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IELTS Writing Task 2: Media's negative influence on society's tolerance for new ideas?

2 - Your response is unrelated to the given writing instruction. While the restatement is somewhat acceptable, the writer's opinion fails...

Writing Feedbackmanhp - Dec 10, 2023Holt - Dec 16, 2023
Which is the best way to success: careful planning or risk-taking?

3 - @Holt Thank you for your advice. However, this essay is not for TOEFL, it's just for my next English...

Writing FeedbackVohoangmy - Dec 10, 2023Vohoangmy - Dec 17, 2023
Personal Statement for Erasmus Mundus Joint Master Program - Global-MINDS

2 - I cannot say that this is an effective personal statement at this point. The strength of your interest in...

Scholarshipannidaak - Dec 9, 2023Holt - Dec 25, 2023
Application for Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship for Bachelor of Computer Science

2 - Your vision is not clear enough in this letter. Where do you want to go? Alignment of goals is...

LettersTalha bashir - Dec 9, 2023Holt - Dec 25, 2023
PERSONAL STATMENT FOR MASTER PROGRAM IN SHEFFIELD UNIVERSITY (SUSTAINABLE ARCHITECTURE DESIGN)

2 - I am not sure if you were given a guide for writing the personal statement. Some universities offer prompt...

GraduateHiba Hallak - Dec 9, 2023Holt - Dec 16, 2023
Path to Studying Business in Korea - Personal statement GKS

2 - I cannot help you with a proper review of your personal statement. The first of which is that you...

Undergraduateacha14 - Dec 8, 2023Holt - Dec 8, 2023
Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.

3 - The overview is quite good as it shows the outline and what you will present for the whole essay....

Writing FeedbackThenh - Dec 7, 2023Haohao0719 - Dec 12, 2023
"The Biscuit Heist" - Common Application Personal Statement

3 - Any edits, you think it needs? I am just hesitant to submit it to schools, because in early decision...

Undergraduateerfansamay - Dec 7, 2023erfansamay - Dec 23, 2023
TU Graz MsC of Computer Science motivation Letter

2 - The letter is good. The theoretical motivation is there. It is clear. Where you want to apply it and...

Lettersayushya - Dec 7, 2023Holt - Dec 8, 2023
WRITING TASK 1 (IELTS):Number of Vehicles Bought in Kiwi City

2 - The summary overview was almost complete. You just forgot to reference that the vehicle sales were measured in the...

Writing Feedbackzitiudayaj - Dec 6, 2023Holt - Dec 8, 2023
Motivation letter to study masters in material science word limit is 2500 characters.

2 - Since you have an interest in strengthening the use of carbon fibers in an aerospace setting, why not consider...

Letterstarunkp - Dec 6, 2023Holt - Dec 8, 2023
writing task 1-line graph : The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies

2 - Be careful with your singular v. plural word usage. 5 is more than 1 and therefore, should be...

Writing Feedbacknagan123456 - Dec 5, 2023Holt - Dec 8, 2023
ielt p2: causes why people like online meeting than meeting directly and solution for it

2 - In the later part of the first paragraph, you should be separating your suggestions for solutions to the situation...

Writing Feedbackductam06 - Dec 5, 2023Holt - Dec 8, 2023
Advice for a statement of purpose for a master in robotics at EPFL

NEW - I'm writing a statement of purpose to apply for an MSc at the EPFL. The guidelines given by...

Graduatefrozono9 - Dec 5, 2023 -
UCLA Theater, Film and Television Supplemental Essays - Life Challenge Essay

2 - Your essay is right on the mark as far as I am concerned. You have depicted a lifelong struggle...

UndergraduateConfusingSphinx - Dec 3, 2023Holt - Dec 8, 2023
Balancing my life priorities - UBC Application: Tell us about who you are.

NEW - Please comment on my application essay for UBC Engineering, the question is "TELL US ABOUT WHO YOU ARE. HOW...

Undergraduateakmaster101 - Dec 3, 2023 -
Statement of purpose for MSC mechatronics at ETH review; the sop has word limit of 1000 words.

NEW - Seeing my old grandparents struggle with daily chores like cleaning, cooking or even getting items lower to the ground...

Graduategleipmir - Dec 3, 2023 -
IELTS WRITRING TASK 1: The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European

2 - The summary overview requires you to give a short listing of the information provided, which will be discussed...

Writing FeedbackQaan - Dec 2, 2023Holt - Dec 8, 2023
writing task 1: The chart shows the information about salt intake in the US in 2000.

2 - I would like to call your attention to this presentation. It is confusing. You are focusing the reader's...

Writing Feedbackyeonyi - Dec 1, 2023Holt - Dec 8, 2023
WRITING TASK 2: IN MANY COUNTRIES AROUND THE WORLD, LIFE EXPECTANCY IS INCREASING

3 - The overview does not reply to the request of the topic. It would be better to present the advantages...

Writing Feedbacklinhanhhihi - Dec 1, 2023Haohao0719 - Dec 14, 2023
Looking for critiques on USC Cinematic Arts (Animation) Personal Statement!

2 - The essay is good. I can tell that you are trying to discuss your family background and how difficult...

UndergraduateSamkzarts - Dec 1, 2023Holt - Dec 8, 2023
Writing task 1 - The percentage of households with cars

2 - The first sentence of your summary overview is not really going to be considered an original statement. It still...

Writing FeedbackMemeLorD - Nov 30, 2023Holt - Dec 8, 2023
The line chart illustrate fish and meat consumption (grams) in HCM city from 1979 to 2004-WRITING 1

2 - There are different meat descriptions available in the chart. You should not be identifying the meats in a...

Writing Feedbackvothanhan27 - Nov 30, 2023Holt - Dec 8, 2023
SECCLO programme, career aspirations, relevant experience and achievements

2 - The program is asking you to describe your professional experience in relation to the program requirements. I do not...

Undergraduatechol - Nov 30, 2023Holt - Dec 8, 2023
Document about your academic and research background, career goals, academic interest and program

NEW - Growing up helping my parents fill the charts with students' scores, I stumbled upon the first data science lesson:...

Graduatephanthuccac - Nov 30, 2023 -
Traveling to work - writing task 1: Pie chart

2 - The summary overview is missing from the actual discussion. That is the first paragraph that kicks off all task...

Writing Feedbackthytyn - Nov 29, 2023Holt - Dec 3, 2023
[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] The effect of professional sports on children

2 - You should not have began to present your personal opinions about the discussion in the first paragraph. That would...

Writing Feedbackmabel111 - Nov 29, 2023Holt - Dec 3, 2023
Ielts: is using technology a bad trend ?

2 - Try to shorten your essay next time to no more than 300 words. That is to ensure that you...

Writing Feedbackductam06 - Nov 29, 2023Holt - Dec 3, 2023
HEALTH DISPARITIES AND EQUITY - NEED

NEW - ~Need writing feedback on research paper on health disparities and strategies for health equity. Please list 3 weaknesses within...

Writing Feedbacktasim - Nov 29, 2023 -
UBC SAUDER PERSONAL PROFILE QUESTION

2 - This sounds like a very concise presentation of the problem that you faced as a co-CEO of the school...

Undergraduateseniorstudent - Nov 29, 2023Holt - Dec 3, 2023
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