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the main purposes of a country's education system

6 - talk about the variety in public school curriculum, private schools, boarding schools, athletes, scholarships, neighborhood, admission process, money. ...

Writing Feedbackthinhtvdhtm - Sep 19, 2009kyleroland - Nov 15, 2009
"XX Model UN Conference" - Common App Short Essay

10 - What is thee question that you are answer. try to add more in about how this experience affected you....

Undergraduatejindu85 - Nov 14, 2009NEEDHELP99 - Nov 15, 2009
My english teacher as an influential person - Common App Prompt

4 - Yes, I think you should get right to the point: My eleventh grade English teacher, Mrs. Ostrenko, is...

Undergraduatedavidson10 - Nov 14, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 15, 2009
SUNY Application (Karate, my life)

6 - Google: embryonic breathing. Read what Dr. Yang has to say. It has applications for martial arts, meditation, health, and...

UndergraduateLordHoseph - Nov 12, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 15, 2009
Supplement DEAR ROOMMATE

4 - I look forward to meeting you and sharing with you my enthusiasm about (all kinds of things at this...

Undergraduatemia01 - Nov 14, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 15, 2009
waterskiing, UC Prompt 2: Personal Experience.

4 - good subject and connection to ur grades. make more variences in ur sentence structure and use more sophistocated, but...

Undergraduatejohn7777 - Nov 14, 2009kyleroland - Nov 15, 2009
"live your life as a work of art" - Common Application

6 - This is not quite right: I live vicariously through my piano. When you live vicariously through the piano, it...

UndergraduateRhonWeasley - Nov 14, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 15, 2009
Growing up a Muslim American, a world of justice and equality

3 - It was not until recently that I discovered that my mother not only accomplished everything for us as a...

UndergraduateHaderdaraide - Nov 14, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 15, 2009
My enthusiasm and commitment help me to make a great contribution to research field

3 - The boundless possibilities for innovation and the sudden revelations that stimulate one for further analysis of a rationale in...

Graduatemahdi1984 - Nov 13, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 15, 2009
Bowdoin Supplement - "Because There Ain't No Mountain High Enough"

7 - Outing clubber is confusing. It is better to accommodate the reader by using a different term... The prospect...

UndergraduateRhonWeasley - Nov 6, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 15, 2009
Advertisement Analysis Essay Help - A $385 Billion Dollar Image

2 - Thanks for posting, long-time lurker! your last para needs help: As we have analyze these advertisements, we...

Writing FeedbackMCafOcc - Nov 13, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 15, 2009
The Global Connections Committee -elaborating on your activity

2 - Well, this is a great choice of activity. To get rid of those five words, scratch out what does...

Undergraduatetdbeckham - Nov 13, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 15, 2009
"Why people love watching action movies" Formal Essay

3 - "Action movies are full filling to many movie watchers because it supplies audiences with electrifying excitement, presents us a...

Writing FeedbackYojimbo_bobobo - Nov 10, 2009car3n - Nov 15, 2009
"Judge people by their character" - FSU Essay Rough Draft - Mores

4 - "Judge people by their character, not by how they look,their looks. " "I succeeded in making it and...

Undergraduatethndthighs - Nov 14, 2009glorfs - Nov 15, 2009
A Different Spin on The Diversity Essay

8 - Dr. Suess also said: Unless someone like you cares a whole awful lot, nothing is toing to get better....

Undergraduatechaotic_kiddo - Nov 13, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 15, 2009
Not a Love Story - UT Person of Influence

6 - "but I lacked the confidence to do so because I had no idea how to dance like everyone else...

Undergraduatepatorooni - Nov 12, 2009glorfs - Nov 15, 2009
"I flourish in large classes" - Rutgers admissions essay so far..

4 - ...lifetime have enabled me to ascertain a plethora of morals... Wow, lots of big words... be careful not...

Undergraduateairrudra - Nov 13, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 15, 2009
Common App Main Essay- "Dancing Through The Days"

4 - Back in the dorms, my roommate Melissa and I professed our excitement for the next day, when we...

Undergraduateutooley - Nov 13, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 15, 2009
Water is the most common element for ordinary people; A paragraph about water

4 - thanks for helping me!...

Writing Feedbackapi - Nov 13, 2009api - Nov 15, 2009
Wisc Prompts - #1 Personal Experience, #2 Why Economics?

3 - Hey thanks. I think you just pointed out a huge mistake of mine. (make an introduction without getting into...

Undergraduatemin12 - Nov 14, 2009min12 - Nov 15, 2009
IELTS Writing "agree and disagree"

12 - o i went thr the site but its only to translate it to another language..not 1 that i was...

Essayspuspa - Oct 28, 2009puspa - Nov 15, 2009
TOEFL:External appearances can provide important clues to a person

6 - I am a chinese student who will take toefl test. My essay's structure is similiar with yours. I think...

Writing Feedbacklyqinyi - Nov 2, 2009tiantianwenzi - Nov 15, 2009
Cloudhouse - another essay for Common app Topic of my choice

5 - well, haha, I only hope I will appeal all of them, doubt if I have any bad schools, muahahahaa,...

Undergraduatehanhdung - Nov 11, 2009hanhdung - Nov 15, 2009
"the challenges of life plus my condition" - my pizazz on college apps

6 - thank you for your input...

Undergraduateplaytm300 - Nov 9, 2009playtm300 - Nov 14, 2009
UW Honors/ Good citizenship comes from good scholarship

2 - Overall, you've done a good job answering the prompt. The one thing that struck me was how much your...

ScholarshiptobeJames - Nov 14, 2009mmmargarita - Nov 14, 2009
CC supplement question. why do you wish to attend?

3 - I think the idea of splitting the reasons into different categories is a good idea. But it seems to...

Undergraduatezeem - Nov 13, 2009jindu85 - Nov 14, 2009
Rutgers Essay Topic: First two paragraphs

4 - Here's how i'd change it up. It's only small changes. over all i think your short essay is very...

Undergraduateipwnu4free - Nov 14, 2009Jd87rh - Nov 14, 2009
Tulane personal statement - swimming

2 - allowed me to take part in... It was not surprising, t hen, that my coach... Wow, you...

Undergraduateicecreamcat - Nov 13, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 14, 2009
Intellectual, athletic, cultural, social interests apart from medicine

6 - Well, the first paragraph is solid. It begins with a clear assertion, you explain it, and then you reflect...

Undergraduateindianajones - Nov 12, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 14, 2009
Opinions on Narrative Essay (finance). Does my paper answer the prompt?

10 - I'll close the thread right now. You can see the TOS for explanations of everything. Thanks!!!...

GraduateFredMax - Nov 8, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 14, 2009
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