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True Spirit of Maples~ any advice is welcomed,thanks

10 - Ok, I will follow your advice ^^ thanks a loooooooot...

Undergraduatemaniano - Oct 16, 2009maniano - Oct 17, 2009
brain drain and solutions for this problem

5 - Hi thinh, I think not all people in Vietnam who has been go abroad do not go back to...

Writing Feedbackthinhtvdhtm - Oct 16, 2009essay0405 - Oct 17, 2009
Lafayette College SHORT ANSWER (drawing Chinese paintings)

6 - Ummmm...There's a mistake, I meant to type 7......

Undergraduateayida365 - Oct 16, 2009ayida365 - Oct 18, 2009
'headmistress in modern China / Power of Knowledge' - Smith College Supplement

6 - Great! Tell about what kind of psychology you want to specialize in! It will make you more distinguished and...

Undergraduatezouztingt - Oct 16, 2009EF_Kevin - Oct 30, 2009
LEGALIZATION OF SAME SEX MARRIAGE - revise my introduction, argumentative paper.

32 - I personally would simply talk about the essence of human rights; how essentially we are all equal and that...

Writing FeedbackBrianne - Oct 16, 2009Envie - Feb 9, 2010
I'm from China - common app personal statement

10 - lmy125 Yeah, I'm from PRC. Ummm...for example..."A writer who keeps diary since elementary school and strives to capture...

Undergraduatelmy125 - Oct 16, 2009ayida365 - Oct 17, 2009
common app essay- first topic- "The Palpitation"

2 - Ow. The experience you describe, while it must have been terrifying, was not in fact a matter of...

UndergraduateBasker - Oct 16, 2009EF_Sean - Oct 16, 2009
TOEFL - prefer large or small company? Large - stable jobs and fine salaries

4 - it is a contrast essay, so your structure is wrong. mention both merits and demerits , besides what overweighs...

Writing FeedbackAnly - Oct 16, 2009fuhuanluck - Oct 30, 2009
First Cut / Sister's eating disorder - U of M Essay

13 - You choose a good topic, you have some good descriptions, I just think you could work a little bit...

Undergraduateworldbound10 - Oct 16, 2009srandhawa - Oct 30, 2009
giving more chance for women can cause some problem?what are your views?

3 - Hi, I agree with worldbound10, "develop themselves" is used three times. Instead of replicating it, you can use...

Writing Feedbackthinhtvdhtm - Oct 15, 2009tuanlnc - Oct 17, 2009
I still don't know, what who I want to become

6 - I completely agree with Tsunami! For one, just take out "type of" in the first line. It makes it...

Undergraduatesnow153 - Oct 15, 2009gongan - Oct 19, 2009
"Crash" - Tranfer essay for common app

4 - i think you need to focus more on the transfering part...

Undergraduatesoapman - Oct 15, 2009anniebiotic - Oct 17, 2009
"I saw a baby die." - Common App Essay - Significant Experience

4 - Alright, thanks a lot. I'll think about how to incorporate the parents and their feelings. The essay is already...

Undergraduatemuffinman8380 - Oct 15, 2009muffinman8380 - Oct 15, 2009
Area of my choice-- Medicine

4 - Hi Viraj, While my interest in Pre-Medicine provided a foundation of my future, it was the surrounding that...

UndergraduateViraj Patel - Oct 15, 2009qyuiosilent - Oct 15, 2009
Writing about either philosophy or political parties, NEED HELP

2 - This is just my own personal idea, but it fits with what you are trying to do. The...

Undergraduatechocoholic_jo - Oct 15, 2009EF_Stephen - Oct 15, 2009
Adult returning to school... review/critique this very ROUGH draft?

7 - Start by researching your topic. Then, brainstorm to think of things you want to say about your topic that...

Undergraduateboosted_347 - Oct 15, 2009EF_Sean - Oct 17, 2009
Common App Short Answer - Playing piano at retirement homes

2 - First sentence can be "The opening chord was flawless, but" That cuts one word. Third sentence, you can...

UndergraduateWoolachee - Oct 15, 2009EF_Stephen - Oct 15, 2009
Submitting documents by post for an online application

2 - I don't see anything wrong with this format. It conveys the idea you want to convey quite clearly, which...

Graduatero_hej_ho - Oct 15, 2009EF_Sean - Oct 15, 2009
Stuck on ideas for Research Paper (argumentative research topic) 100 class

6 - Or homelessness...there are two distinct sides to that argument, all you have to do is choose one side and...

Research PapersAristae - Oct 15, 2009Jeannie - Oct 20, 2009
Michigan Engineering Short Essay

3 - Very good essay. I think it is focused and good for a U of M short answer. The only...

Undergraduateqyuiosilent - Oct 15, 2009worldbound10 - Oct 15, 2009
Letter to a professor who offered me a research job

5 - I don't really get what you want? Can you explain better, so I can try to help you (:...

Lettersrmli - Oct 15, 2009othonlima - May 2, 2012
my CV.. adoptive immunotherapy and the study of cytotoxic T lymphocytes (CTLs)

2 - I don't know enough about this kind of science to advise you content-wise. The only thing I can suggest...

Letterskek - Oct 15, 2009EF_Stephen - Oct 15, 2009
TOEFL College education is one of the significant sources of increased knowledge

3 - Thank you. i really appreciate. i will redo it as soon as possible. besides, what else do you think...

Writing Feedbackfuhuanluck - Oct 15, 2009fuhuanluck - Oct 15, 2009
Toefl iBT, integrated task: Invasive plants are a growing problem.

3 - Hi Jeannie, This is a Toefl iBT integrated writing task. After reading a passage & listening a lecture,...

Writing Feedbacktuanlnc - Oct 15, 2009tuanlnc - Oct 15, 2009
'my sister is bulimic' - University of Michigan essay topic

2 - Hey. First, I think writing about how you resolve the difficult relationship with your bulimia sister is a good...

Undergraduateworldbound10 - Oct 15, 2009brucexu - Oct 15, 2009
Bridging two worlds: UC Personal Statement #1

3 - sentence #2 in intro is rather awkward. doesn't show yourself in a good light. sentence #3 in body1 is...

Undergraduatechhhristine - Oct 15, 2009meisj0n - Nov 22, 2009
In five or six sentences, tell us how you first became interested in BU

10 - Well~your answer is much more compelling than mine since I live far away from US~Good luck~...

Undergraduateyolaynyciriaco - Oct 14, 2009ying7686 - Nov 1, 2009
"every single sport and after school activity" - college application essay.

3 - I just wanted to say thank you SOOO much Jeannie for helping me out on this, becaus i want...

Undergraduatecma29 - Oct 14, 2009cma29 - Oct 17, 2009
"privileged with several years of study" - FSU college essay

4 - Yes. Well, then, good luck....

UndergraduateWuskin - Oct 14, 2009EF_Sean - Oct 15, 2009
'My sister's problems and solutions' - concise narrative describe a meaningful event

3 - I was actually going to ask why did you write the bad comments on my essay but then...

Writing FeedbackNoumon - Oct 14, 2009shaddy - Apr 16, 2013
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