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Writing task 1 essay about US annual income

2 - Do not use a numerical ordinal if you are not going to proceed with such usage in the later...

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Doing away with old buildings and building modern ones or restoring old buildings?

2 - This is incorrect. Not all people really care about architecture and the preservation of old buildings. The reference...

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Holiday at home or abroad - ielts writting task 2

2 - The first paragraph concerning the difficulties of international travel is well written to a certain point. The way that...

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Too much money on repairing old buildings instead of pulling them down and constructing the new ones

2 - Avoid exaggerating your reference to the discussion topic as the examiner will definitely lower your score in that aspect....

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The low productivity of agriculture land - IELTS Cambridge 8 Test 1 Task 1

2 - There is no such thing as a circle graph. I believe that you are trying to reference a...

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Write an essay how adults can influence younger people's behaviour

3 - Your information feels accurate. The structure of the paragraphs could use some work and there are some spelling mistakes...

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Benefits and drawbacks of sharing information

3 - @TryToWrite I think you could potentially cut the two body paragraphs in half and combine that to make a...

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CRITICAL ANALYSIS PAPER ON JUVENILE GANGS

2 - You appear to have a special connection with the word "also", using it with every chance that you get....

Research Papersmelarchie - Sep 10, 2023Holt - Sep 25, 2023
Statement Of Intent for School of Visual Arts BFA Fine Arts

NEW - Summary: Hello! I am trying to transfer to the School of Visual arts in New York and we are...

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The graph shows oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010.

2 - The presentation is good. You did your best to present the information properly and coherently to the examiner. However,...

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Explains the effects of music and music therapy on those with anxiety and ADHD.

2 - The section marked as number 2 in this presentation should be brought up to the top of the research...

Research Paperselliecaroline05 - Sep 9, 2023Holt - Sep 25, 2023
Personal Statement for MSc in Energy Systems at Oxford University

2 - I am wondering if you were given a specific set of writing guides before you wrote the personal statement....

GraduateAJaya - Sep 8, 2023Holt - Sep 24, 2023
IELTS Writing Task 1: The chart illustrates the income of households in the US

2 - The last paragraph of this essay is not structured as a mere report, which affected the overall presentation of...

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The graph describes the changes in medical funding in four countries from 2010-2018

2 - Familiarize yourself with time references based on numerical gaps. There is a 4 year gap between information presentations,...

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GAP YEAR ESSAY FOR COMMONAPP

2 - It is definitely an explanation of why you had to take a gap year. However, it is not the...

UndergraduateNaveed123 - Sep 8, 2023Holt - Sep 24, 2023
My journey of independence and family bonds Essay (Personal statement)

2 - The essay does not really show how you overcame an obstacle. It comes across more as you just complaining...

Undergraduateccbubblegirl - Sep 7, 2023Holt - Sep 24, 2023
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 : Young population outnumbers the old in various countries

2 - This is an incorrect interpretation of the original presentation. There is no dispute presented since only one public...

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IELTS WRITING TASK 2 about learning widely spo languages lead to the increase of minority languages

2 - Stick to your discussion opinion when explaining your point of view. There is no need to defend the opposite...

Writing Feedbackplinh136 - Sep 7, 2023Holt - Sep 24, 2023
The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned development site

2 - While you have met the minimum word count for the report, I would not say that you will be...

Writing Feedbackbinnguyen - Sep 7, 2023Holt - Sep 24, 2023
Motivation Letter for Ph.D in Bioanalytical Chemistry

NEW - APPLICATION FOR Ph.D Bioanalytical Chemistry program I'm MSc 1 student and this is a motivation letter for applying...

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Rubber Bands College Essay INTRO paragraph

2 - I find the paragraph to be highly redundant and lacking in focus. There is too much emphasis on the...

Undergraduatertm7272 - Sep 6, 2023Holt - Sep 18, 2023
Different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

2 - This is a failing task 1 essay. You need to learn how to write the proper 3-4 paragraph essay...

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IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Free education or new technology in developing countries.

2 - You are misinforming the reader and placing unnecessary information in your restatement that will affect the original message...

Writing Feedbackvuvietanh123 - Sep 6, 2023Holt - Sep 18, 2023
IELTS WRTING TASK 1 - TABLE: INTERNATIONAL STUDENTS IN CANADA AND USA

NEW - students in canada by their country of origin The table delineates the number of foreign students in Canada...

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Although families have influence on children's development, factors outside the home do too.

NEW - influence on child development It is a common belief that children are primarily affected by household members nurturing...

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What are the advantages and disadvantages of studying online?

NEW - studying online pros and cons What do you think of studying online? It is popular with its convenience...

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The chart below shows the aid from six developed countries to developing countries from 2008-2010.

NEW - funds for some developing countries The chart shows the number of financial aid from different nations to help...

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The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of education

NEW - the share of male and female teachers in the uk The chart below delineates the porportion between male...

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Some people think that too much attention and too many resources are given to the protection of wild

NEW - Some people think that too much attention and too many resources are given to the protection of wild animals...

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A sample of dream interpretation

NEW - Just a mixture of creative, what is on my mind essay. Dream is a manifestation of the subconscious...

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