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You want to sell the televesion. You think a friend of your might like to buy it from you.

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IELTS Writing task 2 - The excessive use of smartphones in free time

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MSc program in Physics at The University of Queensland - AAS

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IELTS Writing Task 2 - about artificial intelligence

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Chameleon of Roleplay - Questbridge personal statement

2 - Okay, the reviewer would rather get to know you without the constant reference to other characters. I understand that...

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Catalyst of Change: Pursuing AI Dreams from Mexico to Korea (GKS scholarship)

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ISO ideas writing "WHO AM I?" for NFL Pitch Brochure

2 - It's good but needs to better focus on your drafting skills. The how is just as important as the...

UndergraduatePMG_SportsBiz - Sep 30, 2023Holt - Oct 3, 2023
IELTS WRITING TASK 1: Plastic Bottle Production Process

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Business Administration GKS personal statement undergraduate

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Leadership and Influence - Chevening Essay - An Ex Employee, Currently Business Owner

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Master of Computer Science Statement of purpose - review & suggestion

NEW - Computer Science Statement of purpose Dear University X Admissions Committee, I am writing to express my ambition...

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IELTS WRITING TASK 1: The proportion of money spent on different goods and services of households

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IELTS WRITING TASK 2: ATTENTION SPANS

2 - Merged: writing on topic: attention spans being affected by social media - unprecedented technology-driven era: too complicated...

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Statement of purpose for MS in Computer Science programs. I'm not sure how I should structure it.

3 - @Holt That makes sense, thanks for the reply! I'll take your advice into consideration and see how to...

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Statement of Purpose/Study Plan for Master's in International Business.

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What types of things do a logistics engineer plan?

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DEVELOPMENT MANAGEMENT STUDIES- MOTIVATION LETTER FOR SCHOLARSHIP APPLICATION

3 - THANK YOU VERY MUSH...

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Essay on Why are you an ideal candidate for MSc in Business Analytics and how program will help?

2 - Do not use this reference. It is too vague for you to be believed by the reviewer. The...

GraduateLove478 - Sep 17, 2023Holt - Sep 26, 2023
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - TEACHING SITUATION / DISAGREE OR AGREE ESSAYS.

2 - Your overall response to the original prompt is incorrect. There are 2 reasons for this mistake: 1. There...

Writing Feedbackvieta06 - Sep 17, 2023Holt - Sep 26, 2023
Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matter

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"gks-u 2024 "media and communication:my interests and motivations" personal statement" @holt

2 - Try to provide more of a backgrounder on your family as required by the prompt. You are not mentioning...

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COMMON APP ESSAY REVIEW (essay on personal growth)

2 - The essay tends to be a bit confusing as you move from the plant experience to your personal experience....

Undergraduateyurii06xx - Sep 16, 2023Holt - Sep 26, 2023
Uganda's economy - Common wealth scholarship

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Mobile and technology essay paper

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Writing Feedbackminhtuan2006 - Sep 15, 2023Holt - Sep 26, 2023
Task 1: The chart shows the percentage of males and females with higher education qualification

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Master in advertising and communication - Self-Introduction

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New country arrival - QuestBridge-Personal Essay

3 - @Holt Hi, thank you for your feedback!...

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[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] UNPAID COMMUNITY SERVICE - obligation for students to make a better society

2 - The explanation is incomplete. They joined in without payment and then? What happened? Do they continue to maintain...

Writing FeedbackDuy Dang - Sep 13, 2023Holt - Sep 26, 2023
Common App / "Why did I take a gap year" essay / international student / early decision in november

2 - You spent too much time explaining the concept of the gap year. The focus should be on why you...

Undergraduategigibsz - Sep 12, 2023Holt - Sep 26, 2023
The fluctuation in monthly prices for copper, nickel and zinc throughout the year 2014

2 - The report is well developed and contains all of the necessary information. However, the paragraph presentations are uneven in...

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