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The prompt: Many people leave their home country and go to other countries to live and work.

4 - I agree with what Ranee said, you wrote in the first sentence that "There could be several reasons...", so...

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''The forgotten war''. Personal Statement - INTERNATIONAL BUSINESS ADMINISTRATION - GKS 2022-U

2 - Using 2 quotes from different personalities to open your essay does not really help with your presentation. Most reviewers...

ScholarshipOH Marie - Sep 25, 2021Holt - Sep 27, 2021
Personal statement draft for GKS-U - motivations with which you apply for this program

NEW - GKS-U Personal Statement_ Business administration Hi, please help review this draft for my personal statement for GKS-U. I...

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The map with potential sites for two new shopping malls & major transportation features of a town

2 - Try to deliver a more precise review by using the 3-5 paragraph presentation. Using the compressed presentation method is...

Writing FeedbackZZack0501 - Sep 25, 2021Holt - Sep 27, 2021
Cite cases in which you thought/attemped in ways different from others & how it affected you.

3 - Thank you for the feedback, I'll start working on the points you mentioned....

Undergraduateashes1 - Sep 25, 2021ashes1 - Sep 26, 2021
Motivation letter for DAAD Scholarship at Munich Intellectual Property Law Center

3 - @Holt Thanks for the honest review. Really appreciate the inputs. I will have to thoroughly read the DAAD Scholarship...

Scholarshiphazelbas - Sep 25, 2021hazelbas - Sep 26, 2021
Ielts - data on the spendings of citizens in the UK on three categories of fast food in 1990

2 - Seperate the data presentation. Pizza was consumed ata different financial representation. Do not assume shared data. This error...

Writing FeedbackMinhhanh5120 - Sep 25, 2021Holt - Sep 26, 2021
Tell us about any hobby you are passionate about and why you think it's important. UWC essay.

4 - I started as a that hobby This gave me immense .. playing among with the best players I...

Undergraduateaanya_05 - Sep 25, 2021Huongmie - Oct 2, 2021
Building my networking through join into the community for Chevening application

3 - Focusing on sharing one or two detailed examples is much more impactful than listing lots of examples. Do not...

Scholarshipnitakajole - Sep 25, 2021Yanti - Oct 6, 2021
IELTS writing academic about divorce; spikes in break-ups and divorces

2 - The prompt restatement is acceptable. The opinion part though, is not represented at all since there are no direct...

Writing Feedbackngochanh123 - Sep 24, 2021Holt - Sep 26, 2021
"Behind every good business is a great accountant" Personal Statement GKS Accounting

2 - Delete this whole section. Wikipedia and other websites do not factor in as authoritative socuce of motivation for...

Scholarshipnadiahime - Sep 24, 2021Holt - Sep 26, 2021
'born with full of differences' - GKS Personal Statement - Undergraduate - Business Administration

2 - [quote=Minhtu]That is the reason...impacts on society.[/quote] This line does not relate to the previous presentation. It appears to be...

ScholarshipMinhtu - Sep 24, 2021Holt - Sep 26, 2021
Personal Statement for Postgraduate Study. University in United Kingdom (Development Studies)

2 - The personal statement should never be the biography of the student in any fform. Where a motivational statement is...

Graduateaktivasi - Sep 24, 2021Holt - Sep 26, 2021
Describe the context you've grown up in and how those factors influenced your life and growth.

2 - Avoid this type of overstatement. You are not running for political office. Offer relevant experiences as it relates...

Scholarshiphsstudent - Sep 24, 2021Holt - Sep 25, 2021
Given are the pie charts comparing two sexes in terms of the proportion of occupations in the UK

2 - Clarify that the pie charts for each gender is seperate. This confusing reference to the number of pie...

Writing Feedbackpapcaii - Sep 23, 2021Holt - Sep 25, 2021
Global Korea Scholarship undergraduate (for strategic communication)

NEW - GKS application essay Please contact us at essayforum.com@gmail.com for private services due to the extensive content requirements. EF...

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Writing task 2: University or college is the best route to a successful career

3 - Your essay is so cohesive and logical, but you should have divided the body of the essay into 2...

Writing Feedbackmegazetz - Sep 23, 2021skinnypeter - Sep 26, 2021
ESSAY ABOUT THE REASONS AND SOLUTIONS OF WATER POLLUTION

2 - This is not a direct response to the reason and solution question presented. A lack of discussion topic...

Writing FeedbackHarper - Sep 23, 2021Holt - Sep 24, 2021
Beside maximizing profit, all the companies should care about making benefits for society

3 - You should learn how to structure an essay like this. In the essay, you have to answer "...

Writing Feedbacknnbapbap - Sep 23, 2021skinnypeter - Sep 26, 2021
The two pictures illustrate how the layout of the ground floor in this house will be changed

2 - The word presentation, though passing in minimum consideration, does not allow for a maximum scoring consideration. If the writer...

Writing Feedbackambery - Sep 23, 2021Holt - Sep 24, 2021
Increasing the price of fuel as the optimal solution to solve environmental problems

2 - The prompt restatement should never be over discussed. The topic presentation should not alter the original presentation by digressing...

Writing Feedbacknartarus2000 - Sep 22, 2021Holt - Sep 24, 2021
Master's background change

2 - Well, college education considered, it would appear that you have related courses that could serve the application consideration well....

Student Talkharrykdn - Sep 22, 2021Holt - Sep 23, 2021
GKS (KGSP) Scholarship Personal Statement - for degree in Fashion styling

2 - This is the wrong reason to choose a scholarship. Avoid financial benefit references. Speak of educational and career...

ScholarshipSomnium - Sep 22, 2021Holt - Sep 23, 2021
The chart below gives information on the per of British people giving money to charity by age range.

NEW - The bar chart compares the number of British people who gave money to charity from 18 to over 65...

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People are interested in finding out about the history of the house they live in. Why ? How ?

NEW - Exploring stories about the past of their accommodation is becoming increasingly popular for many people in some nations. This...

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IELTS Essay about DANGEROUS SPORTS needed

2 - The first paragraph does not provide a restatement + opinion. Rather, the writer entered into a direct discussion in...

Writing Feedbackjangchul - Sep 21, 2021Holt - Sep 23, 2021
Discuss both views. Cheap products or long lasting product. This is an IELTS essay

3 - @Holt Thank you. I really appreciate your feedback which helps me improve my essay....

Writing Feedbacktuonghuy - Sep 21, 2021tuonghuy - Sep 22, 2021
Lots of teenagers today would rather socialize online than communicate in person

2 - Repetitive word meaning. Both refer to the 21st century. Use one reference only. There is no need...

Writing Feedbackqnhuluong - Sep 21, 2021Holt - Sep 22, 2021
How to build the medical health care system

2 - This is not an acceptable statement response. Consider the focus of the prompt which is building a health care...

Writing FeedbackPubricahealth - Sep 21, 2021Holt - Sep 22, 2021
GKS 2022 undergraduate major in film. "Being a part of something special makes you special, right?"

2 - The language discussion does not belong in this statement. heate a far more intricate language study history in the...

Undergraduatemay4 - Sep 20, 2021Holt - Sep 22, 2021
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