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On effectiveness of satire to personal hygiene

2 - Unless you have the miraculous one wiper, the skid may soon be present. Skid marks, contrary to popular...

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An essay on world peace and international understanding

2 - In the past decade, the world was in a state of unrest almost all the time from natural or...

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IELTS essay "Should high school make music lessons compulsory" ? Opinion

2 - In our hectic lives , however, the demand is not for musically oriented students, but for academically developed employees....

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The effects of using computer everyday on children

6 - Glad I could help :) Best of luck on your essay mate....

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What government can do to conserve energy resources?

5 - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Increase the price of gasoline and electricity is the only...

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ielts essay: pros and cons of developments in agriculture

2 - I think it would be good to give at least one or two reasons in the first paragraph of...

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TOEFL: 'tiny problems' CHILDHOOD IS THE HAPPIEST TIME OF A PERSON'S LIFE.

3 - ...of 'Childhood is the happiest time of a person's life.' Childhood refers to ...---Do you see the correction I...

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A narrative of process of finding a house to rent (unforgetable experiences)

3 - Oh I am sorry, This is a story of my real life on the first day to live here...

Writing FeedbackRedboat - Dec 24, 2010 / Redboat - Dec 25, 2010
Miranda Rights are Important? - a persuasive essay

4 - The topic of Miranda rights in this essay may not be fully developed. First, these rights are when the...

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"I am a Proud African" VCU write about you and why you choose VCU.

3 - I think you don't really need your second paragraph since your first paragraph already strong about your identity. In...

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Improvised essay. "Fiddler on the Roof"

2 - i think its a good essay and most importantly it ends with a positive note. Besides that, I think...

Writing Feedbackshu - Dec 24, 2010 / pagall - Dec 24, 2010
ielts essay: distance-learning vs. attending school in person

2 - Dear Ruan, I think you can try to restructure your sentence like this because the second idea flows...

Writing Feedbackstarwish - Dec 22, 2010 / rajeshaaidu - Dec 22, 2010
Young people should try different jobs before sticking to one in long-term.

6 - ..For me, as a young peopleperson ....

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My political essay on the corrupt release of government information.

3 - If you put "monster" in quotes, it seems like you are actually mocking the idea that he is...

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Ielts: Charleen's talent and parent's perspectives

NEW - Q) It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sports and music,...

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IELTS the advantages and disadvantages of the prevalent of English

2 - With the development of globalization, English has becomethea dominated language in inter national trades , conferences and many important...

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Studying literature and history is more important than mathematics and science

3 - You write uniquely in the sense that you use commas to make your sentences more terse yet potent. For...

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Discuss the effects of advertising on our lives and give your opinion.

3 - Hey Kevin =). I have been waiting for a long time to have my essay checked on this site...

Writing FeedbackBobur - Dec 7, 2010 / Bobur - Dec 20, 2010
It has become easy to prepare food now days but has this improved our lives?

8 - @kevin,thanks for your helpful comments and advices, i forgot to add those points abt chemical pesticides n other stuff....

Writing Feedbacktas - Dec 7, 2010 / tas - Dec 19, 2010
Living in a big city has various advantages for people

4 - Reservation does not mean what you think it means. :-) Google it! At some point during this...

Writing Feedbacktheworm - Dec 7, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Dec 18, 2010
China vs USA" - Essay for different cultures

4 - Similarly in the ceremony of the marriage, birthday, and even burial, the entertainment of foods is the theme of...

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China essay city and country children , discuss

2 - She always tells me about her hometown Please follow me! these differences are as follows i'm chinese, so...

Writing Feedbackcherrysong - Dec 15, 2010 / starwish - Dec 18, 2010
Ielts : Young people's awareness of global issues

4 - i think your essay should focus on young people, for example, they live in a highly polluted environment compared...

Writing Feedbackriny - Dec 2, 2010 / starwish - Dec 18, 2010
Why do we need to study history?

