Writing Feedback / Rail transport in four countries (UK, US, Japan and Italy) in 2007 [2]

The table indicates that the proportion of using train in four countries (UK, US, Japan and Italy) in 2007. Overall, it can be seen that Japan was the highest level of using rail transport than other countries. USA predominantly using trail transport for carrying goods while Japan using it for passenger purpose.

The number of people using rail transport not include metro in Japan was 27, which was the highest percentage of using this transportation and it had 1980 passengers per head of population. Meanwhile, the capacity of cargo than able to carried solely 23.01 billion tons. On the other hand, while USA depicted low in the number of people using rail transport just at 0.3 and only 80 passengers per head of population, the number of cargo carried reach up to 2,820 billion tons.

UK and Italy have similarities of the number of using trains. For both countries, people using trail transport around 5.9 and 5.5 respectively. The number of passenger kilometers per head of population at approximately 780 and the average of brought things purpose solely 22 billion tons

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Writing Feedback / What is the life in a media-rich society? [3]

It is becoming more and more difficult to escape the influence of the media on our lives.

Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a media-rich society.

It is firmly argue that most of people depend on and influenced by media in daily basis. Presence of it be able to fast influence people and the role of media is very essential for people lives. This is essay will discuss how the media can expose and cause familiar each person in society and the drawbacks of media-rich for them.

There is no doubt that media playing immense role these days in social life. It is capable to make exist or famous each person. Taking example in the United States in last two years ago, lots of people take benefit of the media for campaign purposes. Such Donald Trumpt, one of the US president candidates, he become famous there even in the world due to media publications such on the TV or newspaper. It is a proof that media-rich is immediately change mindset people's sense and affect them to trust the information content what they have published.

However, there are several negative impacts of media for human lives. Firstly, information of the media sometimes consists of wrong news and it is definitely that there is no guarantee regards to propriety of these news. In addition, several media organizers usually present provoke news which is aim to persevere between one social group with each others. Also, the cost of media publication extremely expensive and tend to has low flexibility, such a tabloid.

To sum up, most of people extremely believe that media can affect people lives. However, the media can provoke each group with others due to humiliate news. People should smart and consider to trust the content of information have been provide by media.

Writing Feedback / A lot of folks argue that the level of violence action between teenagers have increased [3]

Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some Psychologists claim that the basic reasons for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teachers.

To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

answer:

currently, lots of folks argue that the level of violence action between teenagers have increased. Regards on indicates of some psychologists, it is occurred due to the children never get social and emotion learning from school and their relatives. This essay is partly agree with the issue, I am firm believe that the main factor of violent action appear in around the children is an environment affects. This essay will explain related to this.

It is a common fact that the number of violent crime among young children increased sharply. This is because the content of learning is rarely to teach them about social life and how to respect to each other. Taking example in Somalia, one of the unsafe countries in the world, the number of crime action in this area growing up annually, particularly teenager. Such the robber cases witnessed more than five cases per day. In fact, most of them never achieve knowledge about social life in their school even in their family. As a result, it is definitely that they do not understand about living harmonious in society and solely consider that fight is the great way deal with their matters.

However, there are several factors cause violent actions between young teenagers. The environment playing an immense role to influences children's behavior. Teenager is the period of life when person effort to find their identity, they are deceivable and can be affected. Firstly, while bad environment where they life is not definitely influenced all teenagers become bad behavior, predominantly of them following this conditions. In additions, teenagers who live such in thief area could follow the habit of folks there became a thief. Also, several obligation of government related to youngsters matters are not suitable include forced them to develop their creativity.

To conclude, although criminal actions of people under 18 age group is less attention about social and emotion learning from their school and family. I believe that environment where they live play an essential part how they behave every day. Government should pay attention for these matters especially for youngsters for the next generation.

Writing Feedback / Nokia had the biggest market share among the cell phone brands between 2005 and 2006 [2]

The table illustrates the global market share of the cell phone for workers based on factories from 2005 to 2006. Overall, it is immediately apparent that Nokia witnessed the highest percentage of mobile phone market share over the time frame

By 32.5 percent in 2005, Nokia was the most popular mobile phone in the world. Next year, it experienced an increased at 35 percent. Compare with others, this figure decreased sharply from at 19.2 percent in 2005 to 16.2 percent in the last period. Meanwhile, Motorola and Sony Ericsson grew gradually during a two-period by 3 % and 1 % respectively.

