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In some countries, men and women are having children late in life. Indicate the causes and effects.

2 - - The essence of the sentence is correct, but the reference point is wrong. It is not "couples"...

Writing Feedbacknguyenvietanh26 - Mar 6, 2021Holt - Mar 7, 2021
IELTS writing task 2 Advertisements are extremely successful at persuading people to buy things

3 - @Holt Thanks for your prompt feedback....

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Confidence and expertise - Why would you be a great participant in the Global UGRAD Program?

2 - The problem with this presentation is still the lack of leadership skills and your direct participation, in a leadership...

Scholarshipi_m - Mar 5, 2021Holt - Mar 6, 2021
(Task 2)Topic: Technology is being used to monitor people. Will the pros of this outweigh the cons?

2 - The first paragraph does not contain enough of a restatement presentation for it to not be judged most as...

Writing Feedbackidkwhattosay - Mar 5, 2021Holt - Mar 6, 2021
IELTS General Writing Task 1: Seaside Hotel Booking

2 - We allow only 1 essay per thread. One more double essay posting and your account will be suspended !!!...

Writing Feedbackroy_leung - Mar 5, 2021Holt - Mar 6, 2021
Supply Chain - Personal Statement Graduate GKS, Industrial Engineering

2 - Though your introduction to Korea is an interesting aspect of this presentation, it does not reflect a direct connection...

Graduatekarinrizky - Mar 5, 2021Holt - Mar 6, 2021
From a long time psychologists claim that colors can affect people's feelings. IELTS 2

3 - Hi, I think to strengthen your argument, you need to give some counter argument first then your rebuttal. Maybe...

Writing FeedbackDiepVu99 - Mar 5, 2021juliachung - Mar 15, 2021
In last 20 century the population city increases dramatically

2 - Sorry, no scoring unless you avail of our private review services. Students who score your essay will find their...

Writing Feedbackrozajone - Mar 4, 2021Holt - Mar 5, 2021
Essay AAS for Master of Public Health degree in Australia

3 - Maybe you can answer the question directly first and then explain your reason(s). For example: I am applying...

Scholarshipsucianggraini - Mar 4, 2021Umbu Richy - Mar 9, 2021
Social networks are gradually replacing the direct communication among many people

2 - Okay, I am not going to review this essay beyond the task accuracy requirements and your writing response. Since...

Writing FeedbackAnhTranDs - Mar 4, 2021Holt - Mar 5, 2021
IELTS WRITING TASK 1: THE DIAGRAMS SHOW THE PRESENT BUILDING OF A COLLEGE AND THE FUTURE PLAN

NEW - IELTS WRITING TASK 1 24/10/2020 The maps illustrate future transformations of a college building compared to the present...

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Making the band the best it can be. Is my drum major essay good?

2 - I am not really sure how good this essay is because I am not familiar with the writing requirements...

Writing Feedbackdexterletterman - Mar 4, 2021Holt - Mar 5, 2021
Fascination for things that fly. Personal statement for MS in Aerospace Engineering

2 - The Personal Statement should not be so loaded with the courses you completed both on and offline. You practically...

GraduateAnmol Chaudhary - Mar 4, 2021Holt - Mar 5, 2021
Own glass of lemonade. A REALIZATION THAT SPARKED A PERIOD OF PERSONAL GROWTH OR NEW UNDERSTANDING

2 - You are spreading yourself too thin in this essay. You only need one period of realization. The Lemon and...

Undergraduatenklinh2308 - Mar 4, 2021Holt - Mar 5, 2021
Being resilient - Personal Statement GKS-G MBA Aspirant

3 - @Holt Yes, I have consular confirmation of this heritage as well as birth certificates that supports this. Thank you...

ScholarshipAlejandroHz96 - Mar 4, 2021AlejandroHz96 - Mar 5, 2021
Australia Awards Scholarship Essay (Master of Public Policy)

3 - Thank you for your feedback and suggestionsions, I really appreciate that....

ScholarshipUmbu Richy - Mar 4, 2021Umbu Richy - Mar 4, 2021
Describe a graph about the number of common Dolphins seen in Santa Barbara Channel from 1996-2001.

2 - This type of data reporting or summary presentation will not get a passing score in an actual test. Why?...

Writing Feedbacktranminhthinh - Mar 3, 2021Holt - Mar 4, 2021
GKS-G Personal Statement for AI & Natural Language Processing

2 - The early part of the essay is a good introduction to your profession, but does not really apply itself...

Graduatequeenrey - Mar 3, 2021Holt - Mar 4, 2021
The global sales for five different best-selling mobile phone brands: Samsung, Apple, Nokia, LG, ZTE

NEW - mobile phone sales statistic The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between...

Writing Feedbackminh1502 - Mar 3, 2021 -
To Defund or To Not Defund The Police

2 - Try to provide a backstory in the first paragraph regarding the development of the movement to defund the police....

Writing FeedbackDrippi_Jess - Mar 2, 2021Holt - Mar 3, 2021
Essay about directing youngsters to be admirable global citizens

2 - Your first sentence is not in accordance with the original topic provided. There is no reference to a global...

Writing Feedbacktuinee - Mar 2, 2021Holt - Mar 3, 2021
[GKS-G] Letter Of Recommendation on behalf of my manager for application of GKS-G

2 - A formal background introduction of the person referring you is required in the first paragraph. He must introduce himself...

Letterspursueyourdream - Mar 2, 2021Holt - Mar 3, 2021
Is United States prepared for the upcoming COVID-19 Vaccine demand?

2 - -Linked in is not considered a proper academic, nor journalistic reference for any opinion or research paper. You...

Writing Feedbackveronical1116 - Mar 2, 2021Holt - Mar 2, 2021
Cambodia Development - AAS Application: Why did you choose your proposed course

2 - How does your proposed course relate, in a professional manner, to addressing the needs of Cambodia? You gave a...

GraduateReksanil - Mar 2, 2021Holt - Mar 2, 2021
IELTS Writing Task 2 about historical subjects

2 - - Good measured response, lacking a clear thesis presentation though. Rather than "the following reasons", providing 2 topic...

Writing Feedbackblueskysg - Mar 1, 2021Holt - Mar 2, 2021
Ielts Writing: Analyze the graph - number of visitors to Brighton attractions

NEW - Tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton The line graph illustrates the figure for the...

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Advantages of living in rural areas and urban areas

2 - I cannot accurately assess your work for prompt adherence due to the missing prompt requirement. The prompt gives me...

Writing Feedbackstrawberryulala - Mar 1, 2021Holt - Mar 2, 2021
Teaching English language (Australia Award Scholarship) Master Degree in TESOL

3 - Too much introduction. I will prefer to answer the question directly first and then list my reason(s) and problem(s)...

ScholarshipTin Maung Oo - Mar 1, 2021Umbu Richy - Mar 9, 2021
Personal statement for Environmental landscape Architecture master programme

2 - The essay is based ont he previous prompt requirements for the GKS-G program. You need to write the essay...

ScholarshipEnergy - Mar 1, 2021Holt - Mar 2, 2021
College Supplementary Essay (Computer Science Major)

3 - Thank you so much for your feedback. Thanks to your advice, I was able to see how off my...

Undergraduateum2020 - Mar 1, 2021um2020 - Mar 1, 2021
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