eddies [Contributor]
Sep 22, 2015
Writing Feedback / Task 1 - Total words spoken to child compare with Children's total Vocabulary size [4]
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The two line graphs show the relationship in the numbers of words spoken and vocabularies in use that children could produce. As it can be seen, frequency range of talking affects language acquisition. In any case, children with family with higher-talking frequency are more likely to talk more and have more vocabularies in use.
??? the sentence sounds a bit clumsy. Try this: The number of words children produce when they speak...
Let me help you polish the first paragraph.
The two line graphs show the relationship in the numbers of words spoken and vocabularies in use that children could produce. As it can be seen, frequency range of talking affects language acquisition. In any case, children with family with higher-talking frequency are more likely to talk more and have more vocabularies in use.
the number of words children
??? the sentence sounds a bit clumsy. Try this: The number of words children produce when they speak...