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Chevening essay - Leadership and Influence - Inspiration and motivation for a common goal

NEW - LEADERSHIP essay Chevening is looking for people who will be future leaders or influencers in their home countries....

Scholarshipkn197 - Aug 28, 2023 -
IELTS: Environment is damaged by human. Which human activities damage environment, what can be done?

NEW - environmental problems caused by human actions and suggested solutions It is undoubted that Human activities have a damaging...

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Do you think it's essential for young people to learn about history?

NEW - is it essential for young people to learn about history? In the contemporary world, more and more young...

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Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that govern

3 - For me, the most obvious minus is the TA. Your examples seem to deviate from the focus of the...

Writing Feedbackmahns - Aug 24, 2023Camlinh22 - Aug 27, 2023
IELTS essay on health-related subject - is there anyone who doesn't mind leaving some comments?

NEW - Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their...

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The percentage of people born in and outside of Australia living in cities, towns, and rural areas

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Writing Feedbacktthaooooo - Aug 24, 2023tthaooooo - Aug 26, 2023
Technology - Statement of Purpose for UGRAD undergrad exchange program 2024

3 - @basit123 I think you should discuss some more ideas that you are going to perform in the future...

Undergraduatebasit123 - Aug 23, 2023Minahil - Aug 26, 2023
Write a reply to Sara. In your email - ask her what she want to do - suggest places

3 - @nguyenthuthuya35 How have your -> How has your Many thank -> Many thanks It's glad to -> It's nice...

Lettersnguyenthuthuya35 - Aug 26, 2023Duy Dang - Aug 26, 2023
[IELTS WRITING TASK 1] UNEMPLOYMENT RATE AND PEOPLE LEAVING IRELAND FROM 1988 TO 2008

3 - @Holt Thanks for your feedback!...

Writing FeedbackDuy Dang - Aug 26, 2023Duy Dang - Aug 26, 2023
Describe a situation when you had to make a difficult decision. How did you make your decision?

2 - It did not seem like this was a difficult decision for you to make. You seemed comfortable in the...

Writing Feedbackturkeshhan - Aug 26, 2023Holt - Aug 26, 2023
Essay about South Asian Mental Health Care Seeking Behaviors.

2 - In order to write a proper thesis paragraph, you have to outline the ojectives of the paper. You...

Research Papersvjs1615 - Aug 26, 2023Holt - Aug 26, 2023
[IELTS Task 2] Discuss about the positive & negative effects of working/studying from home

2 - This is not the writing instruction. You were given a specific question to respond to as the basis...

Writing FeedbackHauau123456 - Aug 26, 2023Holt - Aug 26, 2023
The opinion that we are getting more changes of choices in every field of our life

3 - Your overview : To show the reader your perspectives at the beginning and not simply merely paraphrase the question,...

Writing FeedbackBrianWang - Aug 21, 2023Duy Dang - Aug 26, 2023
In at least 150 words, write an opinion paragraph about the topic below. Some parents teach their ch

2 - The topic for writing is not complete. Where is the writing instruction? I cannot really assess what you are...

Writing Feedbackvivify - Aug 25, 2023Holt - Aug 26, 2023
The pie chart compares the difference in expenditure of two countries Japan and Malaysia (2010)

2 - The essay is short of the minimum 150 word count by 9 words. Percentage points will be deducted from...

Writing Feedbackthwchage - Aug 24, 2023Holt - Aug 26, 2023
Describe differences in an island which has undergone a lot of changes

2 - When used as a simple writing exercise, this piece of writing could be judged as a good effort. It...

Writing Feedbackhongdao0301 - Aug 22, 2023Holt - Aug 26, 2023
The layout of the city of Nelson in the past and its transformation to the present day

2 - You cannot complete 242 words in 20 minutes. The task requires a maximum of 200 words based on the...

Writing Feedbackminh2306 - Aug 21, 2023Holt - Aug 26, 2023
People who used the Internet between 1999 and 2009 in 3 countries including USA, Canada, and Mexico

2 - You cannot say "including" because there are only 3 countries represented in the image. You should be referencing...

Writing Feedbackchaungoctoan - Aug 21, 2023Holt - Aug 26, 2023
More people for less traffic?

2 - This is not a totally acceptable writer's opinion. While the response would immediately be perceived as correct, you...

Writing Feedbacktinnucbebe - Aug 21, 2023Holt - Aug 26, 2023
How to make academic writing interesting?

13 - @dbessays First, pick a few topics that are connected to a variety of issues that are well-known to you....

Student Talkdbessays - Sep 9, 2021Duy Dang - Aug 26, 2023
The reasons people in Great Britain had for visiting art museums in the years 1990 and 2000

NEW - what drove people to visit uk's art museums The pie chart illustrates the purpose of people visiting art...

Writing Feedbackkimanh15072007 - Aug 24, 2023 -
Leveraging my networking skills to impact the health sectors - Chevening Networking Essay

NEW - Hello Everyone, please this is my draft for the Chevening networking essay. All suggestions are humbly welcome. I...

ScholarshipFrimpsCobby - Aug 22, 2023 -
The use of social media and effects on individuals' mental health

3 - Your discussion has been well organized and there is also much clarity. However, to thoroughly discuss this, you will...

Research PapersEmryann423 - Aug 6, 2023FrimpsCobby - Aug 22, 2023
Skills and knowledge gained from study by an individual aspiring to become a healthcare professional

3 - First of all, my first choice program is the University of ... You will need to reconstruct this...

Scholarshiplingling4 - Aug 9, 2023FrimpsCobby - Aug 22, 2023
Length requirements for CV and any suggestions about how to make it successful.

6 - Length requirements for your CV depends on the university you are applying to. Some will give you specific requirements,...

Student TalkJeecee - Mar 28, 2011FrimpsCobby - Aug 22, 2023
IELTS - Unpaid community service as a part of schools compulsory section

2 - The task 2 essay is a mere 4 paragraph essay at any given time. You have written 6 paragraphs,...

Writing Feedbacktuanh181006 - Aug 21, 2023Holt - Aug 22, 2023
The transformation that Dubai has undergone over the time

2 - The essay will have a difficult time achieving a passing score. It is less than the mandatory 150 words....

Writing Feedbackdollydorrie - Aug 20, 2023Holt - Aug 21, 2023
Some people believe that the advent of economical air travel has been very beneficial

2 - Do not merge your personal opinion with the public discussion points. The format for your response paragraph, based on...

Writing Feedbackha1406 - Aug 20, 2023Holt - Aug 21, 2023
Many people believe that, by taking risks, ones are much more likely to be successful in their lives

2 - It is not going to be proper for me to review the quality of your writing based on an...

Writing Feedbackqihale - Aug 20, 2023Holt - Aug 21, 2023
Online games should be banned. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Justify your answer.

3 - Some of word-choice errors like excessive approach (should be over-exposure) + language learning (not studying) process. Besides, you're a...

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