On the other hand, three other mobile phone brands reminded declined. Samsung phone fell gradually during the period from 12.7 % to 11.8 %. Furthermore, LG indicates dropped slightly of the number of market share by 0.4 % in the next year. BenQ mobile phone showed low percentage, no more than 5 %.

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Writing Feedback / Globalization will inevitably lead to the total loss of culture identity, is it true? [2]

As mass communication and transport continue to grow societies are becoming more and more alike leading to phenomenon known as globalization, some people fear that globalization will inevitably lead to the total loss of culture identity.

To what extend do you agree o disagree?

Answer:

It is obvious fact that predominantly countries in the world experience a phenomenon namely globalization which is effort to improve quality of life such expand public facilities include transportation and communication. Most of folks tend to feel that it can influence and cause culture identity become disappear. In my view, I partially agree due to the fact that globalization probably can help local culture each country such in promotion side, it would be faded if people cannot face the globalization judiciously.

To begin with, undeniable that globalization playing an immense role to develop cultures in each country in the world, particularly make a culture become famous in foreign country. It tends to help to promote the local culture in widespread area. In addition, people might be effortless to studying culture each other due to the advance of communication transport, with devices now able to communicate long distance. Culture also can improve tolerance and unity between person and others. Evidence of this can be seen with harmony of religious community life in the world and increasing of respect's values such pluralism matter.

However, the effect of presence globalization has not all been positive. In my notion for future life or long-terms impact, it seems imbalance between globalization and culture. Take example to Betawi traditional culture in Indonesia which is well known Ondel-ondel toys. In my opinion Ondel-ondel is impressive culture of society who living in Jakarta. Because of predominantly people adopt modern culture from a certain country it cannot be seen more often these days. As a result people tend to go with the stream and it is definitely causes them neglected their own cultures. There is no doubt that people had less nationalism, respects, and loss their identity.

To sum up, despite the fact that there are benefits to the culture regards for adopting the globalization, I believe that these solely help the culture become more popular in other countries. It is unlikely that easy to getting loose from this situation, so folks should be smart and it is my hope if they want to follow a trend which is part of the globalization.

Writing Feedback / Initial teacher training qualifications of students who living in the UK between 2005/6 and 2006/7 [2]

The table illustrates the proportion of initial teacher training qualifications of students who living in the UK between 2005/6 and 2006/7. Overall, it can be seen that in the exception of PGCE, all of ITT figures increased sharply in the last year.

In 2005/6, total teaching qualifications obtained stood at 31.390 with proportion 23.865 for female and 8.065 for male. Next year, while the total of this figure grow slightly by 15, there was a slightly increased of the number of male at around 7.610 while female reached a peak to 24.335. On the other hand, total of PGCE fell gradually from 24.405 in 2005/6 to 23.900 in 2006/7. This case followed by female and male at around 1.5 % by male.

Furthermore, Bed and other degrees showed low percentage of ITT qualification was that approximately 14.5% male. Total of this group rose steadily by 480 in 2006/7, with proportion 6.920 for female and 1125 for male.

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Writing Feedback / World Wide Web and TV lead to immense influence of people lives then parliamentarians [3]

Recent research has shown that media like the Internet and TV have a greater influence over people's lives than politicians.

Which do you consider to be the greater influence?

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Result of survey these days has explained that public media such the World Wide Web and TV lead to immense influence of folk lives then parliamentarians. I firmly agree with the former idea than the latter one. Firstly, this essay will discuss how the media influence people activities and secondly limited information provided by politicians.

It is undoubtedly that mass media playing a huge role around the people lives. This is because media like the internet and television are able to provide various kinds of information and knowledge include social news, economy even political conditions in each country. In addition, it also can extend lots of update news to society which facilitates them to access by mobile phone. Public media nowadays is used celebrities or famous persons to advertise products, which are more influential among the communities. There are proofs that these successful to persuade people.

Furthermore, the government officials are people who have competence in administration sector of a country and they are solely render particular information like public administration conditions even they beguile the society regards on status of a country. In my notion is that because they have wealth and power to manipulate people's actions. Take example in Bangladesh, in 2007 almost two thousand politicians did not nominated in general election retired from political parties due to people were not trusted them. It proves that inhabitants be lost to what the politicians informed. So, this case can lead to political discrepancy.

To sum up, the communities are no longer possible to put credence to government officials who are more often manipulate information and exploit their authority. However, I strongly believe that mass media have enormous impact to persuade people lives.

