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Film stars and celebrities often share their views on public matters

2 - There are 2 things you have to bear in mind when developing your task 2 essay. The first is...

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SOP for master application for Mining Engineering

3 - There are several key areas for improvement. Firstly, the opening paragraph should clearly outline the purpose of the letter,...

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Letter of Motivation for Master's Degree in Cognitive Neuroscience and Clinical Neuropsychology

3 - Dear @Holt, Thank you for your feedback! I also agree regarding that specific section. Could I inquire further...

Lettersalizarincrimsons - Jan 26, 2024alizarincrimsons - Jan 28, 2024
GKS-G 2024| Future Study Plan

2 - Your discussion regarding language improvement should not be included in this essay. That belongs to the language study plan...

Graduatesankook - Jan 23, 2024Holt - Jan 28, 2024
The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree ?

2 - You only wrote 212 words. That is an automatic failing essay score. That is because the minimum count is...

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TASK 2 IETLS WRITING ON EDUCATION

2 - You are not discussing the essay based on the correct task requirement. The question was, if this is a...

Writing FeedbackLydia65 - Jan 27, 2024Holt - Jan 28, 2024
Some companies block their employees from using social media networks and websites such as facebook.

2 - It is important that you are consistent in your response presentation. That means, allowing yourself to defend only one...

Writing Feedbacktuanchill - Jan 26, 2024Holt - Jan 28, 2024
ยท TASK 2: Work from home You should spend about 40 minutes on this task

2 - Your prompt restatement is a mix of the original prompt information and your personal point of view. Avoid presenting...

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Community service (scholarship essay)

2 - You are not being asked to define what a community means to you. That whole paragraph is worthless in...

ScholarshipMochi_Krystal - Jan 24, 2024Holt - Jan 28, 2024
Personal Statement about leadership and goals for scholarship

2 - There are 2 things that you need to revise in this essay. The first is the quotation and the...

Scholarshiptriplej - Jan 24, 2024Holt - Jan 28, 2024
Should parents control their child's free time?

4 - "I understand the points you're trying to convey to the reader. However, your opening sentence could be improved to...

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Some people enjoy working alone. Others would rather work in a group. What is your preference?

3 - You have the idea for the essay. However, your direction in this essay only focuses on the reasons rather...

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What problems do children face in the age of social media?

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The table below gives information about some of the world's most studied languages.

4 - You are generalizing for the most part. Remember the format: Intro-overview-details. You can only generalise in overview but not...

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people today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out . What are the causes and solution

4 - @buitiendung i think you have to be more clear and distinct with your points and make sure all your...

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Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh its disadvantages?

2 - Local what? The idea presentation is incomplete. The subject is missing. Please remember that if you think in...

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Foreign visitors should pay more than local people

2 - Do not exaggerate when stating the original topic. There is no heated controversy, there is only a public...

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IELTS WRITTING TASK 2 : With the rise of the ebooks comes the decline in paper books

2 - Well, you only met the requirements of the writing task halfway. The score for this presentation can only be...

Writing FeedbackLinhw - Jan 23, 2024Holt - Jan 24, 2024
Motivation Letter for Master's Degree in IT project Management in Sweden

2 - Avoid turning the motivational letter into an academic and professional biography. The motivational factors in your presentation are quite...

LettersTasosCh - Jan 23, 2024Holt - Jan 24, 2024
IELTS Writing task 2: Fewer and fewer people today write by hand using a pen, pencil or brush.

2 - This is your personal opinion. It is not an accurate representation of the original prompt. Being your writer's...

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Some children spend hours everyday on their smartphones. Reasons, positive or negative development?

3 - @hbcrosese I think you should include some positive arguments about the use of smartphones by children, such as how...

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"Fashion is who I am" - Fashion Institute of Technology Admissions Essay

3 - Hi, you did good but for me, it seems like you are not answering the questions properly the...

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TASK 2 was it good? :)Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier

4 - @Kaypea The ideas are all clear and useful, but you should consider more abt your writting construction, which you...

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Motivation Letter for Master's Degree in Computer Science at University

2 - Dandy, remove the first and second paragraphs. Those are not relevant to the motivation. Replace those instead with paragraphs...

LettersDaFabian - Jan 22, 2024Holt - Jan 23, 2024
Incident with friends - scholarship essay in NTU

2 - What you wrote here has nothing to do with values and beliefs. These are character traits that you feel...

ScholarshipLeon Oswald - Jan 20, 2024Holt - Jan 22, 2024
Motivation letter for HAN university in the Netherlands

3 - @Holt appreciate your help! :) I'll check all the parts that need to fix later on....

Letterstlinh nguyen - Jan 20, 2024tlinh nguyen - Jan 21, 2024
Some people think that students who perform better in school should be rewarded.

2 - You cannot say that the statement made in the presentation is true. That is because the first paragraph is...

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Global business - personal statement for GKS scholarship

2 - The essay is a personal statement based on your interest in Korea, what you want to learn, and your...

Scholarshiplunaemily - Jan 20, 2024Holt - Jan 20, 2024
COVER LETTER to apply Event Marketing position

2 - Is this supposed to be a practice essay? Or is it an actual application email? My review will vary...

LettersThu Hieu - Jan 19, 2024Holt - Jan 20, 2024
Motivational letter for Erasmus mundus Euroculture program

2 - Try to reduce some aspects of the essay so that you can discuss your professional aspirations in the essay....

LettersY_Saleh - Jan 19, 2024Holt - Jan 20, 2024
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