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My Personal Statement For Accounting

4 - Thank you so much i really appreciate your comments......

Undergraduateicefola - Dec 9, 2009icefola - Dec 10, 2009
'May Fate reward your diligence' - do me a favor to check my diversity essy

7 - Thanks Kevin, Now I am trying to rewrite my article...

Graduatesosososo1114 - Dec 9, 2009sosososo1114 - Dec 11, 2009
Admissions Essay Influential Person-Mother

3 - Hey,thanks. I knew the essay was a bit vague and full of grammar errors but at least now I...

UndergraduateEsaias - Dec 9, 2009Esaias - Dec 9, 2009
"I would like to study in the UK" - UCAS Personal Statement

3 - Hmmmmm... it is not enough to want to study in the UK. I think a serious student is...

Undergraduateproudtobepinoy - Dec 9, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 10, 2009
Common Application Essay (Anti-Semitism)

3 - That makes it sounds like you are saying Jews are not people! Revise, revise... :-) Being Jewish,...

Undergraduatedannyfwk - Dec 9, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 10, 2009
Why does Brown appeal to me?Who or what has influenced my decision ?

9 - Two ideas: I have been a die-hard enthusiast about Economics ever since I received the first lecture on...

UndergraduateSayeemin - Dec 8, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 10, 2009
'Key Club and the National Honors Society' - NEOUCOM what will i contribute?

3 - Each paragraph has a different idea, and they need to all be preceded by an intro para that puts...

Undergraduatekouyaken - Dec 8, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 10, 2009
Of all the activities, in our outside of school, soccer holds the most meaning to me

2 - dannyfwk " Of all activities, in or outside of school " not our ... "and have completed for...

Undergraduatedannyfwk - Dec 8, 2009Sayeemin - Dec 8, 2009
"My Life as a Midwestern Belle" - Emerson College Supplement

6 - yea, that would be something amazing...but still not story telling, unless the song's a story. it's good to...

Undergraduateidiotruler - Dec 8, 2009yang - Dec 10, 2009
Hamlet having a problem with himself and three words that describe him - start?

5 - Well... Google brings you to books, and all sorts of scholarly articles. You can even use Google Scholar. Google...

Book Reportscindy_e - Dec 8, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 12, 2009
WISH FOR CHRISTMAS

3 - I still remember your promise two year ago, but you may have forgotten it completely. Therefore, you cannot be...

Writing Feedbackautumnwave - Dec 8, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 10, 2009
Florida State University Admission Essay- How Vires Defines My Life

2 - I believe that the mind is created to be able to think beyond boundaries and that the more that...

Undergraduategrocks6 - Dec 8, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 10, 2009
Common App Essay (Multiple Sclerosis)

12 - This is a powerful essay. I think you could incorporate a paragraph that tells about some of the most...

Undergraduateilovelaughing - Dec 8, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 10, 2009
Comparative Essay on Charaters of The Great Gatsby and Hamlet

4 - I always suggest taking a guess with this kind of essay. Choose a striking characteristic of one character, and...

Book Reportslynpenny2003 - Dec 8, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 10, 2009
Macaulay Honors Essay-Discuss some issue of national, or international concern

5 - Try to find a substitute for the word hate because you are using it continuously on the 4th paragraph....

Undergraduatealphacat92 - Dec 8, 2009mjellma - Dec 27, 2009
University of Michigan-Ann Arbor : Setback Essay : Failed Calculus Course

3 - Thank you VERY much. I needed this. I'm touching up my essay right now....

Undergraduatemstickel - Dec 8, 2009mstickel - Dec 8, 2009
Macaulay Honors College-Discuss some issue of importance...

3 - To the reader, it is obvious that you are just going for a dramatic effect here. Obviously, you...

Undergraduateneil098 - Dec 8, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 10, 2009
'Developing my portfolio' - Considering The Ohio State University Essay

2 - well...for starters, it needs to be shorter. You don't want to annoy the reader of your essay by wasting...

UndergraduateCaitlin1095 - Dec 8, 2009mstickel - Dec 8, 2009
English CLEP Practice Essay - Friendships today are easier than ever to form

3 - Here is something I think will help. Use this structure: First sentence - attention grabbing, colorful words. Last...

Writing FeedbackKMK - Dec 8, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 10, 2009
Experience, achievement - essay about losing weight- feedback

5 - WOW, you are a great writer! And what an inspiration! I just found a few small things; AlthIough,It...

Undergraduateukraine2 - Dec 8, 2009EF_Susan - Dec 11, 2009
Bowdoin College Supplement Essay-How have you prepared for Bowdoin?

5 - You are welcome. This explains everything: plato.stanford.edu/entries/ethics-deontological/...

Undergraduatexugx29 - Dec 8, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 16, 2009
Influential person/significant experience--a girl who made me strong in love

7 - Thanks a lot! I just have to get some courage enough to use it in my application now:-)...

Undergraduatemcdy143 - Dec 8, 2009mcdy143 - Dec 11, 2009
Commonapp_Topic of ur Choice_My School

4 - No need for a semi-colon here: ...how it looks like exactly. And in this sentence, you should use...

UndergraduateLilyTran - Dec 8, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 9, 2009
IELTS: Success has broader definition than the earning power of a person.

8 - It's my pleasure :)...

Writing Feedbackgms - Dec 8, 2009Ruah - Dec 10, 2009
That afternoon watching CNN caught me in the post 9/11 fears

6 - It will be more impressive if you name the events that you saw on TV that day, and then...

Undergraduatepacers7ind - Dec 8, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 9, 2009
Letter of Motivation for applying Computer Science related fields

4 - I would leave it out because it's on your transcript and resume. Everything I've heard says you shouldn't duplicate...

Lettersleonardo092 - Dec 8, 2009bankafirekn1ght - Dec 10, 2009
learning my ABC's: What you would bring to diversity

4 - Hi Faisal, good advice! I like the way the human being sentence is changed, but does it belong...

UndergraduateDrAculEX - Dec 8, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 9, 2009
essay about TV has destroyed communication among friends. (agree or disagree)

6 - Thanks a lot:)...

Writing Feedbackrobertsheperd80 - Dec 8, 2009robertsheperd80 - Dec 14, 2009
Toefl essay, People with different interests and personalities cannot be friends

12 - Ha ha, it rhymes with John-o-mat-apeyya. I think......

Writing Feedbacks011208 - Dec 8, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 19, 2009
The accident - significant experience you have faced and its impact on you

6 - Get right to the powerful part: Like many people, I have an image imagine of a place of... ...

UndergraduateZoalerix - Dec 8, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 9, 2009
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