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"I've lived in a Mexican culture" - this is my friends 1st college prompt essay.

2 - I come from a family of five, that's including me, and I've lived in a Mexican culture throughout my...

Undergraduateluismarquez - Nov 29, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2009
UC2: Accepting others

3 - Good essay. It is good to explain the way you see people around in order to emphasize your speciallity....

UndergraduateHaru21 - Nov 29, 2009xugx29 - Dec 1, 2009
"Raising children is like being pecked to death by a chicken" -UC Prompt 2

9 - yeah but how is that related to the assignment???: Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or...

Undergraduatebloopyxd - Nov 29, 2009Deva17 - Nov 29, 2009
Single Parent- UC transfer prompt #2

2 - You write very well! Here is a way to manage long sentences with a dash: This was a...

Undergraduatedodger7 - Nov 29, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2009
becoming a business/accounting major - UC Personal statements- transfer student

2 - For prompt one, the first sentence does not go with the theme about your aunt. I see that...

Undergraduatecsicasiano - Nov 29, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2009
Miami University: common app, my father influential

2 - Hi Felicia, sorry I never helped with this one. Was it successful? In November there were so many essays,...

UndergraduateFelicia07 - Nov 29, 2009EF_Susan - Feb 23, 2011
Research Paper on Shakespeare's Iago

14 - Thank you again for all of your help. We will see how it comes out!...

Research PapersRod_Farva - Nov 29, 2009Rod_Farva - Dec 9, 2009
Dental training, Obstacle Essay Help

6 - Use quotation marks: ...the strength to say, "Pinkesh, mane bathroom layja." Use a comma: ...both of us more;...

Undergraduateshahps41592 - Nov 29, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 10, 2009
GW honors essay - Is it too business like?

2 - try to make this a more personal essay. what do you have to offer? I don't...

Undergraduatessuraj - Nov 29, 2009meisj0n - Nov 29, 2009
UC #2... but it's not just one thing!

5 - Work on tying your paragraphs and subjects together with some kind of common denominator....

Undergraduateootlink - Nov 29, 2009Pscholler - Nov 29, 2009
"I love languages" - Multilingualism

5 - Haru21, no need to panic, editing essays is an inherent part of the process. I personally got an essay...

UndergraduateHaru21 - Nov 29, 2009yang - Nov 30, 2009
My parents' shouting matches - UCF obstacles/bump in the road

4 - Hello, I thin it might be better to mention the fighting briefly, and then talk about the home away...

Writing Feedbackprotesturhero - Nov 29, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 15, 2009
"The Greatest Gift" - Personal Statement/ Choice of Major Essay

2 - Most eleven year old children want the latest toy or video game ,... My love of computers and...

Undergraduatechrisbierilo - Nov 29, 2009EF_Susan - Dec 1, 2009
Prompt 1 (family) and Prompt 2 (a quality) of UCLA Personal Statements

3 - Prompt 1: He is now in a university, studying pre-law. I liked it! but I think you should...

UndergraduateDeva17 - Nov 29, 2009bloopyxd - Nov 29, 2009
"I arrived to a place of opportunities" - college essay prompt 1 for uc

2 - Overall opinion: make some paragraphs, ask an English teacher to revise your essay, check your quotation marks/other punctuations ...

Undergraduateluismarquez - Nov 29, 2009yang - Nov 29, 2009
"Albert Einstein got it wrong countless times", George Washington Univ Essay

15 - Oh, I had not noticed that. Well, thanks!...

Undergraduatessuraj - Nov 29, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 12, 2009
"Characteristics of a doctor" Brooklyn B.A.-M.D. Program Essay

5 - thank you all. But i've decided nott o aply for the BAMD program because my teachers couldn't get the...

UndergraduateJd87rh - Nov 29, 2009Jd87rh - Dec 19, 2009
Awakening from my dreamy sleep, UC Prompt #1-my world

4 - thank you :] I tried to tie it in to my desire to perform, but my earlier attempts broke...

UndergraduateJennieHeartsYou - Nov 29, 2009JennieHeartsYou - Nov 29, 2009
University of Cincinnati Admission Essay

2 - A good start- you have the fundamentals: your background, your interests, your goals. Remember the prompt, though: Please provide...

Undergraduatessuraj - Nov 29, 2009TimMill - Dec 1, 2009
Mission trip in Cambodia - UC PROMPT 2 -Tell us about personal quailty

2 - Great Work, just a few corrections.. "before I took a mission trip in the other side of...

Undergraduatepirouette - Nov 29, 2009Janelle - Nov 29, 2009
CommonApp Essay- Power of Fiction and the short answer

2 - The l'il baby essay is kinda cute and what Schroeder answers really profound - you could write the long...

Undergraduateaquamarine - Nov 29, 2009linmark - Dec 1, 2009
"mexican struggle" - UC prompt

5 - your essay was good, but i am sorry to hear that about your father because i can relate... ...

Undergraduateralfsantacruz - Nov 29, 2009chikibayb02 - Nov 29, 2009
TOEFL: "people are living longer now"; 'Healthier life, well educated people'

2 - Honestly, I felt that this essay was very standard. In that I mean to say that it is 5...

Writing Feedbackhitchhike - Nov 29, 2009shahps41592 - Nov 30, 2009
My contribution to the scientific community. UC prompt #1

2 - - and what you have gained from your involvement. * I feel your essay, while adequately answering the...

Undergraduateisaiahkupo - Nov 29, 2009citadel01 - Nov 29, 2009
I have taken many journeys devoid ; Carnegie Mellon- Why?/ Major

8 - do you really play play stations at age 5 or 6? and this either sounds bitter, or sound...

Undergraduatethe onw - Nov 29, 2009yang - Dec 19, 2009
"Speech and debate are a lifelong learning process"

2 - Good essay, but without the prompt, it's hard to critique it. Good transition and introduction into the scene of...

UndergraduateJuniper_Jumper - Nov 29, 2009ssuraj - Nov 29, 2009
University of Texas Plan II essay

2 - Wow. Well, I think you've got the right idea. It sounds like they're asking you to create a promt...

Undergraduateyang - Nov 29, 2009sarahmc18 - Nov 29, 2009
UC2: Multilingualism (I just need a yay or a nay for the red parts)

3 - So what happened to your spanish class? Well, if the only part you need to be criticized upon...

UndergraduateHaru21 - Nov 29, 2009yang - Nov 29, 2009
Mission Trip in Nicaragua- UC Prompt#2

4 - yeah, that's what I figured. Thanks for the input! & Yang...yes it's an essay I used for NYU...

Undergraduatexxericaxx92 - Nov 29, 2009xxericaxx92 - Nov 29, 2009
Medical knowledge, Johns Hopkins Supplement Essay

3 - Love the word unbeknownst, never knew it before! ssuraj is right in that you need to focus on...

UndergraduateAgokhale - Nov 29, 2009yang - Nov 29, 2009
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