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An essay that compares two books - what you understand from these?

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Essaysmansoor2 - Dec 14, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 16, 2009
The Heroin Diaries: The Life after Death of Nikki Sixx

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"My desire for flight" scholarship essay help wanted

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The Relationship Between Substance Abuse and Depression. Extra-curricular essay

3 - At age sixteen, she tried again, and this time she succeeded. So you see that As a...

EssaysOffnleftfield - Dec 14, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 16, 2009
UCF "How has your family history, culture or environment influenced who you are"

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UndergraduatePatelJ - Dec 14, 2009collegebound1 - Dec 16, 2009
Symphony - Williams Admission Essay

3 - ...same fondness that I afford a well-executed performance-with pride and knowledge that I have done that best that I...

Undergraduatekoldingi - Dec 14, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 16, 2009
Political Conflict in Bangladesh-Macaulay Honors Admission Essay

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Undergraduateamitdeb92 - Dec 14, 2009Princess Daisy - Dec 15, 2009
Career objectives_Accounting major

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What is the impact of sop (political science) for the approaval of MA?

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Graduatepolgrad - Dec 14, 2009polgrad - Dec 16, 2009
A Poem about mac and cheese

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Poetrymelb - Dec 14, 2009Jeannie - Dec 16, 2009
Education and what don't you know-For Brown

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My Personal Statement for University entry to study Accounting.

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Undergraduateobistaiwo - Dec 14, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 16, 2009
An Accident - Yale supplement, is effective to convey a sense of adventure?

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UndergraduateEddy92 - Dec 14, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 16, 2009
essay about universities should give the same money tos student's lib and sport

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Writing Feedbackrobertsheperd80 - Dec 14, 2009hitchhike - Dec 21, 2009
LSE International Relations grad essay - correct

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Graduatedeepsea - Dec 14, 2009Fidelis - Dec 16, 2009
undergraduate course at SVA, Writing Statement of intent!

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Undergraduatefourplustwo - Dec 14, 2009fourplustwo - Dec 16, 2009
Stanford Short Answer #2- Things my Roommate needs to know

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UndergraduateAlex728 - Dec 14, 2009Alex728 - Dec 26, 2009
Creativity is much more needed process today to survive the future of mankind

7 - I wrote are becoming because it is present continious structure) When I noted their . I meant that you...

Writing Feedbackgms - Dec 14, 2009birzhanfm - Dec 18, 2009
Common application (my IT skills)

2 - what is IT I'm confused phrasing is strange take out expected or...

Undergraduategkuizinas - Dec 14, 2009meisj0n - Dec 14, 2009
Tutoring Spanish students - Why Northwestern University Transfer Essay?

2 - All this material, starting with the moment of your birth, is a very roundabout way of getting to...

UndergraduateJholton247 - Dec 14, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 16, 2009
Extra-curricular essays for UVA

5 - When you have part of a sentence that could be a complete sentence by itself, use a comma to...

UndergraduatePrincess Daisy - Dec 14, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 16, 2009
"Checkmate!" Shogi, or Chinese Chess Common App Essay!

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Univesity of Washington personal statement - critque requested.

3 - Do not forget that contractions (such as "aren't" and "didn't") in your first few sentences are not usually appropriate...

Undergraduatepiperchris - Dec 14, 2009ohellothere - Dec 28, 2009
[Princeton] My conquered walls

2 - "Trial and error" is an expression to refer to a haphazard way of figuring something out. It does...

Undergraduateseongwoomama3 - Dec 13, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 16, 2009
dance programs in private studios, Macaulay Essay

3 - What it is missing is a solid thesis, but it has potential to be very good! You seem to...

Undergraduatemr_turtle - Dec 13, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 16, 2009
Why biomedical engineer? Why Johns Hopkins?

6 - I think you could do very well by simplifying the stuff about Andrew. Don't make him such a big...

Undergraduatefearless9 - Dec 13, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 16, 2009
Toefl ; I agree that MONEY is the most important aspect of a job!

4 - They have to make money allowances necessary for the children. They need to give allowance to their children. ...

Writing FeedbackKeng - Dec 13, 2009mr_turtle - Dec 14, 2009
I've got my game face on, and I'm ready for the pitch--Mt. Holyoke Essay

5 - Hey, I just skipped ahead to help with your essay because I saw some excellent help you gave somebody...

Undergraduatecaisson22 - Dec 13, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 16, 2009
Acting and being onstage, Williams Prompt... any suggestions?

3 - You mentioned the butterflies twice, and it is probably better to only mention them once. Also, tis prompt...

Undergraduateburntaquaflame - Dec 13, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 16, 2009
political courage display, Cory Booker!

3 - This part above is confusing, because I am wondering for a long time who this strong and heroic...

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