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Cultural diversity - Why would you be a great participant in the Global UGRAD Program?

2 - The essay is good but one dimensional. It only focuses on what you be to be cultural diversity, but...

Scholarshipnarimanemad - Dec 29, 2021Holt - Dec 30, 2021
Personal Statement for GKS-G 2022 Scholarship for Masters in Spanish Language and Literature

2 - Name the title, publication date, and volume number so that the reviewer can exercise the option to verify...

GraduateRutujaM - Dec 29, 2021Holt - Dec 30, 2021
Computers, robotics and technology - Motivation letter for Stipendium Hungaricum scholarship

2 - In the first paragraph, you clearly make mention of the provisions that the scholarship will provide as the main...

ScholarshipDaniel Saw - Dec 29, 2021Holt - Dec 29, 2021
What as a student at Boston University most excites you?

5 - It is great to mention a certain course or classes you would like to take. However, the reasons are...

UndergraduateRohan21 - Dec 29, 2021hhspark - Jan 2, 2022
GLOCAL - SCHOLARSHIP IN GLOBAL MARKETS AND DEVELOPMENT

2 - The essay is too busy. It is trying to over inform the reviewer, which will be a negative on...

Scholarshipsmeo - Dec 29, 2021Holt - Dec 29, 2021
Masters of Health Informatics U of Waterloo.

2 - Definitely a dramatic opening that sets up an exciting personal statement, only to be disappointed by the succeeding...

GraduateRas_Patrick - Dec 29, 2021Holt - Dec 29, 2021
Academic Recommendation Letter for Application of Master's in Financial Engineering

2 - The first question that will enter the reviewer's mind is, why is his immediate work supervisor not the recommendee?...

LettersBAMF - Dec 29, 2021Holt - Dec 29, 2021
Letter Of Motivation - Master in Technical Management

3 - @Holt Minimum word count is not specified but institute is asking for at least two pages LOM...

Graduatelalitkumar - Dec 28, 2021lalitkumar - Dec 28, 2021
An avid collector - UVA Quirks Supplemental Essay

2 - I believe that you do not understand what a quirk is. What it means and how it applies to...

Writing Feedbackaxelkirsch - Dec 28, 2021Holt - Dec 28, 2021
Design cultures - The Global UGRAD Program is for young leaders

2 - Think about this for a second. Can you remember a time when you showed early leadership skills and...

Undergraduatehhspark - Dec 28, 2021Holt - Dec 28, 2021
Commencing of oversea students - Ielts writing task 1 line graph

2 - There must be a clear differentiation of the line graph images. There are 2 images presented for analysis...

Writing Feedbackhuong7291 - Dec 28, 2021Holt - Dec 28, 2021
Question about writing task 2 Ielts: Children play computer games

3 - Your introduction is weak. You do not need to restate the prompt or directly say this is what this...

Writing Feedbackjaneedilyss - Dec 28, 2021axelkirsch - Dec 28, 2021
Ielts writing task 1 bar chart about holiday accommodation

2 - You went directly to the trending statement without offering a proper summary overview. This will cost you percentage...

Writing FeedbackThegiftedone - Dec 27, 2021Holt - Dec 28, 2021
Growing at rural area - Motivational Letter for Erasmus Mundus STEPS

2 - You have summarized the motivation to the point of being uniformative. Yes, there is a maximum word count to...

Lettershansryanp - Dec 27, 2021Holt - Dec 28, 2021
Reference letter from my manager in an educational group to Chevening high commission/UK embassy

2 - For starters, the refereree does not make it clear when he last had professional contact with you. He must...

ScholarshipFarzad_e - Dec 27, 2021Holt - Dec 27, 2021
IELTS2: Idea that students should be allowed to study with people who have the same capacity as them

2 - You are expected to restate the original discussion topic without adding any misleading statements or personal opinions that...

Writing Feedbackyuanyuanyuan04 - Dec 27, 2021Holt - Dec 27, 2021
Family talk - EXPLAIN HOW YOU RESPONDED TO A PROBLEM AND/OR AN UNFAMILIAR SITUATION.

2 - 5670 characters. That is the number of characters that you wrote. What does this tell me? You did not...

UndergraduateEJ1809 - Dec 26, 2021Holt - Dec 26, 2021
Friends and activities - WHAT IS IMPORTANT TO YOU? WHY?

3 - I think overall you wrote a good essay but you can improve on second paragraph. You have sort of...

Undergraduatehellcat75 - Dec 26, 2021ANJ - Dec 29, 2021
My willingness to learn new things - Motivation letter for Erasmus mundus scholarship

2 - You are addressing the wrong audience. The letter must be addressed to the consortiun, not the university reviewer. You...

Lettersuday312 - Dec 26, 2021Holt - Dec 26, 2021
A plane ticket to Richmond - Umiami Supplemental Prompt

2 - Thankfully, you did not use the Covid-19 lockdown to discuss the topic. That is the tired and most common...

Undergraduateaxelkirsch - Dec 26, 2021Holt - Dec 26, 2021
New company goods - Ielts writing for task2

7 - From my point of view, in your introduction part, you should have a thesis statement that states the overview...

Writing Feedbackshannov - Dec 26, 2021Kevin Huy - Jan 2, 2022
You are going to have a party at home. Make a talk about how to prepare for the party

2 - Writing this presentation based on an actual event is a nice approach. At the very least, it gives you...

Writing Feedbackhuongquynh123 - Dec 26, 2021Holt - Dec 26, 2021
UofT's econ program - Scholarship Essay Question 1

2 - Exciting you is one thing. How does these mentions relate to the long term plans? Why are these...

ScholarshipANJ - Dec 26, 2021Holt - Dec 26, 2021
Myself and I - UBC Personal Profile: What is important to you ? And why ?

2 - This response essay is all over the place. There is no order to the idea presentation, the sentence structures...

Undergraduatenonameplz - Dec 26, 2021Holt - Dec 26, 2021
NTU scholarship essay - A value that I hold strongly to.

2 - You have to present 2 personal characteristics as reflected by one value and one belief system. This essay is...

Scholarshipantony4521 - Dec 25, 2021Holt - Dec 26, 2021
Need review for my sop for MS in data science; The capacity to discriminate between what you know...

2 - This is a highly arrogant, condescending and irritating personal statement. If this is how you choose to present yourself...

GraduateSivasankar - Dec 25, 2021Holt - Dec 25, 2021
Introduction my family and myself

3 - Work on the improvements Holt suggested. However, I also suggest you rewrite this paragraph in a more concise manner...

UndergraduateAfshin - Dec 25, 2021animishg - Dec 26, 2021
Motivation Letter for Scholarship admission in Sweden - Sustainable Technology

4 - you should correct your very first sentence as dear sir OR madam. next, what bring this program for your...

LettersEngineer89 - Dec 25, 2021samidare707 - Dec 31, 2021
How will you contribute to our pledge to access, equity, and inclusion?

2 - There is a good sense of community and strong sense of civic mindedness in the application. Does it show...

Scholarshipripti - Dec 24, 2021Holt - Dec 25, 2021
Social Media Affect on Mental Health

2 - Focus the research on data relating only to teen use of social media and and the resulting effects on...

Research Papersellakay - Dec 24, 2021Holt - Dec 25, 2021
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