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Common App essay - bicycling the country

2 - I'm really sorry I didn't get to this in time! I hope you do well. If you still have...

Undergraduatesickziphere - Oct 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 2, 2009
"my mom" - Personal Essay About A Significant Person in My Life

2 - Hi Rebecca, I think you're off to a great start here. I would like to give you a...

UndergraduateScoochie - Nov 2, 2009ivyeyesediting - Nov 2, 2009
Northwestern- my kind of soup

2 - Great use of colons and semi-colons in that first paragraph. Take out the word "underlying" if you want, because...

Undergraduateangie127 - Oct 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 2, 2009
argumentative journal : "Being a Victim of American Popular Culture" -feedback

3 - well okay...I'll revise it again,thanks. I need your help after I do my revision Sean ^^...

Writing Feedbackdinda - Oct 30, 2009dinda - Nov 2, 2009
"Teaching Kids, Who Ended Up, Teaching Me"

4 - A few misspellings but that's about it. You have a strong introduction but I don't see how the kids...

Undergraduatethickieg - Oct 31, 2009fendij3 - Nov 2, 2009
NYU APPLICATION multiple prompts

3 - Here are some revisions. Let me know if the remedy is worse than the disease. ... Please tell...

Undergraduatepatorooni - Nov 2, 2009patorooni - Nov 2, 2009
Zhang: Essay on Hamlet, need help for editing

3 - ok whats the book all about tell your author about what you want to talk about give plenty of...

Book Reportsq1q2q1q2q - Oct 28, 2009shania123 - Nov 2, 2009
The chair.....

6 - ohhhhh. finally I found somebody understand what I'm saying...oh py the way I'm writing this Reply from the prison...hahah...

Poetrybilal ABUZENAH - Oct 25, 2009bilal ABUZENAH - Nov 2, 2009
Questions regarding SOP (lenght, research)

2 - The length varies a lot. Undergrads often write shorter ones than grad student applications. Two pages might be safe....

Graduatetinkywinky - Oct 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 2, 2009
My World and Background + My Favorite Personal Quality --- UC Essay!

10 - I know that since I have the right personality I will be for achieving success in this field....

Undergraduateaa6877 - Oct 24, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 2, 2009
I am an open minded individual ; UMD College Park/ Diversity

6 - Hyun Young, you should give a little more time to offering ideas here if you want this person to...

Undergraduatejohnd23 - Oct 27, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 2, 2009
CommonApp - Personal Essay - Topic of Your Choice - "Believing is Achieving"

3 - That's a little harsh. Parallelism can sometimes be subtly sidestepped, as contrast and rhythm also have importance. The...

Undergraduateago1130 - Oct 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 2, 2009
GLBT issue involvement stems from minor assault - UF essay

3 - It was a One morning in the fall of my 8th grade year that forever changed my outlook on...

UndergraduateLP2010 - Oct 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 2, 2009
the National Natural Science Foundation - help with wording and sentence revise.

4 - ...breakage between rubber and subsidiary body under the action of cyclic stress, and I carry out numerical analysis. The...

Graduateconnan0702 - Oct 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 2, 2009
help revise wording or grammer, about aero-model

2 - Wow, very impressive. you started 2 sentences with "By." How about this for the second one: We took...

Writing Feedbackconnan0702 - Oct 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 2, 2009
SPECIAL: A documentation explaining my homeschooled background.

7 - Thank you Sean! I have written my list into an essay. Now... I'm having a little problem editting #1...

LettersNinja - Oct 25, 2009Ninja - Nov 2, 2009
Duke Supplement: Why Duke?

3 - Hi there! I actually love this essay! Paragraph 1 feels honest and authentic (esp. the 'I play golf!'...

Undergraduatecdrappi - Nov 1, 2009ivyeyesediting - Nov 2, 2009
Essay on my own novel, creativity, and physics

5 - I'm very sorry I didn't get to help before the deadline had passed. Luckily, though, this is some kind...

UndergraduateAwreccan - Oct 30, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 2, 2009
COLAGE and Advocacy, and Why Brown?--Common App and Supplement

4 - Oh, I see. In order to show them your brilliant skill in composition, it might be good to mention...

Undergraduatedramacratic - Oct 29, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 2, 2009
"English Corner" Extracurricular Activity UIUC-prompt

4 - What made everyone feel uneasy? Was it that they did not know each other and spoke different languages? ...

Undergraduatekayyao - Oct 30, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 2, 2009
'experience in Venice' - An experience that has changed your life

7 - Nicely written; however, I personally would like to read more about how this experience affected you. You wrote: "It...

UndergraduateWyn - Oct 29, 2009jolapham - Nov 2, 2009
'demand for comprehensive talents' - People attend college or univ. for a reason

2 - I'd like to say that, you organize this essay very well and the 1st and 2nd paragraphs of the...

Writing Feedbackfuhuanluck - Nov 2, 2009Hellgreeting - Nov 2, 2009
"Anthem of My Independence" - Georgetown Essay

5 - The essay is fine for the prompt (which you feel best describes you .) So you need to devote...

Undergraduatecngo15 - Nov 1, 2009linmark - Nov 2, 2009
u of i essay on engineering....academic interests/professional goals

3 - I think you might want to take out the "The College of Engineering at the University of Illinois is...

Undergraduaterbwmn1 - Oct 30, 2009anuj1450 - Nov 1, 2009
Describe a meaningful event...UF application essay...Missions trip to Honduras.

5 - Oh, my mistake, it is 2 sentences. My point was that you should probably tell them how it affected...

Undergraduateamandahart - Oct 27, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 1, 2009
Common App Essay - A Fatal Mistake

3 - I remember first meeting Turjoh in my brother's sixth grade class. I was fourteen years old, and... I...

Undergraduaterafeeki92 - Oct 30, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 1, 2009
COMMON APP SHORT ANSWER ~ Hospital volunteer

4 - Hey, I think this is really good especially for a short answer. From what I have read colleges like...

Undergraduatesbdaiquiri - Oct 30, 2009lexmonti - Nov 1, 2009
"The Fusion of Psychology and Music In My Life" - Cornell Prompt

3 - try phrasing this differently. perhaps be more specific on what achievements your motivation has led you to. ...

UndergraduateILUxpssh - Nov 1, 2009angie127 - Nov 1, 2009
Singapore food - Your roommate to be - Stanford Roomate Essay

7 - Hi Zhang Yi! Great work on this essay! There is something that is so refreshingly effortless and authentic...

Undergraduatezhangyitao - Nov 1, 2009ivyeyesediting - Nov 1, 2009
"Moving on" - impact on my life UF essay :)

3 - I think you should use " " marks and reword like this: "Moving on" is a term that...

Undergraduateacat6332 - Oct 30, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 1, 2009
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