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Statement of research interest for a Ph.D application in Quantum Gravity

NEW - Hello everyone. I am writing a statement of research interest (SRI henceforth) and a cover letter for a Ph.D...

GraduateProtonovich - Sep 13, 2023 -
[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] UNPAID COMMUNITY SERVICE - obligation for students to make a better society

2 - The explanation is incomplete. They joined in without payment and then? What happened? Do they continue to maintain...

Writing FeedbackDuy Dang - Sep 13, 2023Holt - Sep 26, 2023
Common App / "Why did I take a gap year" essay / international student / early decision in november

2 - You spent too much time explaining the concept of the gap year. The focus should be on why you...

Undergraduategigibsz - Sep 12, 2023Holt - Sep 26, 2023
Writing Ielts task 1, decribe the manufacture of frozen fish pies

NEW - the process of making fish pies The diagram below describes the process of making processed fish pies. Take...

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The fluctuation in monthly prices for copper, nickel and zinc throughout the year 2014

2 - The report is well developed and contains all of the necessary information. However, the paragraph presentations are uneven in...

Writing FeedbackNguyenChuc - Sep 12, 2023Holt - Sep 26, 2023
Writing task 1 essay about US annual income

2 - Do not use a numerical ordinal if you are not going to proceed with such usage in the later...

Writing Feedbacktdnkevin - Sep 12, 2023Holt - Sep 26, 2023
Doing away with old buildings and building modern ones or restoring old buildings?

2 - This is incorrect. Not all people really care about architecture and the preservation of old buildings. The reference...

Writing FeedbackThyn1103 - Sep 12, 2023Holt - Sep 25, 2023
Holiday at home or abroad - ielts writting task 2

2 - The first paragraph concerning the difficulties of international travel is well written to a certain point. The way that...

Writing FeedbackDeverX - Sep 12, 2023Holt - Sep 25, 2023
Too much money on repairing old buildings instead of pulling them down and constructing the new ones

2 - Avoid exaggerating your reference to the discussion topic as the examiner will definitely lower your score in that aspect....

Writing Feedbackellie1912 - Sep 11, 2023Holt - Sep 25, 2023
The low productivity of agriculture land - IELTS Cambridge 8 Test 1 Task 1

2 - There is no such thing as a circle graph. I believe that you are trying to reference a...

Writing Feedbackhtnlinh - Sep 10, 2023Holt - Sep 25, 2023
CRITICAL ANALYSIS PAPER ON JUVENILE GANGS

2 - You appear to have a special connection with the word "also", using it with every chance that you get....

Research Papersmelarchie - Sep 10, 2023Holt - Sep 25, 2023
Benefits and drawbacks of sharing information

3 - @TryToWrite I think you could potentially cut the two body paragraphs in half and combine that to make a...

Writing FeedbackTryToWrite - Sep 10, 2023GracefulRoseThor - Sep 25, 2023
Write an essay how adults can influence younger people's behaviour

3 - Your information feels accurate. The structure of the paragraphs could use some work and there are some spelling mistakes...

Writing FeedbackOrangEnglish - Sep 10, 2023GracefulRoseThor - Sep 25, 2023
The graph shows oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010.

2 - The presentation is good. You did your best to present the information properly and coherently to the examiner. However,...

Writing FeedbackThang113 - Sep 10, 2023Holt - Sep 25, 2023
Explains the effects of music and music therapy on those with anxiety and ADHD.

2 - The section marked as number 2 in this presentation should be brought up to the top of the research...

Research Paperselliecaroline05 - Sep 9, 2023Holt - Sep 25, 2023
Recommendation letter for Undergraduate degree for GKS program_Biotechnology

NEW - This is my recommendation letter that I wrote on behalf of my high school principal. Dear Board of...

LettersUser_81 - Sep 9, 2023 -
Personal Statement for MSc in Energy Systems at Oxford University

2 - I am wondering if you were given a specific set of writing guides before you wrote the personal statement....

GraduateAJaya - Sep 8, 2023Holt - Sep 24, 2023
IELTS Writing Task 1: The chart illustrates the income of households in the US

2 - The last paragraph of this essay is not structured as a mere report, which affected the overall presentation of...

Writing FeedbackDennis Dawl - Sep 8, 2023Holt - Sep 24, 2023
The graph describes the changes in medical funding in four countries from 2010-2018

2 - Familiarize yourself with time references based on numerical gaps. There is a 4 year gap between information presentations,...

Writing Feedbackkaibao - Sep 8, 2023Holt - Sep 24, 2023
GAP YEAR ESSAY FOR COMMONAPP

2 - It is definitely an explanation of why you had to take a gap year. However, it is not the...

UndergraduateNaveed123 - Sep 8, 2023Holt - Sep 24, 2023
My journey of independence and family bonds Essay (Personal statement)

2 - The essay does not really show how you overcame an obstacle. It comes across more as you just complaining...

Undergraduateccbubblegirl - Sep 7, 2023Holt - Sep 24, 2023
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 : Young population outnumbers the old in various countries

2 - This is an incorrect interpretation of the original presentation. There is no dispute presented since only one public...

Writing Feedbackthanhthao22552 - Sep 7, 2023Holt - Sep 24, 2023
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 about learning widely spo languages lead to the increase of minority languages

2 - Stick to your discussion opinion when explaining your point of view. There is no need to defend the opposite...

Writing Feedbackplinh136 - Sep 7, 2023Holt - Sep 24, 2023
The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned development site

2 - While you have met the minimum word count for the report, I would not say that you will be...

Writing Feedbackbinnguyen - Sep 7, 2023Holt - Sep 24, 2023
Rubber Bands College Essay INTRO paragraph

2 - I find the paragraph to be highly redundant and lacking in focus. There is too much emphasis on the...

Undergraduatertm7272 - Sep 6, 2023Holt - Sep 18, 2023
Different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

2 - This is a failing task 1 essay. You need to learn how to write the proper 3-4 paragraph essay...

Writing Feedbackroadtocanada2108 - Sep 6, 2023Holt - Sep 18, 2023
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Free education or new technology in developing countries.

2 - You are misinforming the reader and placing unnecessary information in your restatement that will affect the original message...

Writing Feedbackvuvietanh123 - Sep 6, 2023Holt - Sep 18, 2023
DEVELOPMENT MANAGEMENT STUDIES- MOTIVATION LETTER FOR SCHOLARSHIP APPLICATION

3 - THANK YOU VERY MUSH...

Lettersibrahimaaa - Sep 6, 2023ibrahimaaa - Sep 27, 2023
Do you think owning a home rather than renting one is very important to people?

4 - You don't follow what the topic is asking - whether you go for renting a house or owning one....

Writing FeedbackTruong Dang - Sep 6, 2023desukanani - Sep 17, 2023
A padded cell - QuestBridge Personal Essay

2 - You are right about the "I am poor" theme of the paper. That does not fly with the reviewers...

Scholarshipantiquelegend - Sep 6, 2023Holt - Sep 12, 2023
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