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"Left Mom and Dad in China for California" - good for Common App topic 1?

NEW - Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on...

Undergraduatejunma314 - Oct 7, 2008 -
"The world I was headed for is more important" - admission essay

NEW - Describe the environment you come from - for example, your family, community, or school - and how this environment...

Undergraduatejunma314 - Oct 7, 2008 -
'making business successful' - Essay for MBA Finance program

NEW - My name is Yu-Chieh Li. I graduated from the University of North Texas and received my bachelor's degree in...

Graduatekevin75074 - Oct 7, 2008 -
"One more shot" - common application short question (150 words)

NEW - "One more shot. Just gimme another shot. Don't give up!" "Yes!" We win the game. Here I stood in...

Undergraduateendagu222 - Oct 7, 2008 -
Statement of purpose (graduate studies in chemical engineering)

NEW - Please provide your feedback on my SOP.Also please suggest if i could include more details(such as undergrad scores, gre...

Graduateguruyatra - Oct 7, 2008 -
Persuasive Speech: Schizophrenia and Suicide

4 - It sounds like an excellent topic to me -- it's a bit different from the usual run-of-the-mill topics that...

Speechessilverystars - Oct 7, 2008EF_Sean - Apr 10, 2009
TURKEY AND THE EUROPEAN UNION - research paper

6 - However, these views were fine back then, but as nations evolve, so do the views of their citizens ....

Research Papersmfap - Oct 7, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 26, 2008
PhD admission - "outline of area of study". Research proposal?

2 - Good afternoon. It sounds like the institution you are applying to is trying to see what your goals...

Essaysrizi - Oct 6, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 7, 2008
UC ADMISSION ESSAY: YOSEMITE NATIONAL PARK

2 - Thank You for fixing the grammatical errors. "hoping to find something closure" At first, I was trying to make...

Undergraduatealexteele - Oct 6, 2008alexteele - Oct 7, 2008
"The Treble and the Bass" - No prompt, just me rambling

6 - I think it would be a good thing to hand in as an extra; I don't think it's appropriate...

UndergraduateJustJoshinbyJ - Oct 6, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 8, 2008
Character of a Man - Essay

NEW - Please check for grammar and also for the use third person only. This essay was to evaluate the character...

Writing Feedbackmichaelfrye1970 - Oct 6, 2008 -
3 Admissions Paragraphy Essay - career goals, education

3 - I rewrote it... My goal is to obtain an enjoyable career in which I cannot only express my...

Undergraduatemelaniesucks - Oct 6, 2008melaniesucks - Jan 12, 2009
Aim to entertain using quotation and contrast - essay intro

2 - Good afternoon. As I am not sure what kind of assistance you are seeking, I have edited for...

Essayspinks1026 - Oct 6, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 7, 2008
Proofread Essay on Innocent Erendira and Her Heartless Grandmother

NEW - Hi, this is somewhat raw and i want to rework it, but it is due in 18 hours and...

Writing FeedbackAl44ex - Oct 6, 2008 -
UF Essay - The Place I Adore

2 - ...lugar! (I will never go back to that place!)" ...Oaks Middle school that I... ...language, customs, traditions,...

Undergraduatecarompapale1 - Oct 6, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 7, 2008
Satire Essay on animal farm, a modest proposal and the TV show frontline

2 - Good afternoon. Your post is seeking course specific answers, and as such my free assistance will be very...

Essaysbenny332 - Oct 6, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 7, 2008
Tattoos essay: Our Newest Problem?

4 - You will need to return to the places where you originally found the information. For each of the facts...

Writing Feedbacksilent - Oct 6, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 7, 2008
Argumentative Essay: Its no ones word

4 - the essay is aiming at people to stop using the N word...

Writing Feedbackobama - Oct 6, 2008obama - Oct 6, 2008
'Continuing to excel' - FSU Essay - Vires

2 - It looks like it answers the prompt efficiently. I would use the Latin word you wrote about in the...

Undergraduatetrewton - Oct 6, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 7, 2008
my part in giving back and bettering the society - Proofreading and Advice

NEW - UF Admission Essay. Here's the prompt Describe a meaningful event, experience or accomplishment in your life and how...

Undergraduatemikeg12 - Oct 6, 2008 -
Sentence Problem - it's a fragment, how to reword it?

9 - violence increases in our country every day. just a second opinion to support the first :]...

Grammar, UsageAl44ex - Oct 6, 2008JennieHeartsYou - Mar 3, 2010
College application -brainstorming- advice

3 - Thank you very much for you help :) i will follow those suggestions and then submit it so i...

Undergraduatelilfred333 - Oct 6, 2008lilfred333 - Oct 7, 2008
Help starting and brainstorming history paper [essay question]

NEW - The paper is expected to be between 5-7 pages. I'm in the process of brainstorming for it. The instructor...

Writing Feedbackkorr2221 - Oct 6, 2008 -
The use of contractions in my admission essay / I am vs. I'm

5 - The use of contractions is largely inappropriate in formal academic writing. Many instructors will count off for their use,...

Grammar, Usagejujubean - Oct 6, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 26, 2008
Comparing a short story with a poem - about race, justince, power

4 - That sounds great. Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com...

Essayscaligyrl4lyfe - Oct 6, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 7, 2008
Defining moments in people's lives - uc admissions essay

2 - Nice job; a good example and a great answer to the prompt. The essay flows well, good transitions are...

Undergraduatelaurenkill - Oct 5, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 6, 2008
Academic Essay Topic, a common essay subject

19 - Great attention graber, it make me want to read more!!...

Essaysrilwen - Oct 5, 2008ruthyj - Dec 28, 2011
Cross-country / Nano Research Facility - one of your activities Help

NEW - In the space provided below, please elaborate on one of your activities (extracurricular, personal activities, or work experience)(150 words...

Undergraduateprivater_ryan - Oct 5, 2008 -
Intern in Washington D.C under Congressman Duncan Hunter - Common App Essay

2 - You've got a good subject idea here; this is obviously an experience that has made an impact on you....

Undergraduateprivater_ryan - Oct 5, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 6, 2008
UofM Book that impacted you essay - 1984 application essay

2 - As I have not read this book, I am unsure of the ending. It wounds from your closing quote...

Book ReportsLedPorcupineToo - Oct 5, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 6, 2008
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