Writing Feedback / There are three treatments to purify water: dam, waste and storm water [2]

The diagram illustrates the ways to reused rainwater. Overall, it can be seen that there are three treatments to purifying water these are dam water, wastewater and storm water. Predominantly of water is used to household purposes.

To begin with, rain water from the sky is collected in dam. After this, water is flowed to water treatment plant for filtering. Then, water already to be used for daily activity like for drinking water. For rainwater which fall on house's roof is particular drip cup is accommodated before water sent into home.

Before waste water from house recycled and reused again, it has to pass through wastewater treatment. In this step, liquid waste is treated the excess of water and then channel it to the lake. After that, result of the isolation leave water for purifying again and it is used again for household needs. Storm water treatment is a drainage canal to efflorescent to the river.

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Writing Feedback / How that enormous increase in flights around the world over recent years affects us? [2]

The world has seen an enormous increase in flights for leisure, business and commercial purposes around the world over recent years.

what do you think are the main advantages and disadvantages of such flights?

do you think flights should be taxed more?

In the twentieth century, the global has shown a rise significantly in aviation services for various kinds of people lives like holiday, business and trade purposes in around the world. I deeply agree with this statement related to increasing level of using airplane. However, while flights have great profits for supporting people's requirements, there are many drawbacks of it according to welfare, cost, and even pollution.

To begin with, present of aircraft services have contributed to the inhabitant's lives more dynamic and efficient. Utilizing the airplane has allowed businesses and meets up with other colleagues or family members to easily cross over territorial boundary lines. For instance, in the last two decades the aviation corporation in Singapore reveals that predominantly people there using airplane for traveling that is approximately seventy percent. Consequently, demand of flights is becoming more advances in which people tend to shift consider the aircraft is primary transport to assist their daily activities.

However, beside that there are several advantages of flights. First of all, airplane are still become one of dangerous transportation due to increasing rate of flight accidents in the world annually which cause hundreds of people die. Secondly, burning fossil fuel of plane like avtur conclude it become the most pricey transportation and it also can lead to serious pollution in air which impact to dilute the ozone layers. Also, lack of facilities for supporting flights is not adequate and become an obstacle like aerodrome nowadays is still unavailable in rural areas.

In conclusion, presence of aviation conveyance has rendered some advantages for society regards on save time and effectiveness matters. But, in my notion, the airplane can cause serious problem such threatening accidents and damaging of environment.

Writing Feedback / Shopping's responses of society in the capital city of Auckland [4]

The table and pie chart illustrate the proportion of new shopping's responses of society in the capital city of Auckland based on result of research. Overall, it can be see that females experience very satisfied in shops and restaurant rather than males. in another case, both of them is predominantly feel satisfied in design sector.

The percentage of males who feel very satisfied in shops at around 17 %. Compare with females that depict twice of males proportion. While mainly of men satisfied and abstained than female in this side, both indicate an equal dissatisfied percentage at 20 %.In restaurants field, although they have similar number on very satisfied and no comment, men reveal a huge number of satisfied than female at 55% and 35 respectively. Moreover, women refer fourfold dissatisfied of the percentage of men.

turning to design, both of sexes think satisfied is 62 % and 17 % very satisfied of total proportion. These figures feel 11 % on dissatisfied; likewise, no comment reaction 10 %

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Writing Feedback / The problem is whether the printed media will disappear because of the e-books? [4]

With recent developments in technology like e-books, some people feel that printed media like books, newspapers, and magazines will soon be a thing of the past.

Others feel that these forms of media will never disappear.

what is your opinion?

No body doubts that the expansion of technology like e-books is popular currently. Most of people indicate that the presence of it leads to disappear the printed media such as books, newspapers, and magazines. However, others believe that these types of media will be still exist. I firmly agree with the former idea rather than the latter one. This essay will discuss how the printed media vanishes in around the society and why the online media will become famous.

To begin with, printed media like books, newspapers, and magazines become uninteresting subjects for society in recent years due to efficiency to provide information. This is because, as a whole, lots of people move to electronic media. Take example what happened in USA is. In 2010, Committee of Concerned Journalistics (CCJ) has released that approximately 65 percent of Americans stopped to subscribe newspapers and magazines. Consequently, more than 300.000 printed media out of their business and move to release news by these type of media.

On the other hand, online media like e-books experiences a great progress and still exist nowadays. There are several factors related to this why its cases occurred. Firstly, it is one of media which is extremely easy to access, whenever and wherever the people can do it like using smartphone. In addition, electronic media can provide a lot of update information such the latest incident occurred in the world. Also, these kinds of media are predominantly free to access or read, compare with printed media which is usually need to pay.

