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IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - formal schooling or independent learning online at home?

2 - It is difficult to defend a single opinion stance when you say you "personally partially agree with this notion"....

Writing Feedbackmmai - Jan 31, 2021Holt - Jan 31, 2021
The proportion of people who had a habit of eating five portions of fruit and vegetables every day

3 - Hello, I am not sure that women consume more vegetables and fruit than men. What I learn from the...

Writing FeedbackThao Vy Tran Thi - Jan 30, 2021LadyOfClockwork - Feb 8, 2021
SOP for Msc in psychology and cognitive science

2 - You have to remove the reference to being an 11 year old and having such an active interest in...

Graduateale996 - Jan 30, 2021Holt - Jan 31, 2021
My Study Plan for writing the Language Proficiency Test and the GRE

2 - I am not sure what you mean by "writing these exams." Do you mean you wish to take these...

ScholarshipJibolar - Jan 30, 2021Holt - Jan 31, 2021
WHAT THE YOUNGER GENERATION NEED - JOURNALISM, AN ESSAY FOR TURKIYE SCHOLARSHIPS

3 - @Holt Hi, thanks for your advice! but if I may know, how to write a compelling first sentence so...

ScholarshipShara Fazhalia - Jan 30, 2021Shara Fazhalia - Jan 31, 2021
Task 1: The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six types of UK school

NEW - Answer in Text summarise the information from the chart The bar chart illustrates the proportion of men...

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Women are usually under-represented in STEM fields. Explain the reasons and give solutions.

2 - You cannot claim that gender discrimination has been a problem "throughout centuries" as the claim regarding gender discrimination is...

Writing FeedbackKhanh Nguyen - Jan 29, 2021Holt - Jan 30, 2021
Artificially intelligent robots at every workplace. IELTS writing part II. Give your opinion type.

2 - You have to frame the opinion you are presenting in the first person presentation format. The prompt clearly asks...

Writing FeedbackAnami - Jan 28, 2021Holt - Jan 29, 2021
The proportion of total residents in India, China, USA and Japan with prediction for 2050

3 - Thank you very much for the feedback, Holt. I will try my best to always improve my writing...

Writing Feedbacknadiraapsari - Jan 28, 2021nadiraapsari - Jan 29, 2021
STATEMENT OF PURPOSE FOR GEOSCIENCE MASTER DEGREE, BRUNEI DARUSSALAM GOVERNMENT SCHOLARSHIP (BDGS)

2 - What is the purpose of your thesis research? How do you see this contributing to the study of volcanology...

Graduateshofihawan - Jan 28, 2021Holt - Jan 29, 2021
Education Policies for Global Development - GLOBED Erasmus Mundas Scholarship- Motivation Letter

3 - @Holt- thank you so much for your feedback. I will definitely go back and rework these missing points....

Letterskschnet - Jan 28, 2021kschnet - Jan 31, 2021
Second Bachelor's Statement for Linguistics - Flow and Cohesion

3 - @Holt, thank you very much for your feedback. I've reworked my essay using this as my base and am...

UndergraduateSchwa - Jan 27, 2021Schwa - Jan 31, 2021
Should there be any limits of amount of years a teacher may teach the same subject or grade level?

4 - @Holt @HafizTaimoor Thank you for your feedback! It's my first time practicing this kind of essay and honestly I...

Writing Feedbackmarjoeyo_20 - Jan 27, 2021marjoeyo_20 - Jan 27, 2021
Educational Goals & Interests; Digital Media & Computer Science

2 - The presentation is clear and shows a definite interest in the individual programs as both individual courses and, a...

Undergraduatefreshmango - Jan 27, 2021Holt - Jan 27, 2021
Scared of driving - CBEST- Identify an obstacle you have faced in your life

2 - Okay. I noticed that towards the middle part of the essay, you lost your focus on the topic you...

Writing Feedbackmeetuapril2005 - Jan 27, 2021Holt - Jan 27, 2021
STUDY FOOD SCIENCE, SHOULD OR NOT? DISCUSS.

2 - You have to be able to tell the difference between a debate, a discussion, an opinion, and a thought...

Writing Feedbackstudyingabroad - Jan 26, 2021Holt - Jan 27, 2021
Why did you choose the Master of Taxation at the University of Sydney? AAS Supporting Statement

2 - Since this is a word limited response, you need to balance the presentation to reflect a proper discussion for...

ScholarshipStephan - Jan 26, 2021Holt - Jan 26, 2021
My Application Essay for Fashion School in New York

2 - You should definitely write more since you still have the space to do so. The essay was fantastic in...

Undergraduatefashionista28 - Jan 26, 2021Holt - Jan 26, 2021
An ardent passion for the electric energy industry. Erasmus program motivation letter 2021

2 - Remove the link to the article. Believe me, the reviewer isn't going to read it. Your narration should tell...

Scholarshipmic - Jan 25, 2021Holt - Jan 26, 2021
Security and gender - Erasmus Mundus Scholarship Personal Statement

2 - I feel like there is a missing link in this presentation. As this is a personal statement, it has...

Scholarshipcassandravd - Jan 25, 2021Holt - Jan 26, 2021
Applying the time with industry experts in Sweden to the Ghanaian construction industry

2 - The second paragraph is more direct to the point and should open the statement response. However, only the first...

ScholarshipFAWAZ - Jan 25, 2021Holt - Jan 26, 2021
The graph shows the number of visitors to a variety of art galleries in 2011.

3 - Seams that the sctructure of the essay is correct, however it is difficult to estimate it without image. Instead...

Writing Feedbackhanngoctran1104 - Jan 25, 2021madrisheva - Feb 8, 2021
Senior Teacher at the University of Adelaide and Monash University? Why?

2 - Your backstory is too long. Summarize that part and immediately present the reasons why you chose this masters course...

ScholarshipKyaw Min - Jan 25, 2021Holt - Jan 26, 2021
The structural engineering field - Application to an Erasmus Scholarship

2 - The first paragraph that you wrote is really unnecessary. The reviewer already knows the purpose of the motivation letter...

Scholarshipluchernandezse - Jan 25, 2021Holt - Jan 26, 2021
In some countries, it is important to have a private house rather than renting one

5 - @hglingg Thanks for your kind words !...

Writing FeedbackNgocngo - Jan 25, 2021Ngocngo - Feb 19, 2021
Productive high-school years - UWC scholarship essay

3 - I think you did not focus on the main goal of how you are going to contribute to UWC....

ScholarshipErmuun - Jan 25, 2021AbdelrahmanWal4 - Jan 26, 2021
Writing Test : anti-society behaviors

2 - Since you did not specify which English test you have written this paper for, I will not be able...

Writing FeedbackMelodyAn - Jan 25, 2021Holt - Jan 25, 2021
Statement of Purpose GKS Food Science Major

2 - You need more specifics in this statement of purpose. You have already worked in a nutritional laboratory and done...

ScholarshipAlfredoCruz - Jan 25, 2021Holt - Jan 25, 2021
University of Pennsylvania's Master of Behavioral & Decision Science - Personal Statement

NEW - Personal Statement essay Hi all, I am applying to Master of Behavioral & Decision Science, University of Pennsylvania....

Graduatelisarg - Jan 24, 2021 -
Erasmus Mundus Scholarship- FOOD4S Joint Master degree- Motivation letter

2 - The first paragraph is not required information for this essay. You should remove that paragraph in totality and retain...

Lettersmariana_2314 - Jan 24, 2021Holt - Jan 24, 2021
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