justivy03
Apr 21, 2016
Writing Feedback / IELTS TASK 2: What are the benefits of requiring young people to serve the army? ... [4]
HI Su, thank you for appreciating our work here on EF, I hope to review you revision soon.
While you're at it, I would like to provide a few reminders that will definitely boost your essay;
- mind the ideas that you input in the essay, make sure that they are relevant and go straight to the point.
- mind the information you provide in the essay, as this matters a lot, you have to be very cautious, as they say, the lesser you talk, the less the mistakes and this is very true in writing too.
- the linking verbs, punctuation marks and verb forms are minor details that most writers miss, the thing is, this is very vital to the construction of your sentences, therefore you have to know where to include them in your sentence.
I wish to review your revision soon, keep writing and read a lot, this is the only form of practice that will give you two things, increase your vocabulary and will let you see a lot of different writing skills from different writers. I hope this insights help. Keep writing.
HI Su, thank you for appreciating our work here on EF, I hope to review you revision soon.
While you're at it, I would like to provide a few reminders that will definitely boost your essay;
- mind the ideas that you input in the essay, make sure that they are relevant and go straight to the point.
- mind the information you provide in the essay, as this matters a lot, you have to be very cautious, as they say, the lesser you talk, the less the mistakes and this is very true in writing too.
- the linking verbs, punctuation marks and verb forms are minor details that most writers miss, the thing is, this is very vital to the construction of your sentences, therefore you have to know where to include them in your sentence.
I wish to review your revision soon, keep writing and read a lot, this is the only form of practice that will give you two things, increase your vocabulary and will let you see a lot of different writing skills from different writers. I hope this insights help. Keep writing.