To sum up, printed media like newspapers, books, and magazines can fade and will become dispensable things in modern era linked to topicality and speed matters of the news. I strongly believe that online media will be notoriously and my prediction is the last daily reader will disappear in 2043.

Writing Feedback / Using an automatic photo booth [3]

The picture depicts the description tools to using an automatic photo booth. Overall, it can bee seen that it consists with two main sides that are indoor and outdoor. In any case, this machine is solely produce 1 large format or 4 passport-sized images.

With regards to inside the box, there is an adjustable chair where people can shit before taking pictures. This side is completed with mirror and eye level, people who wan to using it should see and focus to eye level. After three seconds the light single directly will appear. Before photos are took, they have to close the curtain for obtain good quality photographs.

Turning to outside, this photo box is only available to print certain format like 1 large format or 4 passport-sized images. And these could be color or black and white types. In above part of this side, there is a square hole where the image result printed. This process is usually spend time a minute.

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Writing Feedback / The main reasons and several ways to tackle the inequality between developed and developing country [2]

The inequality between rich and poor nations is now wider than it has ever been before.

What do you think are the main causes of this difference
and what do you think can be done to reduce the gap?

In recent years, most of the people focus on issues related to the wide gap between rich and poor countries. There are many notions have been given around this problem. But, it still seems to be hardness to tackle. This essay will discuss the main causes why this issue is occurred particularly education and economic sectors and several measurements to solve it like improving the education system and encourage the developed country to help the developing country.

Nobody can doubt that in the education quality of inhabitants in the poor country particularly in rural areas usually have lower level rather than in the wealthy country such numbers of illiterate people which cause a lot of them become unemployment. In addition, monopolization in trade and economy sectors of developed nations can threaten the developing nations and it can lead to economic crises. And even is able to bring negative impacts to more hard circumstances. Also, lots of natural disasters usually occur in poor countries such us earthquakes, tsunamis, and landslides. These cases impact with killed thousands of people and destroyed a huge number of houses, buildings, and infrastructures. So, the government is forced to invest a lot of money for rebuilding.

Apart from these matters, there are several actions to solve these problems. It is clear that the education system should be improved due to it is the main cause many people become unemployment such developing school facilities. Not only this, the world organization related to the economic sector has the obligation to make policies related to this for reducing the deceitfulness in world trading. in my view, the rich country advisable help the developing country with supporting prosperity and invest money.

To conclude, there are some reasons why dissimilarity between wealthy and poor countries has existed these days that are education, economic crisis, and disaster. However, the collaboration with other sides and involving developed country is needed to deal with this case.

Writing Feedback / Schools should focus on the subjects which support of student's goals in the future [3]

Schools should only offer subjects that are beneficial to students' future career success. Other subjects, such as music and sports, are not important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The people's goals depend on what they offer today. Most of the people think that schools should focus on the subjects which support of student's goal in the future and do not pay attention to secondary subjects like sports and music. It is agreed that the school's offer to teach subjects that student's need for their career is the most significant due to the fact that this case can help them reach their goals. On the other hand, while some people say that others subjects are not strongly useful for student's career, like sports and music are able to make people keep fit and develop their talents related to job opportunities.

It is more significant that schools must solely provide the subject that could make students success in their careers. This is because paying more attention to their primary subject tend to make them study more and more related to it. A 2007 Harvard annual survey revealed that 75% pilots in Paris, France success in their job as such they only focus on study aviation science in the college. Recognize of specific subjects is very helpful to make students become an expert in their major. Consequently, it is definitely they are professional workers.

Despite this case above, other subjects like sports and music should not be neglected or unnecessary to learned. To be part and partial, other subjects are same essential. Sports subject can teach students about healthy science like how to keeping fit their body everyday and there is a doubt that body healthily is one of the important requirements to find a better job. For music subject, some actors and actresses should have music talents. It is certain that this subject is essential for their career to become a famous artist.

To sum up, although some people argue that students solely learn their primary subjects is the best way to make students success of their career in the future, i firmly believe that no subjects should be considered as not important. In my notion, people should study subjects as much as possible whatever they wish.

Scholarship / Global sales in five different cell phone brands from 2009 to 2013 [NEW]

A comparison of the number of sales in five different cell phone brands in the world between 2009 and 2013, a 4-year period is illustrated by bar chart. Overall, there was a significant increase in the proportion of Samsung mobile phone sales over the question time while Nokia's buyers showed reverse. In any case, the number of people who bought Apple phones witnessed a grew sharply over the period.

