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Subject Objective Aminef, Teaching English and Other Languages

2 - There is actually nothing unique about the subject objective of the applicant. The motivation (subject objective) is one among...

Graduateawenaries04 - Jan 24, 2022Holt - Jan 25, 2022
An article: The best pets

3 - I think you should use more complex structures instead of just using simple ones...

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Motivation letter for applying to master in renewable energy in the marine environment program

2 - Since you are applying to the program with a handicap, the lack of at least 2 years relevant work...

Lettersokurus - Jan 23, 2022Holt - Jan 24, 2022
The figures illustrate the roads though which people can reach to the City Hospital in 2007 & 2010

2 - For clarity purposes, you must indicate the number of images and also, indicate if there is an image...

Writing Feedbackhellogorkha - Jan 23, 2022Holt - Jan 24, 2022
Erasmus - Track F Glocal - green consulting

3 - Thank you so much for your advices and efforts to put all together. Really appreciated it!...

LettersJulyffff - Jan 23, 2022Julyffff - Jan 30, 2022
Climate change is a big environmental problem that has become critical in last couple of decades

3 - Here is my opinion on your essay. I hope you consider all of them. First, the first sentence of...

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CBEST essay writing - help with writing about the topic worst class you ever taken

2 - The writer shows an understanding of the central topic. The discussion itself is applicable although sentence structuring problems can...

Writing Feedbacknadziuba - Jan 23, 2022Holt - Jan 23, 2022
In the modern era, a majority of work can be done either by men or women

2 - The frist 2 sentences of the prompt restatement are contradicting each other. The writer claimes that these days there...

Writing Feedbackdnhtrntnh - Jan 22, 2022Holt - Jan 23, 2022
Write an email for Jude about Saturday trip

2 - Unfortunately, the writer only wrote 89 words for a letter that must contain at least 150 words. This will...

LettersButterTrieu - Jan 22, 2022Holt - Jan 22, 2022
Schools should focus on teaching students academic subjects but sports and music are also necessary

2 - The personal opinion of the writer should not be discussed in the first paragraph and is not considered...

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What should a university offer? The main role of higher education.

2 - This is an empty response that does not offer an actual degree of agreement with the previous topic....

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Personal Statement - Business Administration undergraduate programme at NUS

3 - @Holt I'm trying my best to improve the PS, thank you so much for your advice!...

Undergraduatekate8524 - Jan 21, 2022kate8524 - Jan 22, 2022
Some people believe that capital punishment should not be used. Others, however, argue that it...

2 - Scoring is done privately at this forum. We do not use automated scoring systems for your essays. These essays...

Writing Feedbackgiakhang - Jan 21, 2022Holt - Jan 21, 2022
[WRITING TASK 2] Nowadays people use bicycles less as a form of transport.

3 - The writer should meet the requirement exactly by replacing the first sentence with repeating the original presentation, the personal...

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Motivation letter for the Erasmus Mundus Master in Marine and Maritime Intelligent robotics program

3 - @Holt Thank's for your feedback. so except the fact that I didn't emphasize about my interest in maritime technology,...

Letterssofiane - Jan 20, 2022sofiane - Jan 21, 2022
The percentage of people in three countries who used the Internet over the course of 10 years

2 - The summary overview as provided will be considered a run on sentence, receiving a low TA and GRA score...

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Evaluation of claims that hosting international sports event is good for the country

2 - Avoid presenting your personal opinion right off the bat. It is important that you do not add any...

Writing Feedbacknhitranthuy - Jan 20, 2022Holt - Jan 21, 2022
SOP for mathematical finance - the master's level at Universiti Teknologi Brunei (UTB)

2 - To create an effective statement of purpose, the applicant must create a convincing academic and career driven reason for...

GraduateEmmydon - Jan 20, 2022Holt - Jan 20, 2022
Beliefs you hold strongly to. I'm determined to dedicate myself to the academic rigours of STEM

2 - The response that the student has created does not meet the prompt requirements at all. The essay that was...

Scholarshipsmolfish - Jan 19, 2022Holt - Jan 20, 2022
The impact of data science on Oil and Gas Industry (a PTDF personal statement)

3 - @Holt Thank you for the review, working on a new draft with the corrections in mind...

UndergraduateTarhywoe - Jan 19, 2022Tarhywoe - Jan 21, 2022
Essay about social responsibility in business -

2 - Excellent work on the simple prompt restatement + personal opinion presentation. There is a clear understanding of the topic...

Writing Feedbacktrucjimi - Jan 19, 2022Holt - Jan 20, 2022
Help Writing Creative Essays Under Pressure

3 - I get what you are trying to ask and want to consider as a solution but you must not...

Essaysblueberrydish - Jan 19, 2022Jonathan123 - Jan 28, 2022
The line chart presents changes in the proportion of birth and death rates in NZ from 1901 to 2101

2 - Since this is a future projection, it should not be referred as a possibility. The graph shows a...

Writing Feedbackhuyenanhdoan - Jan 19, 2022Holt - Jan 19, 2022
Motivation Letter for Imaging and Lighting in Extended Reality Programme (Erasmus Mundus)

2 - Review the requirements of the motivation letter. Compare it to what you have written. Your motivational letter does not...

Lettersbushranajeeb - Jan 19, 2022Holt - Jan 19, 2022
Which essay writing service provider is purely for students?

3 - @egreenee1111 since you're here at Essay Forum, I believe this is the best you can get. Holt and the...

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Experience and soft skills are an indispensable part, which you can only get when you work part-time

2 - I am not sure about what the point of this writing exercise is. Was it for a creative writing...

Writing Feedbackthuong264 - Jan 19, 2022Holt - Jan 19, 2022
The line graph compares the percentage of Internet users in three North America countries

3 - In the first paragraph, I think it is more grammatically correct to use "a 10-year period" rather "a 10...

Writing FeedbackMayBRight - Jan 18, 2022nhmt - Jan 19, 2022
Constructive criticism from teachers helps students learn, as well as develop positive self-esteem

3 - Thank you so much for your feedback. I really appreciate it. From what I have seen, you told me...

Writing Feedbacknhmt - Jan 18, 2022nhmt - Jan 19, 2022
Development Economics - Student Exchange Motivation Letter

4 - The reason why you wish to become a participant in the program is not convincing. The reason used is...

Lettersalyssa2036 - Jan 18, 2022Holt - Jan 18, 2022
Write a letter, offering practical advice and reassuring students that they do not need to worry

2 - Since this is a letter to a fellow student, you can take a less formal tone in response....

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