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A Short UC Prompt 2 - "Growing Up In Long Beach"

6 - The essay as a whole sounds pretty good to me. I don't know if you've finished editing or not,...

UndergraduateTheFlameProof - Nov 30, 2008stc3 - Nov 30, 2008
Native students book review- ""Ending Denial""

NEW - Hi everyone! Thanks so much in advance for your help! The instructions were to make a 7 pf essay...

Book ReportsNazlee - Nov 30, 2008 -
Marital Arts as a Way of Life - uc prompt 2 pls help revise?!

4 - thank you so much! ill correct this rite away!...

Undergraduatedreadhavok - Nov 30, 2008dreadhavok - Nov 30, 2008
Fixating on Curiosity (UC Prompt #1)

5 - Thank you, the two of you have been helpful....

Undergraduatenewsajadi - Nov 29, 2008newsajadi - Nov 30, 2008
Discovering my passion in art history

4 - Thank you so much EF Kevin and The Flame Proof for revising my essay....

Undergraduatekatacyklsla2ny - Nov 29, 2008katacyklsla2ny - Nov 30, 2008
UC Prompt #1 "This World of Mines.." Need Revision A.s.a.p.

3 - I think your prompt is pretty good except I think you might have messed up on this sentance "I...

Undergraduateezbzeric - Nov 29, 2008TheFlameProof - Nov 30, 2008
the best aspects of an education - Personal Statement

7 - Prompt: Evaluate a significant experience and its effect on you. Five years ago, my mom was diagnosed with...

UndergraduateAndrea09 - Oct 28, 2008Andrea09 - Nov 30, 2008
August 1998, America. UC Prompt 1 Need help revise.

2 - In August of 1998, my family and I left Hong Kong and stepped into America for the first time....

Undergraduatewklui - Nov 30, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
"My exposure to music", title pending- UC admissions prompt #2

2 - By the time I entered middle school, I was practicing approximately two hours every day, as well as attending...

Undergraduatewangmaster1219 - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
"I love badminton" - UC prompt 2 essay

3 - Personally, i think you could do without this. They seem like unneeded generalizations and the statement also seems...

UndergraduateNOkiaT - Nov 29, 2008TheFlameProof - Nov 30, 2008
I do not want what others want; my definition of success - UC Prompt essay

2 - All of this celebrity spending to buy these "much needed accessories," appeals to the sense of humor in me....

UndergraduateNOkiaT - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
SAIC statement of purpose (animated films). Am on the right track?

15 - great essay! couldn't find anything really wrong with it, i think it answers the prompt quite well :) ...

Undergraduatestc3 - Nov 29, 2008TheFlameProof - Nov 30, 2008
UC Prompt #2 Dilligence

3 - "Many of my friends told me that I would mumble, move around nervously, and stutter." The above sentence...

UndergraduateMIGotyou - Nov 29, 2008TheFlameProof - Nov 30, 2008
Rice Essay Prompt: Personal Perspective

2 - Even though I didn't agree with them, I could look at them through nonjudgmental eyes. Great essay but...

Undergraduatelacylou09 - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
uc essay prompt 1 - "Don't wait for your ship to come, swim out to it."

2 - Great story and reflection. I think you should separate it into a few paragraphs for clarity: The proverb,...

Undergraduatedoraface - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
Does being on the dean's list count? - question about the UC application

3 - thanks man, I appreciate it....

Student TalkTheFlameProof - Nov 30, 2008TheFlameProof - Nov 30, 2008
"my parents to teach and groom" - short 150 word response.

7 - Yes, it is very thoughtful and meaningful. You can improve it by adding an opening sentence that sums up...

Undergraduatejenf3r - Nov 25, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
Designated Driver - (UC prompt 1 - my world)

5 - Well, if the word limit allows for you to write a bit more, I suggest that you add one...

Undergraduatembhaire - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
A content analysis of involuntary autobiographical memories

8 - I don't know! They should have been more specific. They were unclear, so you should do it whichever way...

Essayssegilola - Apr 29, 2007EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
Marriage in "The Story of an Hour" and "A Sorrowful Woman"

2 - A common, naïve assumption is that, once a couple is married, love will overcome all problems. However , the...

Book ReportsRuby3561 - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
"Do a good turn daily." - Rutgers Essay

4 - You got some good feedback from mstratton8, and i would add that this sentence can be improved: ...some...

UndergraduateErocknroll212 - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
"I feel it is better to be a leader than a follower." - UC Personal #2

6 - You can begin with this: As a child, I lacked self-confidence and was very shy. Also: ...

Undergraduatebcbossman - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
"To start life afresh in California" - UC, What do you think of it so far?

6 - Yes, I understand what you mean. I was reading the first few paragraphs, and they are all so well-written...

Undergraduatemisheel - Nov 26, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
"I am proud to be a freethinker" - UC prompt 2

2 - Excellent sentence right here: Suddenly, everything right felt so wrong, and everything wrong felt so right, yet my mind...

Undergraduateashelle - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
"I am not a "nobody" - UC Prompt 2

3 - That was what I told myself when I decided to run for a position in the executive committee of...

Undergraduatewongxy - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
Elaborate One of Your Activities - my father's golf club

2 - In my junior year, I worked in my father's golf club, Lao Lao Bay Golf Club. I served food...

Undergraduateop2607 - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
"Born in France" - UC prompt 1 and 2

8 - All you need is one good introductory sentence that says something like: The world that has shaped my dreams...

Undergraduatemerodir - Nov 25, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
My Environment - Moving to the Philippines and to a new school

2 - However, after three whole years of life in the contrasting environment, I found myself sharing commonalities with the people...

Undergraduateop2607 - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
"a freshman who hated Chinese"; "chicken on fire" - UC PROMPT 1 & 2

8 - Wow, great essay. No, I have no changes to suggest. You write very well!...

Undergraduategman450 - Nov 28, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
"what do you want to do when you grow up?" - UC Prompt 1

7 - No, describing the world you come from is exactly what you have done here. I think you did answer...

UndergraduateNOkiaT - Nov 25, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
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