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Kosovo, MIT world you come from?

6 - I think you need to refer to it this way (as the star that you orbit) again at...

Undergraduatemjellma - Dec 27, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2010
Common App Essay on Mount Kinabalu, Sabah

9 - I also like the originality of the essay. However, I felt like I was reading a book rather than...

Undergraduatesixfoottall - Dec 27, 2009cheetah777 - Dec 31, 2009
University of Chicago Essay - A dream about lakes, bridges, and The Box

3 - ahh, thank you very much! you gave me a lot of valid points (and fixed my grammatical errors, yayy)...

Undergraduatecolorfuloving - Dec 27, 2009colorfuloving - Dec 28, 2009
BU: how became interested?

11 - BU has a lot of international students....

Undergraduateangie127 - Dec 27, 2009angie127 - Dec 29, 2009
I was completely ignored by Freshman Mentor; COMMON APP

19 - I'm confused about this part. If you earned good grades, why did he need to show concern about...

Undergraduateemorris - Dec 27, 2009jampamz - Jan 3, 2010
Common App Essay - London Business Trip

2 - Despite the many people who did not believe I could succeed... Okay, I think you should cut out...

Undergraduateraluca - Dec 27, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 29, 2009
Freedom of speech, alternative energy, northwestern supplement essay - why NU?

4 - How fascinating that you thought a larger class size was a good thing. That makes the essay really interesting....

Undergraduateseattlelite - Dec 27, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2010
Northwestern essay: unique qualities of Northwestern....

3 - This is a bit long. I remember that the NU essay has a 500 word limit. The essay is...

Undergraduatesckergrl101 - Dec 27, 2009Tictac8 - Dec 27, 2009
Common App Activity Essay-----FBLA; 'The ten of us intently traded glances'

5 - that compels me to participate in my school's Future Business Leaders of America your paragraph is well written. i...

Undergraduatertgrove123 - Dec 27, 2009demuredelight - Dec 27, 2009
Impact of Tennis - Common App Essay

3 - Playing and watching sports has always been my passion. Tennis was my first love as I was growing up...

Undergraduatemdtennis92 - Dec 27, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2010
"to change my mindset" - Tufts University supplement essays

3 - You spend too much time at the beginning talking about how you like all kinds of music. Everybody says...

Undergraduateepirote901 - Dec 27, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2010
why tufts - strong psychology department

6 - What do those skeptics prefer... the "hard" sciences? Some people call psych a "soft" science, because it is so...

Undergraduatemmmargarita - Dec 27, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2010
Stanford- Intellectually Engaging- Dogs brain

2 - I think you need a better hook in the begining. What's unique about this essay is the way...

Undergraduatetchonis05 - Dec 27, 2009pafablach - Dec 28, 2009
our trip to Costa Rica, Essay topic: evaluating a significant experience

5 - I think it can work for both, and I think that in both cases it is important to write...

Undergraduatealiyoung8143 - Dec 27, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2010
Cornell College of Engineering Essay

2 - I think your whole first paragraph is too general and it should be cut. I really like your paragraph...

Undergraduatealphacat92 - Dec 27, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 28, 2009
NYU Supplement - Multiple Prompts + Topic Ideas

12 - Those who studied calculus Tried to be miraculous... I was thinking of that for the meter... Ha...

UndergraduateSignifica - Dec 27, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2010
'The Grameen Bank' - Stanford Supplement - Intellectual Vitality

5 - Ok, so I had this thought but I wasn't sure if I should include it. I was thinking...

Undergraduatedanielhe - Dec 27, 2009danielhe - Dec 28, 2009
U Chicago Supplements: Something you have outgrown and Why chicago?

3 - When I thought of a modern day chemist, I had often visualized a smartly-gowned scientist with the famous hair...

Undergraduatekiwi90 - Dec 27, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2010
Help with my Pratt personal statement. (Graphic design)

2 - Art has always been a passion of mine. When I was no older than five I would keep myself...

UndergraduateShelbieSam - Dec 27, 2009EF_Susan - Dec 28, 2009
math, science, or engineering, CalTech Interest Essay

3 - I think you could say all of this in half the amount of words you used. Don't use...

Undergraduatebirthdayattackr - Dec 27, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2010
How can you answer the what you can contribute to upenn supplement

16 - thanks alot here Zahra, here is my updated version of hte upenn essay, any comments(will be turning in by...

Undergraduatesrandhawa - Dec 27, 2009srandhawa - Dec 31, 2009
'I didn't get sick' - NYU Supplements- my summer vacation was...

8 - I think you add more description to make it sound more interesting and use language a bit more creatively...

UndergraduateEmmerz - Dec 27, 2009lekha - Dec 28, 2009
Poverty and lack of education in Kosovo - personal, local, international concern

2 - Kosovo, a tiny dot in any geographical map, is the country I come from. As the newest country in...

Undergraduatemjellma - Dec 27, 2009luminousx - Dec 27, 2009
Ithaca Answer FOR WHY I'VE CHOSEN BIOLOGY MAJOR

NEW - Here is the question: Please note briefly the reason(s) you selected the academic program to which you seek admission....

UndergraduateJd87rh - Dec 27, 2009 -
an excellent liberal arts education and the choice - Cornell CAS Essay

4 - The first paragraph is confusing, but I figured out the way to fix it!: I was in my own...

Undergraduateapplesandtea - Dec 27, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2010
Cal Tech Essay-Interests in Engineering!

5 - Number agreement: can take my abstract ideas and turn them into concrete realities. Your intro is excellent writing;...

Undergraduateletsgetfroyo - Dec 27, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2010
"Generous toward international students" - Swarthmore essay - Why Swarthmore?

3 - Thanks, you helped me a lot. I wrote it like that to emphasize how much I changed my...

UndergraduateCermi - Dec 27, 2009Cermi - Dec 27, 2009
Common app Activity essay - international event

9 - I agree with past comments that this seems like awkward wording.Perhaps try "Waking up at 6 AM and...

Undergraduatepoisonivy - Dec 27, 2009stars11 - Dec 31, 2009
"Community and Equity as a battey and its charger" - Lehigh supplement

5 - A comma is necessary in this kind of sentence: ...without the battery the charger has no meaning, and without...

Undergraduateaikd80cn - Dec 27, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2010
my funky shoes - COMMON APP ESSAY. thoughts?

7 - Thank you so so much. I can finally go to sleep. Go into the new year knowing that you've...

Undergraduateyikescollege - Dec 27, 2009yikescollege - Jan 1, 2010
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