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my first intro to chemistry class - UM Major

3 - yea sorry i forgot to answer what exactly i wanted advice on but I just wanted to know if...

Undergraduatemihirmj - Nov 23, 2008mihirmj - Nov 24, 2008
"Gained social, intellectual, or cultural differences" - UM Diversity

4 - You're very welcome. The content looks good to me; you answer the prompt and it is easy to read....

Undergraduatemihirmj - Nov 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
Telling the truth is not a best option always

5 - Good morning :) I think I'd probably give it a low C right now, as it is without...

Writing FeedbackAsselya - Nov 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
"the day I first came to America" - admission essay

2 - Good afternoon :) First, some mechanical suggestions. Make sure you are capitalizing only the first words of sentences...

Undergraduateskjw25 - Nov 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 23, 2008
A CULT and YOUTH?- UC Essay Prompt #1. revise.

7 - I was repeatedly taught that I did was not affiliated with any particular "religion" but to a "method" by...

Undergraduatenunya415 - Nov 23, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 23, 2008
"the school varsity tennis team" - Prompt #2

7 - I feel like focusing on the tennis team is a good idea, but your not describing how you've applied...

UndergraduateFatalKid91 - Nov 23, 2008shahindian2009 - Dec 13, 2008
How to properly place the quotation which is referring to Enderun?

2 - Good evening :) You should consult your required citation style for final formatting questions, but I believe the...

Grammar, Usageeng1 - Nov 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 23, 2008
Resilience and Confucian proverb

3 - Good evening :) OK, let's see. How about, "When I was six, I curiously pressed a key on...

Undergraduaterainyxoxo - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 23, 2008
'volunteering at local schools' - UC prompt#2 - Helping people

2 - Good evening :) I think you've got really good content here; you describe what experience/event you are proud...

Undergraduatemember123 - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 23, 2008
"What Men Live by?" - Leo Tolstoy once asked this question in one of his famous novels

4 - Thank you so much!!! by the way are you still working at this late night?.. I feel bad..:( ...

Undergraduateskjw25 - Nov 22, 2008skjw25 - Nov 23, 2008
'one cannot do everything, one can do something' - UT Austin- issue of importance

2 - Good evening :) This is a wonderful essay! I only have a couple of suggestions: "...in 9th...

UndergraduateJamandaJuice - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 23, 2008
"Catia - My role model" - Opinion... Admission Essay

6 - i think you should make the first few sentences more interesting; say something that will grab the readers attention...however...

Undergraduateapramone - Nov 22, 2008trinilissabee - Dec 9, 2008
"Linked to my grandfather's presence" -UC prompt 1

2 - I think this is a great piece, especially that first paragraph. You acknowledge and answer every facet of the...

Undergraduatesurfsandiego - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 23, 2008
"The person, my grandpa" - UC prompt #2

2 - Good evening :) Since you didn't explain what type of assistance you were seeking, I have made some...

Undergraduatelyndn21 - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 23, 2008
"I think Florida State is perfect" - FSU essay

2 - I think your content is a great answer to the prompt. You take each character trait and evaluate and...

Undergraduatealexanderstodda - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 23, 2008
questions on UC personal statement

2 - Good evening :) I think that answering an essay prompt with a complete sentence to begin with is...

Undergraduateskjw25 - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 22, 2008
"There is one who leads and there is one who follows." - admission essay

4 - I'm sorry, I'm not familiar with the university or their admissions procedures and requirements. Can you post the prompt...

Undergraduatektjhmj - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 22, 2008
Writing an essay on "the iron men" by farley mowat

2 - Good evening :) Congratulations on going back to school! It will be a wonderful experience. First off, to...

Essayskrissygirl - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 23, 2008
"Music is discipline" - Prompt #2 uc essay

3 - Thank you for taking time to read over my essay!...

Undergraduatehsgrad09 - Nov 22, 2008hsgrad09 - Nov 24, 2008
"VCU scholarship essay" - Compose Page 87 of your autobiography

3 - Thank you Gloria. I appreciate your assistance....

Scholarshipskaterkane - Nov 22, 2008skaterkane - Nov 29, 2008
"I had to reach the finish line." - Help with Prompt 2

2 - Good evening :) I think you've got a good start here, but the focus is in the wrong...

Undergraduatelilibeth91760 - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 22, 2008
I have already previewed life at Penn State and absolutely loved it - summer experience

4 - I think once you've done the mechanical/grammatical polishing, it will be a great piece. Take a deep breath and...

Undergraduateeleankel - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 22, 2008
Biology Creative Essay

2 - Good evening :) What can we help you with here? What kind of assistance are you seeking? ...

Writing Feedbackmonee2 - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 22, 2008
'the only other Indian-American' - Common App Admission

4 - Thanks for clarifying; it helps. I think the piece flows very well. It is nicely organized, uses smooth...

Undergraduateupstateny15 - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 23, 2008
"our district championship" - Common App Elaboration--150 words.

2 - Good afternoon :) This is a very good short response. The only thing I can see is to...

Undergraduatebhangra369 - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 22, 2008
My Undergraduate essay to FSU

2 - Good afternoon :) I think your content answers the prompt well, and it is organized, but there are...

Undergraduatelivefromthe850 - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 22, 2008
"the cops around my block" - uc prompt 1

4 - hey, i dunno if this could play a crucial role or not but the prompt is actually: Describe the...

Undergraduatevanvan513 - Nov 22, 2008nunya415 - Nov 23, 2008
ADVANTAGES OF CITY LIVING AND COUNTRY LIVING, can you help me with this?

NEW - Some people, say that living in the countryside is the best choice, because is better for your heath. But...

Writing Feedbackjavier5555 - Nov 22, 2008 -
SAIC design statement of purpose; 'As long as there is life, there will be art'

7 - Good afternoon :) You're on the right track; much improved from the last couple of times. Continue to...

Undergraduateadelewu - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 23, 2008
USC Short question - swimming activity

NEW - Tell us about an activity that is important to you, and why. To begin with, all students face...

UndergraduateFYI - Nov 22, 2008 -
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