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People today are not as friendly as people were in the past.

4 - I don't think it is good to use "In the 21th century" in your beginning, I use it a...

Writing FeedbackXUHAN - Dec 2, 2010 / starwish - Dec 18, 2010
Improving public health: sport places and importance of health

3 - thanks a lot, you are right, i do not present any good ideas, because it is just for IELTS...

Writing Feedbackvanliuwei - Nov 30, 2010 / vanliuwei - Dec 17, 2010
Describing my partner, Khalid (my best classmate)

3 - I'll change this comma to a period: He is older than me. He is 21 years old. He is...

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Technology, the social life killer or saviour?

3 - They are not destroying a social network. They are improving the communication capabilities in our social networks. But I...

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SAT essay! Where do I see myself when I am 22. Need grammar help.

4 - As dogs are a huge part of my life I will have at least two dogs of my own....

Writing FeedbackMLE27 - Dec 1, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Dec 16, 2010
Importance of working conditions? Focus on products or working conditions?

3 - In the first paragraph, the words "benefit" and "product" should both probably have an s at the end. However,...

Writing Feedbackhoangdaochu - Nov 30, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Dec 16, 2010
It takes a village to raise a child; children education for the community

3 - Very good feedback :-). Point noted, especially about the "etc." bit. Thanks a lot....

Writing Feedbacksubhash_ghosh - Dec 13, 2010 / subhash_ghosh - Dec 16, 2010
Toefl essay:Parents are the best teachers.

2 - the first sentence could be " Parent are best teachers to person instead of people, parent are best teachers...

Writing Feedbackpk1726 - Dec 16, 2010 / tunguoge - Dec 16, 2010
I will be someone someday as my father wanted me to!

NEW - Tut Gai 11/22/1980 Essays Topic B Under tree classroom My parents were cattle headers and farmers neither of...

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The thriving Cold Cone Creamery Franchise in California

2 - The speaker avers that Cold Cone Creamery Business will... Also, the statement further prompts people to avail themselves...

Writing Feedbacksubhash_ghosh - Dec 13, 2010 / EF_Susan - Dec 15, 2010
"the weather seemed more predictable from year to year" - Global Warming Essay

2 - The occurrence of natural disasters has increased, and seasonal weather has become irregular. There are two sides to...

Writing Feedbackdanielle94534 - Dec 13, 2010 / EF_Susan - Dec 15, 2010
India's Possible Rise in the 21st Century above the West - Globalization Paper

2 - Like the former globalization, it also depends on the cheap labor of Indians, and like it, there is still...

Writing Feedbackjyu104 - Dec 7, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Dec 14, 2010
Compare the advantages and disadvantages of media for communicating information

2 - Media per se is a powerful communicating tool for human beings. ---This sentence is obvious, and obvious things are...

Writing Feedbackpsebastian56 - Dec 9, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Dec 14, 2010
"Undecided girl can dream" - College essay

NEW - Every seven-year-old girl has a dream. Some want to be princesses, a few may want to be cowgirls or...

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ILLEGAL ENTRANCE - An Incident From my Life

3 - great help men thanks a lot !...

Writing Feedbackmertak - Nov 25, 2010 / mertak - Dec 13, 2010
"Does a zoo have any useful purpose?"

5 - azaaza is a good writer, haaa Beside a zoo has educational benefit also it has amusing and entertaining...

Writing Feedbackabdrabou - Dec 4, 2010 / andygu - Dec 13, 2010
TOEFL: Boys and girls should attend separate schools

11 - Thank you Bobur. I'll do my best the next time....

Writing FeedbackSiva071 - Dec 1, 2010 / NIBEK - Dec 12, 2010
"work nowadays is more stressful and less leisurely than in the past" IELTS essay two

10 - psebastian56 However, it does not relive the current stressful working situation that may change the attitude of the people...

