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Cornell Engineering Essay--My City

5 - Hello! Alrighty, for this essay, I like most if it - I just think you can afford to...

Undergraduatepolitik - Dec 18, 2009colorfuloving - Dec 27, 2009
Grandfather's Influence - Princeton Supplement

5 - I think this a really good essay. The wording and fluency is pretty good. I did think the start...

Undergraduateeskape - Dec 27, 2009tchonis05 - Dec 27, 2009
"a written test on soccer" - Harvey Mudd College; Supplement essay

2 - And I am indeed a senior. And I'm glad to help. Good Luck with Harvey Mudd. I almost applied...

Undergraduateshinhwab - Dec 24, 2009mstickel - Dec 27, 2009
Common App. Essay (Lab research experience and its impact on me)

2 - 1) I think this can be catagorized under the significant experience, &c topic. 2) My Thoughts (which can be...

Undergraduatewanderlust - Dec 25, 2009birthdayattackr - Dec 27, 2009
whatever you feel we need to know to understand you as a "whole person"

2 - I feel this tells more than it shows. An admissions officer could have read about the content of the...

Undergraduatedavidlin1992 - Dec 27, 2009luminousx - Dec 27, 2009
"I presented to the Judges about the case" - MIT CREAVITY QUESTION

4 - HOWEVER, ALSO IT SAYS THE PROJECT YOU LED OR ANYTHING, ANY IDEAS TO END...

Undergraduatenaruto - Dec 26, 2009naruto - Dec 27, 2009
"Generous toward international students" - Swarthmore essay - Why Swarthmore?

3 - Thanks, you helped me a lot. I wrote it like that to emphasize how much I changed my...

UndergraduateCermi - Dec 27, 2009Cermi - Dec 27, 2009
Ithaca Answer FOR WHY I'VE CHOSEN BIOLOGY MAJOR

NEW - Here is the question: Please note briefly the reason(s) you selected the academic program to which you seek admission....

UndergraduateJd87rh - Dec 27, 2009 -
NYU supplements- essay about why i chose academic program & NYU

8 - alrighty, thanks a lot to all of you, and i do appreciate the critique! it is mostly the character...

UndergraduateEmmerz - Dec 26, 2009Emmerz - Dec 27, 2009
Cornell - The environment blurs into a sight of indistinguishable colors and shapes

10 - i'm sorry if i can across as harsh, you have some serious skills as a writer, you really do,...

Undergraduatetkkt1 - Dec 26, 2009srandhawa - Dec 27, 2009
"education is useless because it dulls our personalities." required supplement

15 - I think that the essay is much better than before. Its more focused than before. Could it be better...

Undergraduatez4evafoolz - Dec 26, 2009Dbarrows1 - Dec 27, 2009
Macaulay Honors Essay-Discuss some issue of national, or international concern

5 - Try to find a substitute for the word hate because you are using it continuously on the 4th paragraph....

Undergraduatealphacat92 - Dec 8, 2009mjellma - Dec 27, 2009
"wanted to study abroad" + "mascot" - Grinnell essays

7 - That's a nice touch, I'll think about it, but I'm afraid that 90% of the applicants mentions that Grinnell...

UndergraduateCermi - Dec 24, 2009Cermi - Dec 27, 2009
I discovered my love of politics; What led you to select your history : NYU

3 - It is not good to write all in one long paragraph. Try to write paragraphs that consist of about...

UndergraduateWrestlingnba - Dec 24, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 27, 2009
Common Application: My sister

4 - Interesting introduction. Try to keep the same flow in the next paragraphs. To do that, describe more vividly, use...

Undergraduatedanielhe - Dec 26, 2009poisonivy - Dec 27, 2009
Columbia Engineering short answers

5 - Nice both of them. Regarding to the first, why not be a little more specific about which community service...

Undergraduatem126531 - Dec 26, 2009poisonivy - Dec 27, 2009
Common App Essay. What I bring to the College "mix."

3 - Reduce the number of adverbs, but don't take out the meaningful ones, like "ironically." Looking back now, I seem...

UndergraduateDevataa - Dec 24, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 27, 2009
Master in Finance from University of Houston - Goal Statement Letter- feedback

3 - It is a day I imagine it to be After I get my Master in Finance from University of...

Graduatemafia - Dec 24, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 27, 2009
mica - artwork changing perception

2 - We don't all see the same way, I'm sure of that, but I want to know to what extent...

Undergraduateowls - Dec 27, 2009SkittleRose - Dec 27, 2009
My Mother's Words--CommonApp Essay

5 - She said that the letter was something that she wrote to us in case something ever happened to her,...

UndergraduateMarHall - Dec 21, 2009mjellma - Dec 27, 2009
How you first learned about Grinnell College? - Grinnell supplement

5 - One more thing... this part is weak: it was not until my friend Radka entered the Class of 2013,...

Undergraduatehaggahagga - Dec 24, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 27, 2009
UPenn Supplementary Essay: Benjamin Franklin and Contribution to the Community

4 - Yes, with online forms you often cannot indent. Instead we do line breaks. That's why, in a formal...

Undergraduatemargerine - Dec 23, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 27, 2009
Conncoll supplement - tell us something about you

2 - I consider exploring mysteries as my intellectual hobby. When I face a mystery, I treat it as a...

Undergraduatehbrad8002 - Dec 27, 2009SkittleRose - Dec 27, 2009
'different cultural background' - Equity and community-Lehigh supplement

5 - I'm writing my Lehigh essay too, isn't this too long to be submitted? You only have 1000 characters....

Undergraduatebhan_msm - Dec 20, 2009monzzzz92 - Dec 27, 2009
Various short poems- i wrote these poems last year for my English 3 honors class

3 - Actually, I just noticed that you did not give very much help to people yet; you certainly have the...

Poetryhbsflute2010 - Dec 23, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 27, 2009
Princeton Quote Essay---Engaging a troublesome child

3 - FAB! Very well written, short but adequate. a 100% winning essay! One of the best essays I ve read...

Undergraduatertgrove123 - Dec 24, 2009Wanderer_x - Dec 27, 2009
CORNELL CAS Supplement Essay- Cheating on Humanities!?

7 - okay, I reorganized some of the paragraphs. Someone told me they didn't like the affair metaphor, and then someone...

UndergraduateMasterus - Dec 26, 2009Masterus - Dec 27, 2009
NYU all four supplements:Yoko Ono, storylines, poem, diversity

2 - 1) I think you should mention something specific about Yoko... what draws you to her specifically? But other than...

Undergraduatetuna624 - Dec 27, 2009SkittleRose - Dec 27, 2009
2 short essays: Why Chicago & My favourite film.

6 - You are right!~ I feel so too when i write the two paragraghs. I will try to express more...

Undergraduatezealzou - Dec 10, 2009zealzou - Dec 27, 2009
'Everyone was not satisfied with our monitor' - How did you get caught?

15 - thank you sooooo much, kevin, and other friends' suggestions on this!~...I revised it several times would finnaly use it~~...

Undergraduatezealzou - Dec 1, 2009zealzou - Dec 27, 2009
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