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"The challenges I had to go through to finally learn a language" - Common app personal statement

2 - Well, this is certainly a very impressive take on the struggle of a foreign student to learn the English...

UndergraduateKuvyl - Oct 7, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
How MS B analytics program align with your goals and values? How will you contribute towards cohort?

2 - You should be discussing points that would show you are more than qualified for the program. You are not...

Graduatetrustme123 - Oct 7, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
The diagram below shows the production of olive oil. Summarize the information - 7 stages involved

2 - You have summarized the presentation too much. In your desire to present the quickest version of information possible, you...

Writing Feedbackpminhanh - Oct 7, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
Why I want to become an anesthesiologist assistant

2 - Do you have an underlying condition that requires you to have regular check ups? Is this one of...

Undergraduatemicrowavedchild - Oct 6, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
'How does this affect Lebron's legacy' - National Merit Essay: Influential Person

2 - It is obvious that you have written this essay from the heart. It shows in the way that you...

Undergraduateomh66206 - Oct 6, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
Catalyst of Change: Pursuing AI Dreams from Mexico to Korea (GKS scholarship)

NEW - personal statement Hi guys I will apply for the GKS scholarship, via university what do you think of...

ScholarshipByf1nd - Oct 6, 2023 -
Present your ideas about what you should or shouldn't do to live green

2 - This is a well written essay. it shows that the writer has a good grasp of the English language...

Writing Feedbackanhthueunsung - Oct 6, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
Commonwealth Development Impact Statement Part 1 - journalism challenges

2 - The impact statement you have chosen to use does not necessarily reflect the sentiments that you have presented as...

ScholarshipSanskriti - Oct 5, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
My academic journey - Chevening Leadership and Influence Essay

2 - This is not a leadership and influencing essay in line with the expected information for Chevening. What you wrote...

Scholarshiphabib_baharuddin - Oct 5, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
Writing task 1 Ielts: young people's expectations for change in five different areas

2 - Yes, statistics were provided in the image. However, you need to identify the type of image before you...

Writing Feedbackakane - Oct 5, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
The percentage of time adults spent on different activities in a country in 1958 and 2008

2 - You have misrepresented the number of pie charts in your summary overview. You need to use the plural form...

Writing Feedbackkhanh416 - Oct 4, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
Artist Statement - SAIC (School of the Art Institute of chicago)

2 - Since this is an artist statement, try to develop more insight into how you got your start in photography....

UndergraduateRuan_sds - Oct 3, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
The charts show the percentage of electricity consumed by different sectors in Eastern Australia

2 - I think you made a wrong word choice here. I believe you meant to say reverse. Which refers...

Writing FeedbacklemonadeA - Oct 3, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
Task 1 writing ielts - carbon dioxide released by four different countries

3 - @laiphuongthao two nations,Italy and Portugal Following up were Sweden... in the given order, respectively/correspondingly. on the other hand, You...

Writing Feedbacklaiphuongthao - Oct 3, 2023Duy Dang - Oct 11, 2023
The given line graph compares the quantities of three companies' waste output for 15 years

2 - Please be guided regarding the word count when accomplishing the task 1 essay. You should be writing within the...

Writing FeedbackDinhthy - Oct 3, 2023Holt - Oct 18, 2024
Reasons why friendship is gradually dying

2 - You have provided reasons for friendships ending. Those do not necessarily reflect the death of friendships. You are speaking...

Writing Feedbackkieuuoanh - Oct 3, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
IELTS WRITING TASK 1: Plastic Bottle Production Process

NEW - Hi! I would love to see comments based upon IELTS marking criteria, and possibly a detailed band score! Thank...

Writing Feedbackheynameischarles - Oct 3, 2023 -
Business Administration GKS personal statement undergraduate

NEW - Hello, I wish to apply GKS. It will be a huge help to me for you to check my...

Undergraduatebath444 - Oct 2, 2023 -
Leadership and Influence - Chevening Essay - An Ex Employee, Currently Business Owner

NEW - Greetings! Really appreciate your help with this Leaderhip and Influence essay for Chevening application. Any input is welcomed. Thank...

ScholarshipNGP1112 - Oct 2, 2023 -
Global warming is one of the biggest threaten to our environment. Cause and solution ?

2 - I can understand what you are trying to tell me in the essay. The problem, is that even though...

Writing Feedbackpth1234 - Oct 1, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
Goverment should prioritize heathcare instead of orther areas. Do you agree or disagree?

2 - Do not confuse the well being of a person with healthcare. Well being is a larger field of personal...

Writing FeedbackGiahuy2107 - Oct 1, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
Master of Computer Science Statement of purpose - review & suggestion

NEW - Computer Science Statement of purpose Dear University X Admissions Committee, I am writing to express my ambition...

Graduateteddies - Oct 1, 2023 -
Construct stadium beneficial or not? IELTS Writting Task 2

2 - The essay is over written. It is not really a task 2 essay exercise at this point. It is...

Writing FeedbackOutsider_000 - Oct 1, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
IELTS WRITING TASK 1: The proportion of money spent on different goods and services of households

NEW - The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010. The...

Writing FeedbackThuhuongab123987 - Oct 1, 2023 -
Video Game Essay for English 108

2 - There is a lack of clear thesis statement in this essay. What is the point you want to make...

Research Papersmikezahora - Oct 1, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
ISO ideas writing "WHO AM I?" for NFL Pitch Brochure

2 - It's good but needs to better focus on your drafting skills. The how is just as important as the...

UndergraduatePMG_SportsBiz - Sep 30, 2023Holt - Oct 3, 2023
WRITE A SHORT PARAGRAPH (100-120 WORDS) ABOUT HOW TO KEEP FIT AND STAY HEALTHY.

2 - You have done a good job on writing this statement. It shows that you are becoming more comfortable writing...

Writing Feedbacktranhaithien2005 - Sep 29, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives.

2 - You are showing the reader why you partly agree with the given statement using a comparative discussion method. While...

Writing Feedbackmikey04 - Sep 29, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
Dicussion between putting some strict controls about noise and making as much noise as possible

2 - Your prompt restatement became confusing to the reader. There is a lack of clarity and coherence in that presentation...

Writing Feedbackphuongna - Sep 29, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
Statement of Purpose/Study Plan for Master's in International Business.

NEW - Prompt: I am applying for a Master's in international business in South Korea and they asked for a...

Graduateomyb - Sep 28, 2023 -
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