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Ads lead people to make unnecessary purchases or they just introduce new products to customers

3 - I think your statement is quite unclear, you should answer directly what the question is about (choosing which view)...

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Replacing old buildings by new ones.

2 - Your ersonal opinion is not a required part of this discussion and should not be part of the...

Writing Feedbacknhatlinhle95 - Oct 27, 2021Holt - Oct 28, 2021
Playing games teach you about life

3 - I think your ideas are quite good but they should be illustrated with more examples and evidence. For e.g.:...

Writing Feedbacklinh san - Oct 27, 2021elinita123 - Oct 30, 2021
Ielts essay: In the modern society, children are less reliant on their parents (250 words)

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IELTS writing task 2: Companies use different way to increase sales.

2 - The student takes on the prompt restatement in a very complex manner. Not to say that it is not...

Writing FeedbackChristinedang - Oct 27, 2021Holt - Oct 28, 2021
Task 1: The table compares the number of travellers to five different countries and their spendings

2 - This essay will automatically fail. The required and most important paragraph, the summary overview, is missing from the...

Writing FeedbackCharlie William - Oct 26, 2021Holt - Oct 27, 2021
IELTS task 2: Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourism industries.

2 - The discussion approach does not meet the prompt requirements. The discussion restatement is unrelated to the orginal topic: ...

Writing FeedbackHagnhang - Oct 26, 2021Holt - Oct 27, 2021
Challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well

2 - Try to give direct responses to these questions as these will be the scoring basis for your opinion...

Writing Feedbackpriuet - Oct 26, 2021Holt - Oct 27, 2021
I chose Information Engg Course at Ritsumeikan because.. of opportunities

2 - The discussion paragraphs are disconnected. Logical development and connection between paragraph ideas are necessary to properly answer the question....

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Young students are obliged to study overseas languages in most schools

2 - The prompt paraphrase is nowhere near the original discussion topic. The issue is whether students should be pressured or...

Writing Feedbackvannam1 - Oct 26, 2021Holt - Oct 27, 2021
Debating challenge - How did it affect you (COMMONAPP)

2 - The discussion should represent both sides of the story. Surely you were told the reason why you were being...

Undergraduatedezade - Oct 26, 2021Holt - Oct 27, 2021
The statistics regarding purchased tickets for cinema, concert and theatre

3 - The charts below (nothing is below in the answer sheet) show how selected age groups in three countries purchased...

Writing Feedbackhathuynongtrang - Oct 25, 2021Charlie William - Oct 26, 2021
The causes of teenage drug abuse

2 - You cannot use this phrase when enumerating several other related outcomes. This phrase only applies to single reference...

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In some countries, celebrities earn higher salaries than senior politicians. What are the reasons?

2 - Word choice error leading to a lowered vocabulary score. The correct term is athletes. An athlete is a...

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Ielts writing task2 about environment evaluation

3 - @Holt Thanks so much for your comment. Which band do u think i can receive??...

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Taking advantage of the modern technology for the better life

3 - Thanks for your help...

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IELTS Writing Task 2 - Tourism's influence economy and environment

5 - @hieuvo218 Thanks for answering. But don't "think" pls. Please give me reliable information that you know for sure. And...

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ADHD, Dyslexia - UBC Sauder School of Business - Personal Profile Essay

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IELTS WRITING TASK 2 Cultures and traditions change from generation to generation

NEW - Cultures and traditions change from generation to generation. Why does this happen? What can be done to change it?...

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My friends and family hold great trust in me and would describe me as ...

3 - Hii! This is not professional advice, just a peer-to-peer review based on what I've learned from past applicants &...

Undergraduatebhavye - Oct 25, 2021Aiza05 - Oct 26, 2021
My foundation for the future. International Relations Personal Statement

2 - A personal statement should help the reviewer understand the basis of your interest in International Relations. It should not...

Undergraduatevankhanh - Oct 25, 2021Holt - Oct 25, 2021
Said Foundation - notable achievement

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your comment and support, the limit is only 250 words....

Scholarshipmajd1994 - Oct 24, 2021majd1994 - Oct 26, 2021
More funds needed to uncover planets that could be a suitable accommodation for human

2 - You are the writer. This is your opinion. You are not analyzing the point of view of someone...

Writing Feedbackthduongg2809 - Oct 24, 2021Holt - Oct 25, 2021
Benefits of daily exercise

2 - The content of the presentation is strong when it comes to topic presentations. However, it is weak in terms...

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Erasmus Mundus Application: Personal Statement - Global Markets, Local Creativities - Study Track B

2 - This is an unproven claim that should not be included in this essay. It is a sensationalist topic...

Scholarshipiamjms - Oct 24, 2021Holt - Oct 25, 2021
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - A GENERAL EDUCATION VERSUS VOCATIONAL EDUCATION - merits and demerits

2 - The discussion format is the main reasons why this essay may avoid a passing score. Based on the task...

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IELTS Writing Task 2 - life expectancy and a balanced society

3 - @Holt Thanks so much!...

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Adolescents' free time must be spent on doing unpaid work for the community

2 - The exaggerated response is uncalled for. Use this type of response presentation only for "extent" requirement essays. For...

Writing Feedbacknhu hao - Oct 24, 2021Holt - Oct 25, 2021
Chevening - Study in the UK - three university choices; Birkbeck, Goldsmiths and Salford

4 - thanks so much for your advice...

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IELTS WRITING TASK 2: ABOUT MUSEUM as an attractive and entertaining place for youngsters

2 - This is an opinion discussion sentence. It should not be presented in the restatement + opinion paragraph. There...

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