUCATION; In the modern world, schools are no longer necessary

2 - The first sentence of your prompt restatement is unnecessary. You need to be more focused on presenting the actual...

Writing FeedbackLinh1601 - Aug 14, 2023Holt - Aug 20, 2023
Write essay about consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007

2 - Always present a complete summary. Your information is good, but lacking one vital piece of information. You did not...

Writing Feedbackckhanb - Aug 13, 2023Holt - Aug 20, 2023
Newspapers, books? Internet offers people satisfying methods to get unlimited access to information

2 - Try to limit the presentation to 300 words. Keep track of how many words you can actually write within...

Writing FeedbackLENGUYENHONGPHUC - Aug 13, 2023Holt - Aug 20, 2023
A topic of interest regarding the money for building the roads rather than new railways

2 - The prompt for this essay asks you to discuss "To what extent do you agree or disagree?" You are...

Writing Feedbackminh23102006 - Aug 13, 2023Holt - Aug 20, 2023
Advertising has become an inevitable part of our lives.

2 - You have used an incorrect discussion format in this instance. Since you opted to use the 3 opinion discussion...

Writing Feedbackjason hoang - Aug 11, 2023Holt - Aug 20, 2023
Consumers being overwhelmed with commercial advertisements since fierce competition among companies

2 - The promot restatement is acceptable but, the writer's opinion is not. You did not directly respond to the extent...

Writing Feedbackhaonhien15 - Aug 11, 2023Holt - Aug 20, 2023
A controversial topic if governments should invest on railways rather than on roads

2 - The first sentence is unclear in reference. What is people's repair? It is a reference that does not connect...

Writing FeedbackNguyen Tan Hieu - Aug 11, 2023Holt - Aug 20, 2023
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