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Medical Technology and Pharmacy - study of purpose for schoolarship

2 - Does the scholarship statement of purpose come with a specific prompt instruction? This version does not really feel like...

ScholarshipLinh96 - Sep 25, 2020Holt - Sep 25, 2020
IELTS Writing Task 2- not enough students study science subjects at university (Reasons/impacts)

2 - Try not to write more than 290 words for the Task 2 essay. Focus on the clarity of each...

Writing Feedbackyumiwan - Sep 25, 2020Holt - Sep 25, 2020
Meaningfulness life due to job satisfaction in long working hours at the workplace

2 - Your original prompt is incomplete. it does not provide the reason why people would think that life is meaningless...

Writing Feedbackyennhi_20 - Sep 25, 2020Holt - Sep 25, 2020
Describe personal information you want to share as a part of your admissions application

2 - You have a pretty good outline of what you want to discuss. Yes, these are extenuating circumstances that you...

UndergraduateWorthyJ2001 - Sep 24, 2020Holt - Sep 25, 2020
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: CONSTRUCTING HIGH-RISE BUILDINGS OR EXPANDING LAND SIZE TO CREATE HOUSES

2 - Your essay is confusing to read from beginning to end. You never really defend your belief that building houses...

Writing Feedbackhanvuong96 - Sep 24, 2020Holt - Sep 25, 2020
My ACT Test - Questbridge 200 word essay

2 - Well, yes. This is a good story that shows how much you care about the academic side of your...

Scholarshiptran165954 - Sep 24, 2020Holt - Sep 25, 2020
IELTS Writing task 2 about the purpose of University

3 - You are being asked to offer an opinion based on 2 reasoning considerations. There is no debate / argument...

Writing Feedbackchouhonganh - Sep 24, 2020Holt - Sep 25, 2020
Questbridge Topical Essay - "My Missing Mother & Third-Grade Teacher"

3 - The prompt is asking you to provide information regarding an experience that cause you to change your mind or...

Scholarshiprosemarymelon - Sep 24, 2020Holt - Sep 25, 2020
MSc E-Business and Innovation / Security - My STUDYING Essay 4 Chevening Award

4 - Hi I think you gave a very comprehensive essay on the courses you choose. However, adding to Holt's comments,...

Scholarshipnewchevening - Sep 24, 2020marlynoktavia - Sep 29, 2020
What are some negative effects of spending too much time on facebook

2 - you listed this piece of writing under Essays but failed to identify if this is for a Task 2...

Writing FeedbackTranTran - Sep 24, 2020Holt - Sep 24, 2020
I am prepared for this scholarship - ECONOMICS

3 - @Holt I really appreciate your feedback. My mind is clearer now. I focused only in writing "more and better"...

Scholarshipandtrev - Sep 24, 2020andtrev - Sep 25, 2020
The elections of Key Club Statistical Secretary - Questbridge 200 Word Essay

4 - @Holt I see. Thanks for the feedback, I'll definitely reflect on that!...

Scholarshiptran165954 - Sep 24, 2020tran165954 - Sep 24, 2020
VARIATIONS IN THE USAGE OF TRANSPORTS - IELTS writing task 1

2 - You are assuming that the reader can see the table in front of them. You have to always remember...

Writing FeedbackEabc - Sep 24, 2020Holt - Sep 24, 2020
Essays from Ielts Writing Task 2

2 - - The example mentioned in the second paragraph is quite confused...the doctors wear the same clothes which they use...

Writing Feedbackthaonguyenhihi - Sep 23, 2020ngthuha - Sep 24, 2020
Focus, responsibility, attitude - leadership and influence (Chevening)

5 - Hi, Should definitely put less focus on teamwork and focus on what you were able to accomplish. Probably...

Scholarshipdhienie - Sep 23, 2020kte3005 - Oct 12, 2020
"Avenger series" - IELTS Writing Essay: Foreign Films > Local Films

3 - @Holt Thank you very much for you assessment. By the way, wouldn't you mind grading me the band of...

Writing FeedbackChrishuynh - Sep 23, 2020Chrishuynh - Sep 24, 2020
The Risk of the Younger Generation with Technology - Rough Draft for peer review

2 - You have provided a good introduction and thesis statement for your research paper. It has a clear thesis, proper...

Research Paperslluyis - Sep 23, 2020Holt - Sep 23, 2020
The fundamental capabilities of new workers such as interpersonal skills are often below standards

2 - It is incorrect to use the term "required standards" in your paraphrase of the phrase "lack basic interpersonal skills"....

Writing Feedbacktonie_anh - Sep 23, 2020Holt - Sep 23, 2020
IELTS Writing Task 1 - Line graph: the figures for passenger railway journeys in the UK

4 - @Holt I do appreciate your feedback on my report writing. I will make note on your suggestion of the...

Writing Feedbackngthuha - Sep 23, 2020ngthuha - Sep 24, 2020
Work performance factors - Bar graph - IELTS writing task 1

2 - Your summary overview is still too similar to the original presentation. It feels like you just moved words around...

Writing FeedbackEabc - Sep 23, 2020Holt - Sep 23, 2020
QuestBridge National College Match Essay: Biography - more about myself

2 - Your essay is very touching on a personal level. I learned a tremendous amount of information about your parents...

Scholarshipthatoneguy - Sep 22, 2020Holt - Sep 23, 2020
Some people think the money spent on developing technology for space exploration is not justified

3 - Thank you!!!...

Writing Feedbackparadis_149 - Sep 22, 2020paradis_149 - Sep 26, 2020
The proportion of male and female students studying six art-related subjects at a UK university

4 - Thank you so much for your advice!...

Writing Feedbackan12102000 - Sep 22, 2020an12102000 - Sep 23, 2020
IELTS Writing Task 1 - The line graph of Iranian, Greek and Turkish students at Sheffield University

4 - @Holt That was such a fatal mistake in my writing. Thanks for pointing that out....

Writing Feedbackvyvan - Sep 22, 2020vyvan - Sep 24, 2020
Moving homes obstacle essay for common app

2 - Well, this is certainly a well written essay. However, I am not sure if you wrote this for the...

Undergraduatepelikrispy - Sep 22, 2020Holt - Sep 23, 2020
Unsupervised social media usage by youngsters is dangerous. Discuss problem & suggest solutions.

5 - @Holt Please check if I have written it correctly this time. In present times, the development of social...

Writing FeedbackEabc - Sep 22, 2020Eabc - Sep 23, 2020
Drinks containing sugars have gained increasing popularity among young people

4 - You should not be stating a fact by saying "it is true" in the paraphrase since there is no...

Writing FeedbackKIM THU - Sep 22, 2020Holt - Sep 23, 2020
My three university choice on Public Relations Major (Study Plan Essay Chevening)

2 - The main problem with your presentation is that you are presenting an unwarranted backstory in the opening presentation. This...

Scholarshipmosyi20 - Sep 22, 2020Holt - Sep 23, 2020
The value of one's country exports - IELTS - CAM 14

3 - You have not accurately recognized the images provided. You only mis-identify one of the two images. The two images...

Writing Feedbacknamdang98 - Sep 22, 2020Holt - Sep 23, 2020
The possibilities for the brain - Questbridge Topical Essay - curiosity

3 - @Holt Okay thank you so much again!!...

Scholarshipthaonhi97 - Sep 22, 2020thaonhi97 - Sep 23, 2020
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