David54
Oct 6, 2016
Writing Feedback / Task 2: In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past [3]
Hallo,
These are little correction for you,
Nowa day, the number of one-person....
... be more independence, especially for young people...
...Since they are the only one in their house,..
... commit suicide when they are in adesparatedesperate situation....
Hallo,
These are little correction for you,
Now
... be more independence, especially for young people...
...
... commit suicide when they are in a