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How to write an essay about the principle of double effect in medical ethics?

2 - Have you considered writing the paper by combining the religious concerns into the medical ethics aspect? Doing so would...

Essayswriterstudent123 - Jan 9, 2023Holt - Jan 9, 2023
IELTS Task 1: The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas

3 - @Holt thank you for your advice, I will try to read more and do better next time....

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Should children be banned from using their phones during the school day?

5 - This essay presents a balanced view on the use of phones in schools. it acknowledges the potential distractions and...

Writing Feedbackhuongggtra - Jan 4, 2023glowstorm - Jan 9, 2023
Paraphrase introduction in IELTS Writing task 1

2 - Well, the paraphrase clearly shows your lack of proper English word knowledge and usage. You are using archaic English...

Grammar, Usagegiangluongmeox - Jan 9, 2023Holt - Jan 9, 2023
"The lesson of hard work and persistence" - personal statement

2 - I strongly urge you to remove the introductory paragraph in this statement. Since the word requirement is less than...

Undergraduateanukk - Jan 9, 2023Holt - Jan 9, 2023
Internally young forever (about the blue zone states and Dr. Sinclairs research)

2 - Some is a plural adjective so it cannot be used with a singular reference. Use the indefinite article...

Writing FeedbackDreamgirl01 - Jan 9, 2023Holt - Jan 9, 2023
Motivation Letter for erasmus mundus to Consortium dealing with ME3

2 - For starters, you need to know that a motivational letter should only comprise a single page, single spaced, no...

Lettersahsan9702 - Jan 8, 2023Holt - Jan 9, 2023
The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016.

2 - Always remember that this report is written on the assumption that the reader does not have a copy of...

Writing Feedbackthuyne - Jan 8, 2023Holt - Jan 9, 2023
Research essay on the Federal Reserve- Feed Back

2 - Create a stronger opening statement and thesis presentation by removing the cited sources within the first paragraph. As a...

Writing Feedbackjos2250 - Jan 8, 2023Holt - Jan 8, 2023
Discipline is a growing problem in modern schools. Some people think that parents should discipline

2 - Your restatement is confusing to read. To be honest, it is not even remotely close to the original discussion...

Writing Feedbackjimmy1104 - Jan 8, 2023Holt - Jan 8, 2023
Studying in Hungary challenge. International Relations - Motivation letter for STIPENDIUM HUNGARICUM

2 - Relate the motivation more towards being inspired by the current Russian diplomatic relations on a global scale. That would...

Lettersthe writer - Jan 6, 2023Holt - Jan 8, 2023
Essay for a master's degree in labor law (regarding an unfair job recruitment system)

2 - The worst thing that a scholarship applicant can do is use the personal statement, specifically the motivation discussion to...

ScholarshipRamadan - Jan 6, 2023Holt - Jan 8, 2023
Worldwide relations. Motivation Letter for Master's Program with Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship

2 - Thank you for indicating that you will be applying to 2 masters programs. The problem is that I cannot...

Lettersbsuzunoglu - Jan 5, 2023Holt - Jan 8, 2023
Motivation Letter for Universities offering Human Computer Interaction

2 - Heed the warning about the last chance. This will be the first and last redacted essay from you that...

LettersZzssrish - Jan 4, 2023Holt - Jan 8, 2023
Growing my technical roots genuinely - Statement of purpose for Materials Science Master MaMaSELF

2 - We recommend including complete information in your essay when you ask for advice. That includes your name orat least...

Graduateliliquestions - Jan 3, 2023Holt - Jan 8, 2023
Passion for physics and chemistry. Motivational Letter - Stipendium Hungaricum, Chemical Engineering

2 - Why do you not trust us with the complete copy of this essay? Your juvenile writing and clear lack...

Scholarshipvokazar - Jan 1, 2023Holt - Jan 8, 2023
Geoinformation and spatial science - statement of Purpose for Graduate studies

2 - One of the reasons that the forum members are required to provide unredacted essays is that complete information is...

Graduatenep1234 - Dec 29, 2022Holt - Jan 8, 2023
Revewing a Motivational Letter for IFROS (intelligent Field Robotics Systems) Scholarship

2 - The motivation and interest in the program comes in strong in the fust paragraph. It clearly lays out the...

Lettersglowstorm - Jan 7, 2023Holt - Jan 8, 2023
The population of young adults has been far higher than that of elderly people in some countries

2 - There is a redundancy existing in your opinion statement. The double presentation of your openion in a single sentence...

Writing Feedbackghadtj - Jan 7, 2023Holt - Jan 8, 2023
Pushing myself - WHAT IS IMPORTANT TO YOU?

2 - The prompt only asks for one important topic. Therefore you have to choose between motivation and self. discipline. I...

Undergraduatekngsleyw - Jan 7, 2023Holt - Jan 8, 2023
[Writing Ielts Task 2] The most important function of music is that it helps people reduce stress.

3 - I am also studying for the IELTS, and I can hardly imagine a candidate who can write a 440...

Writing FeedbackABC2519 - Dec 25, 2022Sunny0629 - Jan 7, 2023
Computer science and software engineering - What are your educational goals - Waterloo

3 - Hey there, I had to answer this question as well! I think you should concentrate on why you decided...

Undergraduatemuhammadso - Jan 5, 2023Slyrae - Jan 7, 2023
TASK II IELTS regarding of the world becoming popular to research the history of owns family

3 - I'm not going to judge your performance in TA, LR and CC. Holt has already made a comprehensive assessment,...

Writing FeedbackYETI YUNIARSIH - Jan 1, 2023Sunny0629 - Jan 7, 2023
Ielts task 2 _ using alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their normal doctor

3 - I didn't find any grammatical mistakes in your paper. Great! Your section structure is reasonable, but it should be...

Writing Feedbackhoaflth - Jan 2, 2023Sunny0629 - Jan 7, 2023
Ielts 2: Government supervised and handled by the authority rather than by private companies

3 - There are some grammatical mistakes in your paper: 1.the article before the noun cannot be omitted, so it is...

Writing FeedbackHuynguyen123232 - Jan 2, 2023Sunny0629 - Jan 6, 2023
IMSISS Erasmus Scholarship SOP, International Relation

3 - @Holt Thank you for the feedback. I'm making corrections right away....

ScholarshipEternal - Jan 4, 2023Eternal - Jan 6, 2023
UBC Sauder School of Business - Personal Profile Essay - UNFAMILIAR SITUATION (not liking poetry)

2 - This is certainly a good response that covers both the problem and unfamiliar situation prompt. I like that you...

Undergraduatetxd123 - Jan 5, 2023Holt - Jan 6, 2023
Stipendium Hungaricum motivational letter - MSC Biology in University of Debrecen

3 - I believe that the letter is too long and does not really show your motivation is the mentioned program....

ScholarshipHoangTranDuc - Jan 3, 2023bsuzunoglu - Jan 5, 2023
"Outgoing," "passionate," and "holistic" - personal statement!

2 - Why are you shouting at the reader? Do you want me to have your account suspended for disrespect? You...

UndergraduateSunilPal - Jan 5, 2023Holt - Jan 5, 2023
In a couple paragraphs, provide a summary of activities you have completed from the last three years

2 - The presentation format is not correct. When told to write a few paragraphs, provide 2-3 paragraphs that will cover...

ScholarshipSunilPal - Jan 5, 2023Holt - Jan 5, 2023
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