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Trouble when speaking about experience, UC Transfer Question Prompt

3 - Nope, not safe! :) The most important part is to write well, and the second most important part is...

UndergraduateJashley - Nov 30, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
Computer science - UC Prompt #1 and #2 - Transfer Applicant

3 - Neva made some important corrections, and I would even modify one further (prompt 2): As the season progressed,...

Undergraduatekrad - Nov 30, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
Lehigh supplement essay - I will contribute to the campus greatly.

3 - Well, the first thing i notice in your essay is that it does not specifically explain why Lehigh is...

Undergraduatemurf5 - Dec 1, 2008Angela629 - Dec 1, 2008
ACTIVITIES SECTION OF UC APP - what exactly goes in each section?

2 - I don't know what the application consists of, but if you post the application prompts, I can give you...

UndergraduatePANIAGUA12 - Nov 30, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
'change must come from the top' - written for English CLEP

3 - Kevin, Thank you so much! This helped and I hope I'll pass the CLEP.. :)...

Writing FeedbackRacheli - Nov 27, 2008Racheli - Dec 1, 2008
Response to question "to what other colleges..."?

3 - Thanks, Kevin! You're always here to give me helpful advice. :) ^___^ A_R ^___^...

UndergraduateAmyRemus - Nov 29, 2008AmyRemus - Dec 1, 2008
Sociology - uc prompt ; never came to my mind when I was juggling through majors

4 - I think if you want to make it a conversation way,you have to write a introductive paragraph.And the effect...

Undergraduatesadia - Nov 30, 2008charliesun - Dec 1, 2008
'biology class' - Passion For A Subject Or Cause University of Delaware Essay

3 - Thank you so much! I will certainly make those corrections that you mentioned. This is a very helpful website....

Undergraduatedb_armada - Nov 30, 2008db_armada - Nov 30, 2008
Late Show style Personal Statement

5 - i dont know if i would go with that style. maybe change it up to less of a conversation...

Undergraduatecharliesun - Nov 28, 2008sadia - Nov 30, 2008
"You don't even look Filipino." - Personal Statement

7 - Thanks egetzshef for your suggestion! I have another question if anyone minds answering lol.. Do you guys think...

Undergraduater991183878 - Nov 30, 2008r991183878 - Nov 30, 2008
UC TRANSFERRING ESSAY PROMPT 1 & 2, I have a traveler's eye

3 - thank you!...

Undergraduategua - Nov 29, 2008gua - Nov 30, 2008
A Short UC Prompt 2 - "Growing Up In Long Beach"

6 - The essay as a whole sounds pretty good to me. I don't know if you've finished editing or not,...

UndergraduateTheFlameProof - Nov 30, 2008stc3 - Nov 30, 2008
Native students book review- ""Ending Denial""

NEW - Hi everyone! Thanks so much in advance for your help! The instructions were to make a 7 pf essay...

Book ReportsNazlee - Nov 30, 2008 -
Marital Arts as a Way of Life - uc prompt 2 pls help revise?!

4 - thank you so much! ill correct this rite away!...

Undergraduatedreadhavok - Nov 30, 2008dreadhavok - Nov 30, 2008
Fixating on Curiosity (UC Prompt #1)

5 - Thank you, the two of you have been helpful....

Undergraduatenewsajadi - Nov 29, 2008newsajadi - Nov 30, 2008
Discovering my passion in art history

4 - Thank you so much EF Kevin and The Flame Proof for revising my essay....

Undergraduatekatacyklsla2ny - Nov 29, 2008katacyklsla2ny - Nov 30, 2008
UC Prompt #1 "This World of Mines.." Need Revision A.s.a.p.

3 - I think your prompt is pretty good except I think you might have messed up on this sentance "I...

Undergraduateezbzeric - Nov 29, 2008TheFlameProof - Nov 30, 2008
the best aspects of an education - Personal Statement

7 - Prompt: Evaluate a significant experience and its effect on you. Five years ago, my mom was diagnosed with...

UndergraduateAndrea09 - Oct 28, 2008Andrea09 - Nov 30, 2008
August 1998, America. UC Prompt 1 Need help revise.

2 - In August of 1998, my family and I left Hong Kong and stepped into America for the first time....

Undergraduatewklui - Nov 30, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
"My exposure to music", title pending- UC admissions prompt #2

2 - By the time I entered middle school, I was practicing approximately two hours every day, as well as attending...

Undergraduatewangmaster1219 - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
"I love badminton" - UC prompt 2 essay

3 - Personally, i think you could do without this. They seem like unneeded generalizations and the statement also seems...

UndergraduateNOkiaT - Nov 29, 2008TheFlameProof - Nov 30, 2008
I do not want what others want; my definition of success - UC Prompt essay

2 - All of this celebrity spending to buy these "much needed accessories," appeals to the sense of humor in me....

UndergraduateNOkiaT - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
SAIC statement of purpose (animated films). Am on the right track?

15 - great essay! couldn't find anything really wrong with it, i think it answers the prompt quite well :) ...

Undergraduatestc3 - Nov 29, 2008TheFlameProof - Nov 30, 2008
UC Prompt #2 Dilligence

3 - "Many of my friends told me that I would mumble, move around nervously, and stutter." The above sentence...

UndergraduateMIGotyou - Nov 29, 2008TheFlameProof - Nov 30, 2008
Rice Essay Prompt: Personal Perspective

2 - Even though I didn't agree with them, I could look at them through nonjudgmental eyes. Great essay but...

Undergraduatelacylou09 - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
uc essay prompt 1 - "Don't wait for your ship to come, swim out to it."

2 - Great story and reflection. I think you should separate it into a few paragraphs for clarity: The proverb,...

Undergraduatedoraface - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
Does being on the dean's list count? - question about the UC application

3 - thanks man, I appreciate it....

Student TalkTheFlameProof - Nov 30, 2008TheFlameProof - Nov 30, 2008
"my parents to teach and groom" - short 150 word response.

7 - Yes, it is very thoughtful and meaningful. You can improve it by adding an opening sentence that sums up...

Undergraduatejenf3r - Nov 25, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
Designated Driver - (UC prompt 1 - my world)

5 - Well, if the word limit allows for you to write a bit more, I suggest that you add one...

Undergraduatembhaire - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
A content analysis of involuntary autobiographical memories

8 - I don't know! They should have been more specific. They were unclear, so you should do it whichever way...

Essayssegilola - Apr 29, 2007EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
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