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A content analysis of involuntary autobiographical memories

8 - I don't know! They should have been more specific. They were unclear, so you should do it whichever way...

Essayssegilola - Apr 29, 2007EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
Marriage in "The Story of an Hour" and "A Sorrowful Woman"

2 - A common, naïve assumption is that, once a couple is married, love will overcome all problems. However , the...

Book ReportsRuby3561 - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
"Do a good turn daily." - Rutgers Essay

4 - You got some good feedback from mstratton8, and i would add that this sentence can be improved: ...some...

UndergraduateErocknroll212 - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
"I feel it is better to be a leader than a follower." - UC Personal #2

6 - You can begin with this: As a child, I lacked self-confidence and was very shy. Also: ...

Undergraduatebcbossman - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
"To start life afresh in California" - UC, What do you think of it so far?

6 - Yes, I understand what you mean. I was reading the first few paragraphs, and they are all so well-written...

Undergraduatemisheel - Nov 26, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
"I am proud to be a freethinker" - UC prompt 2

2 - Excellent sentence right here: Suddenly, everything right felt so wrong, and everything wrong felt so right, yet my mind...

Undergraduateashelle - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
"I am not a "nobody" - UC Prompt 2

3 - That was what I told myself when I decided to run for a position in the executive committee of...

Undergraduatewongxy - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
Elaborate One of Your Activities - my father's golf club

2 - In my junior year, I worked in my father's golf club, Lao Lao Bay Golf Club. I served food...

Undergraduateop2607 - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
"Born in France" - UC prompt 1 and 2

8 - All you need is one good introductory sentence that says something like: The world that has shaped my dreams...

Undergraduatemerodir - Nov 25, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
My Environment - Moving to the Philippines and to a new school

2 - However, after three whole years of life in the contrasting environment, I found myself sharing commonalities with the people...

Undergraduateop2607 - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
"a freshman who hated Chinese"; "chicken on fire" - UC PROMPT 1 & 2

8 - Wow, great essay. No, I have no changes to suggest. You write very well!...

Undergraduategman450 - Nov 28, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
"what do you want to do when you grow up?" - UC Prompt 1

7 - No, describing the world you come from is exactly what you have done here. I think you did answer...

UndergraduateNOkiaT - Nov 25, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
"my drink" - UC Prompt #1

4 - I found some improvements to make in the segment below: This drink I that hold in my hands...

Undergraduatefabxx - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
"my intended major is history" - UC personal statement. Prompt 2

2 - Use two commas here: When I got to college, though, I realized that just because I was good...

Undergraduateanastasiab17 - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
"to talk about an issue I concern" (Wallstreet) - UT TOPIC B

2 - The nation's economy is in a recession, this year's college graduates face a job market that is not very...

UndergraduateZoeL14 - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
"my first-ever vacation" - UC app- prompt 2

5 - For this senence, I thanked him and we parted ways when I retrieved my food. I think...

Undergraduatesvcdt - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
wonder and intrigue on how my high school career would unfold; UC essay "My urge for determination"

3 - I was faced with fear, wonder and intrigue about ... I see that in many places you have...

Undergraduateteddy411 - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
My involvement in theater - Acting was officially my new hobby. UC transfer essay

11 - The 1000 word limit only applies to the 1st and 2nd prompt. The 3rd prompt is an open...

UndergraduateWildtalon - Nov 20, 2008aljashamy - Nov 30, 2008
My older sister and her impact on my life - essay

4 - I once heard a quote about the people we come to meet, how only... Usually, you should not...

UndergraduateRden - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
Arumentative Essay(MLA Style) Is Spanking the Right Way to Discipline

3 - Thanks Kevin...

Writing Feedbacksunnyside - Nov 29, 2008sunnyside - Nov 30, 2008
"My mom and dad's office" - UC prompt 1 and 2

11 - The only thing I want to ask about is the title: My Mom and Dad's Office Is this...

Undergraduatesilversweet - Nov 24, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
UC application (Activities & Awards, community service, additional comments

3 - Oh thank you for your help:) and..i have one more question actually.. for the 3rd statement, since it...

Undergraduateksj430 - Nov 29, 2008ksj430 - Nov 30, 2008
Essay feedback - Issue of terrorism and its significance to me

2 - Instead of using contractions (i.e. "didn't"), write the two words separately. For me, this meant being looked at...

Undergraduateaz2845 - Nov 29, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
Statement of Purpose for SAIC application, an artist

2 - It's really good. :) I think your works are really good as well! good luck for both of us!...

Undergraduateandreagayle - Nov 29, 2008psypsy - Nov 30, 2008
"I will always have a desire to help others." - UC Prompt 2

5 - This is great! I'll just change one sentence: As I began to question more and more, I began...

Undergraduatesome1uknown - Nov 27, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2008
"right now is my second chance" - UC Prompt #2

3 - I think you should state more clearly in the first two paragraphs what you're trying to get accross; after...

Undergraduatefabxx - Nov 29, 2008Rich Monte - Nov 30, 2008
The love for politics was planted in me at a young age but did not have the opportunity to sprout

10 - Why do you focus on literature in the last sentence? Last sentence should nicely wrap up the thesis statement...

UndergraduateSon_of_Kings - Nov 28, 2008Rich Monte - Nov 30, 2008
Personal statement- what i would bring to diversity in the Rice community

3 - Okay thank you! I'll try to make it more focused and powerful. Yeah I was afraid it wasn't...

Undergraduateaz2845 - Nov 28, 2008az2845 - Nov 29, 2008
UC Transfer Prompt #1, Psychology Major

5 - Ah thanks! I actually submitted it already, a bit early just to make sure I was able to...

UndergraduateBatou - Nov 28, 2008Batou - Nov 29, 2008
help me with an autobiographical research paper (the cultural diversity)

3 - I did do this research myself, thank you for your reply it was very helpful. I shall use this...

Research Papersmassey76 - Nov 29, 2008massey76 - Nov 29, 2008
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