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Misclassified cases of sudden infant death syndrome research paper - looking for 3 weaknesses

2 - The main weakness that I see in this paper is your over reliance on in-text citations to complete the...

Research PapersBuchbritt95 - Mar 23, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
Research paper on relationship between Antarctic plants and climate change - peer review

2 - There should not be 2 paragraphs for the introduction and thesis statement. That creates a tremendously long, but sometimes...

Research PapersTartrion - Mar 23, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
Essay about whether we should remove the non-academic subjects or not - revised required

2 - Kindly remember that the word "I", in reference to oneself, must always be written in uppercase, as a capital...

Writing FeedbackMidu - Mar 22, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
IELTS-CAM 9-TASK 1-ISLAND BEFORE AND AFTER THE CONSTRUCTION OF TOURIST FACILITIES

2 - In the second paragraph, you do not have to say "2 maps". Instead, you should refer to the first...

Writing Feedbacklinhdatielts8 - Mar 21, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
IELTS Task 2, working in large business

2 - Why did you write the response in quotation marks from beginning to end? That is unnecessary in a task...

Writing FeedbackFieldJing - Mar 21, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
[IELTS TASK 2] Some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled...

2 - The prompt restatement is incomplete as it does not refer to the basis of the debate regarding legislating recycling...

Writing Feedbacksnackara - Mar 21, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
Is it wiser for a first-time buyer to opt for a larger or smaller home??

2 - Being a research proposal, there should be a series of sources being indicated in the presentation to aid in...

Writing Feedbackmsodek1 - Mar 20, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
The Dark Legacy of Christopher Columbus: Exploitation, Violence, and Cultural Devastation

2 - Correct this to indicate that he is seen as a stain on the Taino community. He is not...

Research Papersjheyg17 - Mar 20, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
Large companies use sports events to promote their products.Some people think it has a negative...

2 - Your opinion is not based upon the correct premise. The question you have to answer is "Some people think...

Writing FeedbackTranMinhKhoi - Mar 19, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
An essay: Different ways of studying

2 - The writing guide has asked you to mention the effects of studying as a group vs. individual study time....

Writing Feedbackwannapassenglish - Mar 19, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
STATEMENT OF PURPOSE for EPFL Management, Technology, and Entrepreneurship

2 - Based upon what evidence? What you make claims like these, you must back it up with numerical data...

Graduatenetkeojas - Mar 19, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
Are libraries necessary? IELTS 2: OPINION ESSAY

2 - The prompt restatement is only partially correct. It deviated from the original discussion when it said "there are no...

Writing FeedbackEmmadafish - Mar 18, 2024Holt - Mar 28, 2024
Some people think that children perform better in a single-sex school

3 - Maybe you might add more words such as futhemore, moreover, due to the fact that, considering the fact that...

Writing Feedbackanniejshsjh - Mar 5, 2024Leila321 - Mar 25, 2024
SOP for MSc Computer Science EPFL

2 - A reviewer is usually more impressed by the way that the applicant manages to combine undergraduate studies and its...

GraduatetealCrayon98 - Mar 23, 2024Holt - Mar 24, 2024
Stating motivation for Australia Awards Scholarship

2 - This will not work. You are limited to 200 words for the response. So you cannot waste the space...

Scholarshipgheet - Mar 17, 2024Holt - Mar 21, 2024
To succeed in a business, one needs to be good at maths. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

2 - To what extent? Your response is incomplete. You need to use a measured or emotional response in this...

Writing FeedbackTheodoris - Mar 17, 2024Holt - Mar 21, 2024
Master's in Social Research - PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR UNIVERSITY OF EDINBURGH

2 - Mention the courses as deemed relevant to the requirements of the masters course. This will show your preparation...

Graduatepookie123 - Mar 16, 2024Holt - Mar 21, 2024
Studying in Flinders - How did you choose your proposed course and institution?

3 - @Catherine Frank Please after writing, you make sure you glance through to correct some spelling errors....

ScholarshipCatherine Frank - Mar 14, 2024Aroma - Mar 20, 2024
Pros and cons of self-study

2 - If this was written as a simple English writing exercise, then I would say "good job!" you got your...

Writing Feedbackthanh lam - Mar 15, 2024Holt - Mar 20, 2024
Transfer Admission Personal Essay for Temple University

2 - The story being told is inconsistent. It lacks a smooth flow in terms of transitioning from your early life...

Graduateprivateangels - Mar 15, 2024Holt - Mar 20, 2024
IELTS writing task 2 - Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are...

2 - Try to avoid the use of the same words or phrases from the original prompt. That is because you...

Writing FeedbackZebb - Mar 14, 2024Holt - Mar 20, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 1: The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during...

2 - The summary overview is not restated enough in the words of the writer to not be considered a cut...

Writing FeedbackDang Gia Bao - Mar 14, 2024Holt - Mar 20, 2024
Give up to three examples of how you intend to use the knowledge, skill and connections - AAS

2 - The terminologies you are using in the essay requires editing. It is incorrect. Unfortunately, editing is not part of...

ScholarshipAroma - Mar 14, 2024Holt - Mar 20, 2024
The graph below shows the percentage of adults whose healthcare needs went unmet in the past year

2 - The summary overview will receive a failing mark because it is a run-on sentence. There are about 3 ideas...

Writing FeedbackJessica159815 - Mar 13, 2024Holt - Mar 20, 2024
The diagram below shows how a solar powered water pump works

2 - The immediate problem with this presentation is the format. A task 1 essay follows the 3 paragraph format in...

Writing Feedbacknhatanhen - Mar 12, 2024Holt - Mar 20, 2024
Task 1 (Pie Chart) About the highest level of education achieved by people over 21 in 2 countries.

2 - Your summary overview is inaccurate. You are not properly identifying the components of the image. There are 2 pie...

Writing FeedbackAdrena1998 - Mar 12, 2024Holt - Mar 20, 2024
Motivation letter for master of fine art master in Amsterdam

4 - I believe that it's very nice but for some improvements i would totally agree with holt...

Lettersedenlan - Mar 11, 2024smichalo - Mar 18, 2024
Many men and women are making the decision to have children later in life.

3 - @thuongnguyen6372 please your first sentence in your second paragraph has some uncertainty which you need to avoid that; be...

Writing Feedbackthuongnguyen6372 - Feb 28, 2024Aroma - Mar 14, 2024
ONLY GOVERNMENTS CAN TAKE PART IN PROTECTING THE ENVIRONMENT?

3 - @strawberry jasmi Please, you only emphasized on what individuals do to degrade the environment but you did not write...

Writing Feedbackstrawberry jasmi - Mar 9, 2024Aroma - Mar 13, 2024
IELTS Task 1: The graph below shows of types of waste that were recycled in a town between 2000-2010

3 - Thank you very much!...

Writing FeedbackHZQ - Mar 11, 2024HZQ - Mar 12, 2024
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