April April
Aug 31, 2012
Writing Feedback / 'the progress of the nation' - spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding [3]
performing the same things repeatedly --- you just used the exact same phrase in the intro.
''the same set of events repeatedly. Therefore, people who perform the same things'' and ''everyone perform the same things repeatedly'' --- again with these phrases. You could write: ''carrying out similar tasks again and again''
the chance of doing mistakes --- the chance of MAKING mistakes
performing the same things repeatedly --- you just used the exact same phrase in the intro.
''the same set of events repeatedly. Therefore, people who perform the same things'' and ''everyone perform the same things repeatedly'' --- again with these phrases. You could write: ''carrying out similar tasks again and again''
the chance of doing mistakes --- the chance of MAKING mistakes