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Many men and women are making the decision to have children later in life.

3 - @thuongnguyen6372 please your first sentence in your second paragraph has some uncertainty which you need to avoid that; be...

Writing Feedbackthuongnguyen6372 - Feb 28, 2024Aroma - Mar 14, 2024
NTU Personal Statement Essay - Skills or experiences that are relevant to the programmes applied for

2 - I think there is not enough passion displayed in this essay because of the mix and match approach you...

Undergraduatekneesbees - Feb 28, 2024Holt - Mar 1, 2024
Why do you select New Zealand?

3 - @carpediem24h Please, identify a challenge which you think New Zealand is in advantage to help solve in Indonesia....

Scholarshipcarpediem24h - Feb 27, 2024Aroma - Mar 8, 2024
202x GKS U - Personal Statement (University Track - Physical Therapy)

2 - The first thing I will advise you to do is write a totally new essay. Do not rehash your...

Scholarshipstarshineanon - Feb 27, 2024Holt - Feb 27, 2024
Personal statement as a medical scholar undergraduate gks

3 - @Holt Thanks so much sir I will amend my mistakes...

UndergraduateBangtan girl - Feb 26, 2024Bangtan girl - Feb 28, 2024
Computers are becoming an essential part of education. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

3 - @phuongstella You should further explain your first point before jumping to the next one. Be specific about it. Each...

Writing Feedbackphuongstella - Feb 26, 2024sophiemoore62 - Mar 1, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 2_ ENVIRONMENT

3 - @phuongmai123 I think generally you shouldn't ask questions in an IELTS writing task 2. Each body paragraph should contain...

Writing Feedbackphuongmai123 - Feb 26, 2024sophiemoore62 - Feb 29, 2024
Motivation letter to Germany embassy in computer science for master degree

3 - @Nazfe73 Your motivation letter only talked about your personal interest. How does it benefit the people of Yemen; I...

LettersNazfe73 - Feb 26, 2024Aroma - Mar 8, 2024
A leader of people - a short essay on a subject of personal importance to you

2 - The essay has room for improvement. For example, you should have had an expanded discussion regarding how you ended...

ScholarshipXUANHUA - Feb 26, 2024Holt - Feb 27, 2024
Writing task 1: The line graph and table show the average monthly temperatures and annual hours

3 - I think this can be shortened into just one sentence and you should only mention the most significant...

Writing Feedbackamber99999 - Feb 25, 2024sophiemoore62 - Feb 29, 2024
GKS essay - biology/bioengineering

2 - Which type of GKS application did you write this for? Undergraduate? Masters? Doctoral? It will be difficult for me...

UndergraduateFredd1k - Feb 25, 2024Holt - Feb 27, 2024
IELTS Writing task 2. Spoken communication is more powerful than written communication.

3 - @Miyu2k7 if you often cause misunderstanding in your writing, I think it's best to state your opinion about whether...

Writing FeedbackMiyu2k7 - Feb 25, 2024sophiemoore62 - Feb 29, 2024
IELTS Writing Task 2: Some people think children should start school at a very early age

2 - There is a lack of proper comparison discussion in this compare and contrast + personal opinion essay. The writing...

Writing FeedbackGuest - Feb 25, 2024Holt - Feb 27, 2024
Writing task 2 : Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal.

2 - You cannot use a conjunction to start a sentence since there are no words, phrases, or clauses to...

Writing FeedbackSandra Charloote - Feb 25, 2024Holt - Feb 27, 2024
EPFL Master's program in Applied Mathematics Statement of Purpose

2 - Since you are applying for a masters degree course, it will be best to highlight your college education, work...

Graduatevalg01 - Feb 24, 2024Holt - Feb 27, 2024
secondary students believe that a university degree is the only passport to later success in life

3 - Please Grape, you have done well in giving an explicit explanation to both side of the argument but you...

Writing Feedbackgrapes - Feb 24, 2024Aroma - Feb 29, 2024
It is a natural process which animal species such as dinosaurs become extinct.

2 - Your discussion is not really very clear. You are too focused on using advanced vocabulary, which is not the...

Writing Feedbackdorypham123 - Feb 24, 2024Holt - Feb 25, 2024
GKS personal statement for Master of Science in Business Administration

2 - There are only academic accomplishments mentioned in this essay. While it is well written at first glance, the reviewer...

ScholarshipDeepaaaa11 - Feb 23, 2024Holt - Feb 25, 2024
Some students don't enroll in science majors - why?

2 - This is a writer's personal opinion. It should not be used to start the restatement section as it...

Writing FeedbackDann - Feb 23, 2024Holt - Feb 25, 2024
Food Science - Why are these knowledge and skills important to your country's development?

2 - The data that you present covers information relevant to your country. Therefore, the main thought of the reviewer will...

Scholarshipirndyhayw - Feb 23, 2024Holt - Feb 25, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university...

3 - @Holt Thank you for your feedback! I understand....

Writing Feedbacksophiemoore62 - Feb 22, 2024sophiemoore62 - Feb 29, 2024
ielts writing task 2: transportation

2 - Do not write run - on sentences. The prompt restatement and writer's opinion section was written as a long...

Writing FeedbackTaylorDn - Feb 22, 2024Holt - Feb 25, 2024
IELTS Writing task 2: "In many countries, the fast fashion industry has gained significant ..."

3 - @maidong You should address at least 2 problems and propose a solution that relates to fast fashion. In this...

Writing Feedbackmaidong - Feb 22, 2024sophiemoore62 - Mar 1, 2024
IELTS Writing task 1_Table_The number of visitors in the UK and their average spending

2 - The analysis portion of the essay is well developed. Although, a little bit more discussion would have helped you...

Writing FeedbackTTT3miml - Feb 21, 2024Holt - Feb 23, 2024
GKS Graduate Program 2024 PERSONAL STATEMENT - Interior Architecture

2 - While your motivations for applying to the program are admirable, you seem to fall short of the other qualifications...

Scholarshipsselene - Feb 21, 2024Holt - Feb 23, 2024
the importance of Oneness

2 - Better than one? One what? I think you meant to say "Standing as one is better than standing...

Writing Feedbackclyro - Feb 21, 2024Holt - Feb 23, 2024
Design in Architecture - AAS Scholarship - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution?

3 - you should more focus on connecting your academic background/professional experience to your motivation on choosing the course and major...

ScholarshipKata - Feb 20, 2024sselene - Feb 26, 2024
The international community should reduce or eliminate the debts of the world's poorest countries

2 - It is not enough to simply be against the idea presented when developing the Writer's opinion. Review the required...

Writing Feedbackdotranuyennhi - Feb 20, 2024Holt - Feb 23, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - In the modern world it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people

2 - While the restatement of the topic is aligned with the original discussion, there is a problem with the writer's...

Writing Feedbackcardilua - Feb 20, 2024Holt - Feb 22, 2024
Maritime and Logistics Management; how will the proposed study contribute to your career

2 - You can remove the first paragraph in this case. It is not really an opening that directly responds to...

ScholarshipAroma - Feb 19, 2024Holt - Feb 22, 2024
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