ichanpants89 [Contributor]
Nov 27, 2016
Research Papers / Fire Prevention Laws, how far is too far? [3]
Hi Daniel, Welcome to EssayForum :)
I have some experience in writing some research projects but this type of research paper is quite different from what I usually do. A research paper that I usually write consists of at least three chapters. The first one is "Introduction", the second one is "Discussion", and the third one is "Conclusion". I might say that your research paper seems like an essay but it has additional "cited works/references". If you think that my version is quite good, just try to group the information into the mentioned chapters above.
In addition, you are suggested to avoid using contractions in an academic essay. Contractions will make your essay become less formal/academic. I also notice some grammatical inaccuracies that would be described below.
- There were abouttwenty 3-storytwenty-three-story / 23-story buildings with...
-By nowThen , several other engineS and one other...
- It burned so hot, so fast that wecouldn't stop it,could not stop it.(Stop here, new sentence)We could only keep other surrounding...
- ...basementsdoare not counted as a story. (stop here, new sentence)soThus, many builders dig an enormous hole...
- ...the internet yielded dozens of articles from local newspapers across the country thatshowshowed a growing trend...
- ...from a furniture store likeIkeaIKEA ...
Hope this helps :)
Hi Daniel, Welcome to EssayForum :)
I have some experience in writing some research projects but this type of research paper is quite different from what I usually do. A research paper that I usually write consists of at least three chapters. The first one is "Introduction", the second one is "Discussion", and the third one is "Conclusion". I might say that your research paper seems like an essay but it has additional "cited works/references". If you think that my version is quite good, just try to group the information into the mentioned chapters above.
In addition, you are suggested to avoid using contractions in an academic essay. Contractions will make your essay become less formal/academic. I also notice some grammatical inaccuracies that would be described below.
- There were about
-
- It burned so hot, so fast that we
- ...basements
- ...the internet yielded dozens of articles from local newspapers across the country that
- ...from a furniture store like
Hope this helps :)