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From mathematics to engineering- Personal statement should describe who you are and past experiences

2 - You mentioned engineering at the end. So change that reference point. Try not to keep mentioning Engineering because it...

ScholarshipAeroSAE98 - Feb 16, 2021Holt - Feb 16, 2021
SOP- SCAD - What first drawn me to a career as a visual artist were animations I watched as a child

2 - There is no real purpose for your studies. You have written a motivational letter rather than a statement of...

GraduateDizm - Feb 15, 2021Holt - Feb 16, 2021
Aerospace engineering - Study Objectives essay for FULBRIGHT SCHOLARSHIP

2 - I feel that the binational impact needs to be stronger in terms to referring to America's possible use for...

ScholarshipAeroSAE98 - Feb 15, 2021Holt - Feb 16, 2021
Global issues need global responses - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution*?

2 - Use that quote, and refer to the original speaker, as a stand alone presentation at the start. That will...

ScholarshipSinSonng - Feb 15, 2021Holt - Feb 16, 2021
Essay about how you can apply the knowledge once finish the education in the own country

2 - The discussion is totally off base. Remember that the prompt assumes you have already completed the course and you...

ScholarshipBarol16 - Feb 15, 2021Holt - Feb 16, 2021
Korean broadcasting will change us for the better - KGSP Master 2021 Personal Statement

3 - Hi Semos, I would like to suggest you to move your motivation paragraph to the top. The motivation is...

Scholarshipsemos - Feb 15, 2021grant_Oliver - Feb 17, 2021
Cheaper international travel and more countries welcome foreign visitors. Adv outweigh disadv?

3 - Thank you a lot Holt...

Writing Feedbacklan82 - Feb 15, 2021lan82 - Feb 20, 2021
IELTS Writing Task 2 - Family size essay

2 - Unfortunately, scoring is part of our premium services so I cannot score your essay. Any student who scores your...

Writing Feedbackboboiboy1a3 - Feb 15, 2021Holt - Feb 16, 2021
Should sharing knowledge about scientific research, business and the academic world be allowed?

2 - You have turned a 5 paragraph comparison essay into a 4 paragraph personal opinion essay. The format for your...

Writing Feedbackgiangkc1811 - Feb 15, 2021Holt - Feb 16, 2021
Me helping people - Describe yourself in 285 words.

2 - The prompt is not about what interests you. It is about who you are. What are your personal traits...

Scholarshipteddyz - Feb 15, 2021Holt - Feb 16, 2021
Motivation letter for a fast track MSc program in computer science for excellent undergrad students

2 - You still offer a note as to why you chose to take advantage of this program as an undergraduate...

Letterslpotel01 - Feb 15, 2021Holt - Feb 15, 2021
Scholarship motivation letter for masters studies - how you can apply the knowledge and etc..

3 - @Holt Dear Holt. Thank you very much for your timely response. I will connect the work of the UNDP...

Scholarshipkomadx - Feb 14, 2021komadx - Feb 15, 2021
Jonas Salk, the Man Who Saved the World with Vaccines

2 - Well, this is an interesting personal influence essay. Unfortunately, without knowing if this is in response to a prompt,...

Writing FeedbackWiseCupcake - Feb 14, 2021Holt - Feb 15, 2021
The Engineer I want to be. Committing to the global community Scholarship Essay

2 - Here is the thing, your essay shows you not as a community leader, but as a community follower in...

Scholarshipeds420 - Feb 14, 2021Holt - Feb 15, 2021
[KGSP SCHOLARSHIP] GRADUATE PROGRAM - MASTER IN ARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCE - Personal Statement

3 - @Holt Thank you for your careful review and the constructive comment. Have a nice day! : )...

Scholarshipgrant_Oliver - Feb 14, 2021grant_Oliver - Feb 15, 2021
Business Development - YOUR PROPOSED COURSE AND INSTITUTION? (FOR AUSTRALIA AWARDS SCHOLARSHIP)

2 - You only responded to the course choice discussion. You did not indicate the university of choice and why you...

ScholarshipRatudestiani - Feb 14, 2021Holt - Feb 15, 2021
IELTS- Task 2: Health benefits in countryside and cities

NEW - Please give me some advice on my writing essay. Thanks a lot! Topic: Many people believe that it...

Writing FeedbackPriscillia - Feb 14, 2021 -
You recently saw a photograph of an important school occasion - writing an informal letter

2 - The one thing you will not get from this forum, is someone who will write this letter for you....

Essaysking2k17 - Feb 14, 2021Holt - Feb 14, 2021
BIOMEDICAL SCIENCES - University of Waterloo AIF

4 - I believe that the reasons you give for the university of Waterloo are not specific enough and still fall...

Undergraduatehat2003 - Feb 14, 2021AeroSAE98 - Feb 15, 2021
GKS-G Scholarship Personal Statement: Marketing Major

2 - If the first paragraph is your motivational statement, then you need to work on it. The motivational statement should...

Scholarshipoahr93 - Feb 14, 2021Holt - Feb 15, 2021
"Success is not final; failure is not fatal" - being a great participant in the Global UGRAD program

2 - Without the reference to how you have actually served your community, which is what the prompt asked you write...

Scholarshipelisabettgt - Feb 14, 2021Holt - Feb 14, 2021
Interest in Engineering question for Waterloo

3 - Would this be a reasonable essay for the first prompt?...

Undergraduateipuga - Feb 13, 2021ipuga - Feb 14, 2021
Statement of Purpose; Goal of Study & Study Plan Graduate : Art Management

6 - Hi moondeluna, The SOP requirement in this section is goal of study and detailed study plan. I feel...

Scholarshipmoondeluna - Feb 13, 2021grant_Oliver - Feb 16, 2021
Question 1 scholarship; Why Curtin? Because it is a university that specializes in mining

2 - Your employment background should be mentioned in some capacity as the basis of the reference point for your course...

ScholarshipFaridFR - Feb 13, 2021Holt - Feb 14, 2021
Application Form: Provide any additional information about your High School science and math

2 - The last sentence is irrelevant. What you should have done was used a few of the word count to...

Undergraduateceleztina - Feb 12, 2021Holt - Feb 13, 2021
IELTS ESSAY TASK 2, it is about how human action can damage the environment.

4 - @coheny Thank you!!...

Writing Feedbackmalugesteira - Feb 12, 2021malugesteira - Feb 15, 2021
Motivation Letter for Linnaeus scholarship Master program in Sustainable energy.

2 - I am not sure how relevant this writing is to the criteria set by the motivation letter writing guidelines....

Lettersdawit165 - Feb 12, 2021Holt - Feb 13, 2021
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: TOPIC EDUCATION & - TYPE: DISCUSS BOTH THESE VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION.

4 - @ilikesnow Hi! I think you should paraphrase the question completely instead of paraphrasing only one of the statements. You...

Writing Feedbackilikesnow - Feb 11, 2021ranagiani - Feb 13, 2021
Erasmus mundus scholarship motivation letter (Emotion)

2 - It would be beneficial if you show your academic progression in this field. Indicate a summary of your related...

Lettersmervkd - Feb 10, 2021Holt - Feb 11, 2021
IELTS Writing task - study the science of food - requirement of advice

4 - hi, the format of your essay is wrong as it contains only 4 paragraphs. Your opinion is not strong...

Writing Feedbackcoheny - Feb 10, 2021Priscillia - Feb 14, 2021
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