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The graph below show the number of overseas tourist to three paricular areas

2 - The task is to complete a simple analysis of the given image. That should be completed within 200 words...

Writing Feedbackthuylinhdo - Aug 15, 2023Holt - Aug 21, 2023
Essay about behavior in schools is getting worse.

2 - Do not refer to a particular educational level in your restatement. This was not indicated in the original...

Writing Feedbacktrangnt - Aug 15, 2023Holt - Aug 21, 2023
In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books

2 - Good work on presenting the basis subjects for the discussion in your restatement and thesis section. However, you wrote...

Writing FeedbackDuy Dang - Aug 15, 2023Holt - Aug 21, 2023
Task: In the past lecture was the traditional method of teaching a large number of students

2 - It is not necessary to indicate how the essay will be written. You already made that clear in...

Writing Feedbackbuiha02 - Aug 15, 2023Holt - Aug 21, 2023
Writing task 2: Some people think that in the modern world, getting old is entirely bad.

2 - You are missing the personal opinion. The first paragraph is therefore incomplete. You cannot receive full scoring considerations...

Writing Feedbackdaniellee94 - Aug 15, 2023Holt - Aug 21, 2023
Historical information of residential areas is fascinatedly looked for by recent inhabitants

2 - There is no argument referenced in this discussion. An idea or public opinion was presented for discussion. Examiners...

Writing Feedbackquinlinn_21 - Aug 15, 2023Holt - Aug 21, 2023
Task 1 (barchart): Percentage of Canadians which gave money to charitable organisations by age

2 - The trending statement is too over emphasized. You do not need to present the middle part. The trend is...

Writing Feedbackeya123456 - Aug 14, 2023Holt - Aug 20, 2023
The questions received by the tourist information office by letter or email, and by telephone

2 - I am not sure if you can complete this essay within 20 minutes. You wrote almost enough words for...

Writing Feedbackhung12345612 - Aug 14, 2023Holt - Aug 20, 2023
IELTS Writing Task 1 - The use of water by four different countries (%)

2 - The summary is incomplete. The sector divisions should be listed to help add clarity to the references in the...

Writing FeedbackTonynhan - Aug 14, 2023Holt - Aug 20, 2023
IELTS TASK 2 ACADEMIC - TOPIC: EDUCATION; In the modern world, schools are no longer necessary

2 - The first sentence of your prompt restatement is unnecessary. You need to be more focused on presenting the actual...

Writing FeedbackLinh1601 - Aug 14, 2023Holt - Aug 20, 2023
Write essay about consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007

2 - Always present a complete summary. Your information is good, but lacking one vital piece of information. You did not...

Writing Feedbackckhanb - Aug 13, 2023Holt - Aug 20, 2023
Newspapers, books? Internet offers people satisfying methods to get unlimited access to information

2 - Try to limit the presentation to 300 words. Keep track of how many words you can actually write within...

Writing FeedbackLENGUYENHONGPHUC - Aug 13, 2023Holt - Aug 20, 2023
A topic of interest regarding the money for building the roads rather than new railways

2 - The prompt for this essay asks you to discuss "To what extent do you agree or disagree?" You are...

Writing Feedbackminh23102006 - Aug 13, 2023Holt - Aug 20, 2023
Advertising has become an inevitable part of our lives.

2 - You have used an incorrect discussion format in this instance. Since you opted to use the 3 opinion discussion...

Writing Feedbackjason hoang - Aug 11, 2023Holt - Aug 20, 2023
Consumers being overwhelmed with commercial advertisements since fierce competition among companies

2 - The promot restatement is acceptable but, the writer's opinion is not. You did not directly respond to the extent...

Writing Feedbackhaonhien15 - Aug 11, 2023Holt - Aug 20, 2023
A controversial topic if governments should invest on railways rather than on roads

2 - The first sentence is unclear in reference. What is people's repair? It is a reference that does not connect...

Writing FeedbackNguyen Tan Hieu - Aug 11, 2023Holt - Aug 20, 2023
IELTS Writing task 1 the number of people eating more than 5 portions of vegetables and fish per day

2 - The first major deductions to this essay will be applied to the GRA score. Please note that you are...

Writing FeedbackThanh John - Aug 10, 2023Holt - Aug 20, 2023
Students desire to study other courses beside their majors

2 - The prompt restatement is a bit confusing. If there are only some students claiming something, then why is there...

Writing Feedbackmolisa - Aug 10, 2023Holt - Aug 20, 2023
Writing IELTS Task 2: These days it is much easier for many people to travel to different countries

2 - While I do commend your effort in writing this essay, and you did do a good job in writing...

Writing Feedbackmaiannh - Aug 10, 2023Holt - Aug 20, 2023
The number of magazines sold per person

2 - You should have taken the time to identify how the countries were enumerated in the presentation. That way...

Writing Feedbacktradauvantue - Aug 10, 2023Holt - Aug 20, 2023
The two maps below describe a number of alterations which took place on a small offshore island

2 - You should not be referring to the positioning of the images on the screen. The examiner is assumed...

Writing Feedbacktrytoget7score - Aug 9, 2023Holt - Aug 20, 2023
Traffic and accommodation problems increasing, the government encourage some businesses move rural

2 - This is an advantage and disadvantage comparison essay. When writing such an essay, you are not asked to...

Writing FeedbackThuminh - Aug 9, 2023Holt - Aug 20, 2023
IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - The chart below shows the depth of snow (cm) in a particular ski resort

2 - This is a 20 minute writing task that should be allotted no more than 200 words for the full...

Writing Feedbackserebi2704 - Aug 9, 2023Holt - Aug 20, 2023
Some people think that schools should teach/enroll students according to their academic abilities

2 - Do not lose sight of the writing time allowance for the task. Your presentation is hyperfocused on vocabulary, which...

Writing Feedbackvuongthaolinh - Aug 8, 2023Holt - Aug 20, 2023
My rotation at the antenatal care unit - Chevening scholarship on Leadership

NEW - CHEVENING SCHOLARSHIP ESSAY Please this is my draft for the leadership and influence. @Holt, could you please review...

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CBEST WRITING: money available from the state budget for school districts

NEW - funds for school districts Question: The amount of money available from the state budget for school district X...

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Fix english words in the presentation

NEW - Hi everyone!! I have a presentation about the problem in school.But I use words that are too difficult. Can...

Essaysthanhhuyen832 - Aug 19, 2023 -
Some people say that aging population cause problems, others see benefits of it. Discuss both views

3 - @roadto8writing The writing is also a bit too passive. For an argumentative essay, I think you need to present...

Writing Feedbackroadto8writing - Aug 8, 2023kokosi - Aug 17, 2023
Are advertisement directed children?? (IELTS task 2)

4 - @thaoly2007 Your paraphrasing in the introduction part is good, but there is not your opinion. That is a crucial...

Writing Feedbackthaoly2007 - Aug 8, 2023thanhbui64 - Aug 17, 2023
Respect for educators and criticism for their teaching methods

3 - @Ta Nhi I think you should talk more specifically about the meaning of "two-way communication". The best method is...

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