Writing Feedbacksisiyunjao - Dec 6, 2010 / sisiyunjao - Dec 11, 2010
Essay about children's changes in eating habits

3 - You can say it is your opinion without using 1st person like I or my. Since the prompt is...

Writing Feedbackmelita - Nov 23, 2010 / jennay99 - Dec 10, 2010
The importance of students' sports activities

3 - However, universities should give more money to students' sports activities than they give to their university libraries. Students will...

Writing Feedbackwhitney - Nov 27, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Dec 10, 2010
My Little 'Buddha'

6 - Like Buddha who even didn't speak a word against the pundit,mM y player did not respondkept calm in response...

Writing Feedbackdhunjunikesh - Dec 7, 2010 / dumi - Dec 9, 2010
"the obesity epidemic in America" - Anthropology Essay

NEW - "I couldn't open up a magazine, you couldn't read a newspaper, you couldn't turn on the TV without hearing...

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"Where is the Line Defined?" - Argumentative Essay-no OUTSIDE SOURCES!

3 - At the end of the first paragraph I am wondering why this is worth writing about. It would...

Writing Feedbackericao2010 - Nov 26, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Dec 9, 2010
Reiterate: this is the utopia.

NEW - The concept of an utopia that embedded in my heart is a place that is repleted with the collaboration...

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"The attraction of New York City" - A meaningful Place

7 - My most favorite place has ... In order to stay on topic, you need to establish a topic...

Writing FeedbackKathyLala - Nov 25, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Dec 7, 2010
It's neither possible nor desirable to do the same job throughout work lives - IELTS

4 - thank you so so much!!!! CHONG :)...

Writing Feedbacksweetheart87 - Nov 23, 2010 / sweetheart87 - Dec 7, 2010
what causes students to cheat on the tests?

3 - Hi again...i think, while using the word 'Consequently', you'd better aviod asking questions. In conclusion part you should give...

Writing Feedbackazaaza - Dec 6, 2010 / Bobur - Dec 7, 2010
People are starving, but money is spent on pets

4 - This is a great thread! Thanks, everyone....

Writing Feedbacktuanphong892009 - Nov 25, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Dec 5, 2010
9/11 and Art Essay: Revise/Edit what i have so far.

2 - Songs were written. Paintings were painted. Poems were recited. Photos and videos were taken. This whole sentence has...

Writing Feedbackcaudet89 - Nov 30, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Dec 5, 2010
Importance of One Parent Stay Home with Their Young Children For The First Few Years

2 - Today, young people in every part of the world hope to have successful success in their jobs ....

Writing Feedbackthunguyen88 - Nov 30, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Dec 5, 2010
"the percentage of each source of energy used in America" IELTS Writing task 1

NEW - The given two graphs illustrate the percentage of each source of energy used in America during the period of...

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About "climate change and Fossil fuels" - what is causing climate change, human role

NEW - Examine the role of one human activity in causing climate change, and discuss how further deterioration may be prevented...

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Essay about concerns with education; students not learning helpful material- feedback

2 - Education is one of my personal concerns. ----boring first sentence... not much meaning. It is just informative. "I...

Writing Feedbackleesharshukov - Nov 29, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Dec 4, 2010
Essay about proving that experience is greater than books. - Feedback

2 - We try to use gender-inclusive sentences, here, so if you are going to address sirs address madams, too!...

Writing FeedbackEssayfreak - Nov 27, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Dec 3, 2010
"Forget How to Remember" - College Essay Idea Rough Draft

2 - ...began to stir up a wind every time they passed me. It was a wind so strong, it lifted...

Writing FeedbackD Kneco - Nov 27, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Dec 3, 2010
Some want independence and some prefer to live with thier families ,which you prefer?

2 - You should practice typinf each of these sentences 10 times so that you remember the correct grammar: Nowadays...

Writing Feedbackvaishali1980 - Nov 26, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Dec 3, 2010

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