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"You're not going to college!" - CNR application essay

8 - "Those same words" refers to "her elusive words" (sentence 2) and "her words" (sentence 3). You used almost the...

UndergraduateRabiaG - Dec 19, 2009Vulpix - Dec 19, 2009
A short paragraph from my Why Northwestern essay.

4 - With approximately 35 percent of all students in some Greek house, Northwestern certainly provide students with a wide non-academic...

Undergraduatefearless9 - Dec 19, 2009icysakura - Dec 19, 2009
I was born in Yale-New Haven Hospital, and my father got his PhD from Yale.

6 - You have to get to the "heart" of the yale essay. Its sortof "on the surface", talk more about...

Undergraduatethemaninblack - Dec 19, 2009pennhopefull - Dec 29, 2009
ESSAY- Cornell Schoolof Architecture

5 - Good sentence!!!!!! As I anchored the last piece of chipboard onto my cube, my fingers sticky with...

Undergraduatedollarchitect - Dec 19, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 21, 2009
Quote relating to AP Physics C short essay

2 - Is that quote really from an essay or book? The prompt was kind of specific about it needing to...

Undergraduatealejxa - Dec 19, 2009Katsch - Dec 19, 2009
Common App Topic Of Your Choice Essay Interweaving Football with Education

4 - Oops! Thanks, Kevin! I was away typing you a message when you were already here! Weirrrrd. Disregard my message...

Undergraduaterememberthe - Dec 19, 2009Jeannie - Dec 21, 2009
graduate degree in plant genetic, Kansas State University

2 - This part is unclear... I believe it is an important and wise resolution for me, even though I...

Graduateddzhangzz - Dec 19, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 20, 2009
Lehigh Supplement Question- Why Lehigh? and Define Equity and Community?

7 - Furthermore the passion and devotion that one has for their community will in turn make said community stronger. --->...

Undergraduatechristmastree - Dec 19, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 24, 2009
NYU SUPPLEMENTAL LIMERICK/HAIKU/POEM

5 - I like both of the poems, but I like the first one, the most. I agree with the above...

PoetryMSetYo - Dec 19, 2009RabiaG - Dec 19, 2009
Should I include a speaking occasion on my CV if I never actually spoke?

3 - Well, inspiration is a tricky wave to catch. The important thing is to try to muster some real spirit...

LettersEllan - Dec 19, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 24, 2009
'The scent of chamomile' Amherst essay on kindness

4 - Thanks!! I didn't realize that the last paragraph was nonsensical and disgustingly pretentious before you pointed it out. I...

Undergraduatekeilinger - Dec 19, 2009keilinger - Dec 20, 2009
CMU: How my childhood experiences lead to my major of BME

5 - I think it's great, especially because you can adjust it to serve as evidence attesting to your seriousness about...

Undergraduateyankeebud95 - Dec 19, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 26, 2009
Supplement Essay Emory Univ. knowledge and expertise

5 - *** Okay here is my revision. I added a bunch of other stuff to it. Unfortunately I definitely went...

Undergraduateadanne1990 - Dec 19, 2009adanne1990 - Dec 20, 2009
A Night of Revelations,GWU:what infleuced you to apply to george washington uni.

NEW - A Night of Revelations "Why don't you try the George Washington University?" my father asked. At that moment...

Undergraduategemma2345 - Dec 19, 2009 -
Stanford Roommate Essay (I'll bring pictures and many priceless memories)

24 - how do i change that sentence then ? thanks...

Undergraduateshannon92 - Dec 19, 2009shannon92 - Dec 31, 2009
Melinda's condition led to my interest in science; Why I choose Bioengineering.

7 - Thank you all. I really don't know how to show it. I kinda thought i was doing that......

UndergraduateJd87rh - Dec 19, 2009Jd87rh - Dec 26, 2009
My family and WWW, MIT - Describe the world you come from - does it convey?

4 - Well.. the position you take is just as important as how well you convey it. Yes,...

Undergraduateukarmy04 - Dec 19, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 21, 2009
Why Middlebury-why do you choose environmental study and Middlebury

2 - A chemical factory was set up nearby and slowly, the pristine river became feculent; beautiful I really hoped...

Undergraduateyf8651 - Dec 19, 2009EF_Susan - Dec 19, 2009
Notre Dame Supplement Essay--Make a difference

3 - Thanks Susan!!! Any more?...

Undergraduatepeterhanprc - Dec 19, 2009peterhanprc - Dec 20, 2009
'no competition among students' - Swarthmore supplement: 'Why Swarthmore?' essay

3 - i like it, it flows well, im not sure but maybe you can write about how you will contribute...

Undergraduatekda013 - Dec 19, 2009lilgangwolf - Dec 20, 2009
Write an argumentative essay Modern technology has increased material weath

2 - Yes, this is easy to understand. It is okay for you to write in a way that shows that...

Writing Feedbackngothanhtam - Dec 19, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2010
MMSS program, Why Northwestern?

3 - To correct a few points: First, though NU does good in developing the intimacy between students and profs....

Undergraduatejunbotheone - Dec 19, 2009ZuluYaN - Dec 22, 2009
An essay about something I've outrown- Chicago extended essay

NEW - Hi! Please I'm badly in need of your honest opinion and suggestions on improving my Chicago essay. Do you...

Undergraduateadeleye - Dec 19, 2009 -
YALE SECOND ESSAY: "THE PIECES OF ME"

3 - Ali, I hope you'll start giving some ideas as well as encouragement. It is nice that you offer kind...

Undergraduateheavyman - Dec 19, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 21, 2009
Any environment that is particularly significant to you my Willliams supplement!

17 - This may have been said before, but it doesn't talk much about you until the very end. The prompt...

UndergraduateWanderer_x - Dec 19, 2009garfunkel129 - Dec 31, 2009
'Fresh start revelation' - Stanford's intellect engaging prompt.

5 - The essay itself is good. You have a great sense of style. But writing about college essays the...

Undergraduateviettran92 - Dec 19, 2009goldeneye98 - Dec 25, 2009
SYRACUSE ESSAY 1,why syracuse 2,work experience and your gain 3,future plan

5 - You should definitely change up the name of the university in question 1! Don't make a mistake on that!...

Undergraduateuhello - Dec 19, 2009ong - Dec 31, 2009
"Arabs are the new blacks"; CUNY Mac Honors / Local, National, International problem

2 - I'm going to be totally honest. This is an extremely interesting essay. However, you could do a better job...

Undergraduaterafeeki92 - Dec 18, 2009cdrappi - Dec 18, 2009
NYU Supplemental Application - Multiple Prompts

4 - I think you may want to focus a little more on what you would do with the famous new...

UndergraduateZab - Dec 18, 2009alejxa - Dec 19, 2009
Princeton Summers (or vacations between school years)

3 - Well, part of the purpose here is to show them that you can write good composition. So... you...

Undergraduatebluekleenexx - Dec 18, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 21, 2009
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