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IELTS Task 2 - Why teenagers prefer online socializing to direct communication.

2 - This discussion point is rather confusing. This phrase in particular, refers to an I Mac or I Phone...

Writing Feedbackchidinh - Oct 22, 2021Holt - Oct 23, 2021
How Covid-19 have negative impact on my 12th marks

3 - Thank you Mr. Holt, I changed it a little bit ,pl. comment There was anxiety in the environment,...

Writing Feedbackawdheshp - Oct 22, 2021awdheshp - Nov 8, 2021
Essay on whether 9th graders should be able to test out of high school

2 - Each person would respond to the prompts differently. You have provided pretty logical responses to the early questions at...

Writing Feedbacksmnoelke - Oct 22, 2021Holt - Oct 23, 2021
Essay about ielts writing task 2 _ buildings/houses history topic

2 - The focus of the writer is on the interest of architectural buffs in homes and buildings. This does not...

Writing Feedbackuyenhuynh - Oct 22, 2021Holt - Oct 23, 2021
IELTS TASK 2: Too young children (e.g primary school student) should not study online. Discuss

3 - @Nguyenducvinh23 You should pay more attention to your word count. You should expand it by adding at least one...

Writing FeedbackNguyenducvinh23 - Oct 22, 2021david2004 - Oct 25, 2021
IELTS TASK 1 - "Line graph about recruitment of teacher"

5 - In your summary, you need to overview two figures not one...

Writing Feedbackthaonhilak - Oct 21, 2021hieuvo218 - Oct 26, 2021
Playing squash - UBC Personal profile - WHAT ARE U PROUD OF AND WHY?

2 - The essay is too busy in terms of telling the reviewer who you are and what you are proud...

Undergraduatehypermonk - Oct 21, 2021Holt - Oct 23, 2021
IELTS - WRITING TASK 2 - hosting an international sports event is good or bad for the country

2 - There is no need to repeat the discussion directions. You have already shown the examiner what the instructions...

Writing Feedbackkieuthu - Oct 21, 2021Holt - Oct 22, 2021
Computer Science, Biology, and Psychology - Why Northwestern? for ED

2 - Unnecessary references.The current discussion is casually relaxed as it is. Don't overdo it. Stay mindful of...

UndergraduateBackwardsPi - Oct 20, 2021Holt - Oct 21, 2021
World-class education in South Korea. GKS Personal statement for Masters' in Accounting

2 - There is no motivation indicated for this plan. Why couldn't you ecollina master's course in your country instead...

ScholarshipJoyria - Oct 20, 2021Holt - Oct 21, 2021
Computers can translate all languages, learning a foreign language is a waste of time(writing part2)

2 - The reference synonym for "children" was not indicated in the restatement. This led to an incorrect interpretation of...

Writing Feedbackvngcmai - Oct 20, 2021Holt - Oct 21, 2021
What factors define a person? His social position, as well as the level of his wealth

2 - I understand this sentiment. However, the strength of this opinion is not indicated using an emotional measurement. Therefore,...

Writing FeedbackHaiDuong98 - Oct 20, 2021Holt - Oct 21, 2021
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - ADVERTISING STRATEGIES TO SALE INCREASE

2 - The discussion presentation meets all of the required prompt points. It has accurately presented a restatement and, a clear...

Writing Feedbackmaiphuongcute - Oct 20, 2021Holt - Oct 21, 2021
Chevening Leadership Essay working in the state-owned electricity company

2 - This is an essay based on failed leadership. Why are you proud of leading a problematic, failing, and criminal...

Scholarshiptheoutomo - Oct 20, 2021Holt - Oct 23, 2021
My college essay - Describe the most important thing in my life and explain why - My persistence

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your help, but can you tell me if my essay was on-point or...

Undergraduatedavid2004 - Oct 20, 2021david2004 - Oct 20, 2021
Essay about the reasons why parents spend less free time with children and the matter's influence.

2 - You are over presenting reasons without fully developing your explanations. It would be in your best interest to...

Essayssondeptrai - Oct 19, 2021Holt - Oct 20, 2021
In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent. Why do you

2 - The essay failed to provide a relevant example based on the knowledge and experience of the student. This is...

Writing Feedbackvietthang - Oct 19, 2021Holt - Oct 20, 2021
The world should have only one government rather than a national government for each country.

2 - This is an extremely well discussed opinion. In fact, it is so well discussed for the most part that...

Writing FeedbackAster Eragon - Oct 19, 2021Holt - Oct 20, 2021
Leadership - a process to guide, convince people to reach continuous improvement (Chevening essay)

NEW - Hello, I am Basile from Ivory Coast. Would like to submit my essay for Chevening end of this month....

ScholarshipCool762 - Oct 18, 2021 -
My 16-inch World. Personal Statement - HKUST - Undergraduate Program in Computer Science

2 - Do not confuse the personal statement with your autobiography. The reference to your parents are out of place and...

Undergraduatetechsavvy576 - Oct 18, 2021Holt - Oct 19, 2021
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - Government should increase the cost of fuel.

2 - The writer does not use the correct replacements for certain keywords in the essay. Specifically, he uses "argued" as...

Writing FeedbackNguyetNguyet - Oct 18, 2021Holt - Oct 19, 2021
My creativity - How would people in your community describe you, what are you proud of yourself

2 - There is no "I" reference in this essay. Disassociate yourself from the presentation. Use a 3rd person reference since...

Undergraduatedavid2004 - Oct 18, 2021Holt - Oct 19, 2021
People's way of living has been drastically changed, to recent advancements of technology

2 - The response is unrelated to the task. The focus is on not harm or good. The...

Writing Feedbackmth0911 - Oct 18, 2021Holt - Oct 19, 2021
Reflect paper about why u become nurse and what role of nurse resonate with u

2 - When considering that this is a personal statement explanation regarding the development of your interest in nursing, the essay...

Scholarshipnibaba - Oct 17, 2021Holt - Oct 19, 2021
Write the personal statement based on your lesson learned during an extra-academic activity

3 - this the question Please write the personal statement with a focus on what you learned from and felt during...

Scholarshipsoma22 - Oct 17, 2021soma22 - Oct 18, 2021
It is believed that society evolves faster if poeple will break the chain of past traditions

2 - This topic is used as a basic writing exercise by ESL students. It does not use an agree or...

Writing Feedbackj0NZICH - Oct 17, 2021Holt - Oct 23, 2021
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: the governments should avoid wasting money on funding arts

2 - Presenting your 2 reasons in support of your opinion will serve as a score boost in the preliminary...

Writing Feedbackhinmfm - Oct 17, 2021Holt - Oct 18, 2021
[IELTS TASK 1] MAP ABOUT ROAD ACCESS - give me some useful advice to improve my essay

2 - You misunderstood. The comparison does not cover successive years. These are 2 individual year changes. The reference comparison...

Writing Feedbackehetenandaiyo - Oct 17, 2021Holt - Oct 18, 2021
[IELTS TASK 1] MAP ABOUT A UNIVERSITY'S SPORTS CENTRE

7 - It's essential for you to divide the introduction and the overall paragraph into 2 single paragraphs....

Writing Feedbackehetenandaiyo - Oct 17, 2021littlewriter2005 - Oct 30, 2021
My gap year essay - Pandemic, work, struggles and social service.

2 - The essay is very wordy and definitely set out to impress. . The problem is, beyond bragging eights, you...

UndergraduateThe_Adam - Oct 17, 2021Holt - Oct 18, 2021
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