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Cambridge 10 Writing Task 3. Practice for my IELTS Exam - Working British students

2 - The writer must reference that there are 2 images provided for the comparison. That is because the information...

Writing Feedbackluthfiyahs - Feb 28, 2022Holt - Feb 28, 2022
My paintings and sharing. An attempt to think or do things differently

3 - i just wanna a real experience...

Scholarshipladybird123 - Feb 27, 2022ladybird123 - Feb 28, 2022
People are surrounded by marketing and commercial activities. Different implications of advertising

2 - The problem with this response isthat it does notmeet the task accuracy scoring requirementas it applies to the...

Writing Feedbackledinhphong - Feb 27, 2022Holt - Feb 28, 2022
IELTS TASK1. The plans show the change of a small theater in 2010 and 2012.

3 - Cutting-edge is an adjective, so you cannot stop your sentence like that. Additionally, "cutting-edge" sounds belonging to a personal...

Writing FeedbackAlan24 - Feb 27, 2022aanh1009 - Feb 28, 2022
Private entities nowadays seem to play a more prominent role in scientific activities

3 - @Holt thank you so muchhhh for your helpful comments. I will try my best to improve my writing skills...

Writing Feedbacknmuht - Feb 26, 2022nmuht - Feb 28, 2022
GKS-G Personal Statements Clinical Psychology ; University Track to Yonsei University

3 - I think you need more organization within your letter. Try to connect every paragraph with the predecessor in order...

Scholarshipaisy12 - Feb 26, 2022Julyffff - Mar 1, 2022
GKS Personal Statement/ Master's Degree in Counseling Psychology

4 - maybe you can focus more on why you choose that major and why in korea, coz as i understood...

Scholarshipkappk - Feb 25, 2022slyny - Mar 1, 2022
About my stay in Sweden - SI Scholarship letter of motivation

3 - Thank you very much for your comment, I will adjust the test accordingly!...

ScholarshipXorelle - Feb 25, 2022Xorelle - Feb 25, 2022
NTU SCHOLARSHIP Values and beliefs you hold strongly. How you have demonstrated these.

2 - There is no personal insight in this response. These are mere observations provided as generalized references to the question....

ScholarshipGaurikkaa - Feb 25, 2022Holt - Feb 25, 2022
Writing task 1 (Chile's demographic from 1975 to 2035, categorized by age)

2 - An incorrect word equivalent usage is present for the word "between' from the original presentation. The alternate words...

Writing Feedbackanhlog - Feb 25, 2022Holt - Feb 25, 2022
Writing task 1 IELTS The charts below show the percentages of the water used in different sectors

2 - In terms of synonyms, the writer chose the wrong word equivalent for the chart. A chart is...

Writing FeedbackOscarl - Feb 25, 2022Holt - Feb 25, 2022
The monthly visitors of Tabard Tower Theme Park - Learning IETLS

2 - I cannot say that this is a reliable description of the provided image since the writer did not...

Writing FeedbackNissaaa - Feb 25, 2022Holt - Feb 25, 2022
Study plan - Fashion, Textile or Designer GKS - 2023

4 - @rafaellarodri I think you don't need to write year-to-year plans in point form, write year-by-year plans in paragraphs form....

Scholarshiprafaellarodri - Feb 23, 2022milaniawati - Mar 4, 2022
A Bridge Between Two Countries - Global Korea Scholarship - Personal Statement

2 - This is a truly personal statement that has disregarded the graduate focus of the applicant. It is more about...

Scholarshipaspb2022 - Feb 23, 2022Holt - Feb 23, 2022
This is a Poem I wrote. For lovers of literature; you can check it out - or critique it.

5 - It is actually easy to understand the first paragraph but then you changed the perspective which confused me a...

Poetryfelixtobi - Feb 23, 2022imduonggg - Mar 7, 2022
WRITING TASK 2 : Shopping malls too much - Agree/Disagree

2 - Going shopping and spending their free time at the shopping mall are 2 different activities. The writer was...

Writing Feedbackpglphamgialinh - Feb 23, 2022Holt - Feb 23, 2022
About Thomas alve Edison life and about his work and how it became famous and about Jefferson

2 - Kindly review the statement for capitalization errors. The writer has not provided capitalized words as required when presenting nouns...

Writing Feedbacknguyenthisuong - Feb 23, 2022Holt - Feb 23, 2022
MOTIVATION LETTER FOR SUSTAINABLE FOOD SYSTEM MASTER PROGRAMME AT SLU (SWEDEN)

2 - Disposable sentence. It does nothing to help the essay move forward. Since the prompt already indicates everything the...

Lettersnhidinh2998 - Feb 23, 2022Holt - Feb 23, 2022
task 2 Ielts:In many countries around the world, life expectancy is increasing.

2 - The prompt restatement + personal opinion paragraph cannot receive a passing score. The examiner will be highly confused by...

Writing Feedbackziht - Feb 23, 2022Holt - Feb 23, 2022
Columbia GS - Personal Essay - From off-the-grid to Computer Science

2 - Seeing as how most children, specially those who are underage, spend more time with their mothers, you may...

Undergraduatelilmilnil - Feb 22, 2022Holt - Feb 23, 2022
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - Discuss - Living in big cities

2 - While you can opt to repeat the writing instructions at the end of the paragraph, that will not...

Writing Feedbacknotaweirdo - Feb 22, 2022Holt - Feb 23, 2022
Health workers - knowledge gained from your master studies to contribute to your home

3 - @Holt Thank you very much for going through the work. I will put in the necessary recommendations. Thank you....

ScholarshipAlh - Feb 22, 2022Alh - Feb 24, 2022
My time in Sweden - Motivation Letter For SI scholarship

3 - Hey Holt Thanks for your feedback. That was my mistake when I forgot to remove the first sentence. That...

Lettersnghiabui - Feb 22, 2022nghiabui - Feb 22, 2022
[IELTS TASK 1] The diagram shows how a wave-energy machine is designed and where it can be located

5 - I think you should have at least two paragraph in body to elaborate your idea. Moreover, you should use...

Writing Feedbackthugianggg - Feb 21, 2022phammai2309 - Mar 3, 2022
Scholarship Motivation Letter - Lund University, Sweden 2022

2 - This is a waste of space in your motivational letter. Sure the words of Sherly Sandberg were inspirational...

Lettersserra_biels - Feb 21, 2022Holt - Feb 22, 2022
Gender gap in the numerous occupations in today's society

2 - This is the writer's personal opinion regarding the given topic. A clear disagreement with the given points. This...

Writing Feedbackdinhdaiviet - Feb 21, 2022Holt - Feb 21, 2022
Global negotiation, business - goal of study and study plan for Korean university application

2 - The lack of proper gramamr usage on the part of the writer tends to create a confusing thesis presentation....

Graduatemnbvcxz0303 - Feb 20, 2022Holt - Feb 21, 2022
Council donations to book clubs, Number of book club members - Writing task1

4 - @nghiabui Thank for your comment, actually i just learned English writing so i am not very good at it...

Writing Feedbacknguyentin1763 - Feb 20, 2022nguyentin1763 - Feb 22, 2022
Don't Throw That Away - Recycle It! - Draft Research Paper

2 - This is more of a sub topic title than a subject sentence in this case. Have you considered...

Research PapersRaiderRob - Feb 19, 2022Holt - Feb 20, 2022
Motivation Letter for Scholarship admission in Sweden - The environmental master's programs

2 - Why at this institute? How does the knowledge you will gain translate into a benefit for the institute?...

Lettersansurya - Feb 19, 2022Holt - Feb 19, 2022
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