In 2009, the Nokia was the most popular mobile phone in the world with 450 million users, and although it was still the highest sale, by the end of period it had fallen to 250 million. Initially, Samsung sales experienced a gradual increase from 230 million in 2009 to 330 in 2011. In the next two years, this figure reached a peak to 450 million, which was the highest sale of all cell phone brands.

The number of people belonged to LG cell phone was 120 million at the beginning of the period. However, over the following four years, the proportion of these users fell steadily to 80 million. While the customers of Apple mobile phone stood only at 30 million in 2009, the number of units which have been sold rose steadily to 150 for the remainder of the period. Furthermore, the proportion of ZTE cell phone was seen remained virtually unchanged over the time frame.

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Scholarship / The Proportion of overseas students graduated from universities in different Canadian provinces [3]

A comparison of the number of the proportion alter in the number of overseas students graduated from universities in eight different Canadian provinces from 2001 to 2006, a five-year period, is illustrated by the bar chart. Overall, the highest number of international students graduated was in New Brunswick. In any case, while the trends for international students graduated was dominated in 2006 for all provinces, Alberta shows a reverse.

Predominant the graduate students from foreign countries had experienced a great proportion in 2006 than in 2001. The difference was far marked, with 11.5% in 2006 and just 7% in 2001 for New Brunswick. Next, Nova Scotia and British Columbia had an equal percentage in the number of international students graduated, representing one in ten in the final period and virtually one in twenty in the beginning. Meanwhile, between 2001 and 2006, this figure witnessed at 6% and 8% respectively.

A more detailed look at the graph depicts that the overall proportion was not always dominated in 2006. Alberta province revealed the percentage of international students graduated in 2001 has a larger proportion than it was in 2006, with 6% and 4.3%. However, the three other provinces, Monitoba, Ontario, New Foundland and Labrador showed the lowest proportion of the number of overseas students graduated, at approximately 3% in 2001 and 7% in 2006.

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Writing Feedback / Technology has changed the way people work [2]

Information technology enables many people to their work outside their workplace (e.g. at home, when travelling, etc.)
Do the benefits of this mobility outweigh the advantages?

Technology has changed the way people work. In the modern era, it makes possible some people to work outside their office and encourage them to do their work at home or when they are travelling. It is agreed that technology brings threefold merits rather than demerits people can save time or money, raise job satisfaction and connect with workers in different countries. However, technology leads to unhealthy lifestyle among workers.

A convincing argument can be made that information technology is not only playing a pivotal role the way people doing their job, but can also save time and money of the employees. Predominant people face traffic congestion when they want to attend at their workplace. It is definitely that it makes them spend a lot of time on the road and burning a huge amount of fuel, like gasoline.

Nowadays, many people work part-time or have flexible working hours and technology have allowed people to work from home or in their leisure time. As a result, some workers witness a good work or life balance which can raise job satisfaction. People who work in international business have to read hundreds of corporate activities email or messages every day, it means that technology can connect with labours in different countries in many parts of the world.

Apart from this, people who work in their home tend to experience the sedentary lifestyle. They are more likely to spend their time sitting in front of the computer monitor or smartphones rather than going out and taking regular exercise. Consequently, they are vulnerable to become obesity sufferer and cardiovascular disease risk. A 2013 British study showed that after 90 minutes of sitting your metabolism shuts down and the body's cells become less responsive to insulin and muscles release lower levels of the enzyme which burn cholesterol.

In conclusion, it is believed that information technology plays a significant role to assist people work that make it possible to be done without attending in their office. There are some advantages and disadvantages related to this matter.

Writing Feedback / Americans spending on diffrend kinds of phone services from in a ten-year period [3]

A comparison of the annual amount of Americans spending on mobile and mobile phone services from 2001 to 2010, a ten-year period is illustrated in the line chart. Overall, it can be seen that people were more likely to spend money on residential phone services rather than on mobile phone services at the beginning. However, these figures showed a reverse in the last period.

In 2001, the highest expenditure was US consumers, which spent an average of virtually $700 on residential phone services, compared to cell phone services, at solely $200. Over the following five years, this figure has plummeted by $200. Contrastingly, expenditure on mobile services has increased by around $300.

In 2006, the average American's spending on both figures was equal, at nearly $500. On the other hand, by 2010, expenditure on mobile phones exceeded the number of residential services and reached a peak to $700, while spending on residential services had fallen to just $400 over the time frame.

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