justivy03
Apr 17, 2015
Writing Feedback / Learning Foreign Language. Better Soon or Later? [4]
- Learning foreign language is a common trend in this (globalized - DELETE) world. As such, some people (argue - DELETE AND USE A MUCH POSITIVE WORD, CONSIDER,"believe")
- should be given for (TO) children in their school(s - DELETE) at earliest grades to help them to be accustomed to speak and to understand international language.
- The children children have more brain power so they can learn subject quickly by immitating.(imitating)
- On the other hand, some people believe that this trend causes shock to children since they found difference between their mother tounge.(TONGUE)
- Take English for example, children may confuse to say word 'sun' as the pronounciation(PRONUNCIATION) is different from it's spelling.
- they live in (A) globalized world.
- Therefore it is imperative fo(TO) school to provide foreign language lessons in the earliest grades.
Hi Stacy, I would suggest turning the spell check on your computer before writing an article or essay so you have a guide on spelling, also mind your grammar and as always PROOF READ your work before submitting it, and yes, before I go, avoid using such negative connotation of ideas, e.g.,argue, the word can be replaced with much better word like, "I believe", this one helps send your message and the positivity of your article.
Cheers!!!
- Learning foreign language is a common trend in this (globalized - DELETE) world. As such, some people (argue - DELETE AND USE A MUCH POSITIVE WORD, CONSIDER,"believe")
- should be given for (TO) children in their school(s - DELETE) at earliest grades to help them to be accustomed to speak and to understand international language.
- The children children have more brain power so they can learn subject quickly by immitating.(imitating)
- On the other hand, some people believe that this trend causes shock to children since they found difference between their mother tounge.(TONGUE)
- Take English for example, children may confuse to say word 'sun' as the pronounciation(PRONUNCIATION) is different from it's spelling.
- they live in (A) globalized world.
- Therefore it is imperative fo(TO) school to provide foreign language lessons in the earliest grades.
Hi Stacy, I would suggest turning the spell check on your computer before writing an article or essay so you have a guide on spelling, also mind your grammar and as always PROOF READ your work before submitting it, and yes, before I go, avoid using such negative connotation of ideas, e.g.,argue, the word can be replaced with much better word like, "I believe", this one helps send your message and the positivity of your article.
Cheers!!!