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Teenagers should work unpaid, do you agree with the view? Write about 250 words

2 - You will already have failed the essay with your prompt restatement and writer's opinion alone. You are presenting a...

Writing FeedbackKhanhChi2009 - Sep 25, 2023Holt - Oct 7, 2023
The different of weight in England

2 - You are not making any sense in this section. The sentences do not carry any thought references and...

Writing Feedbackbantraicuabe - Sep 25, 2023Holt - Oct 7, 2023
[WRITING TASK 2] To meet the growing need for food to support an increasing population

2 - The essay will receive a failing score. You have not properly developed the discussion presentation when it comes to...

Writing FeedbackDoggoZ - Sep 25, 2023Holt - Oct 7, 2023
WRITING TASK 1: LINE GRAPH - CINEMA ATTENDANCE BY AGE GROUP IN THE UK

2 - Wrong sentence structure. You cannot use the word "and" to start a sentence. Being a conjunction, that is...

Writing FeedbackHuongTran - Sep 24, 2023Holt - Oct 7, 2023
Clean water - Chevening Leadership and Influence Essay

2 - The presentation is too selfish in focus. This is all about your leadership skills, but it is also wanting...

Scholarshipantonio1995 - Sep 23, 2023Holt - Oct 7, 2023
Common App main essay: Mother's Battle Changed my life

2 - I agree that you need to shorten the reference to your mother's cancer battle. You have too much of...

UndergraduateVgreene1659 - Sep 22, 2023Holt - Oct 7, 2023
GKS-U Personal Statement Business Administration; time to complete my university education in Korea

2 - This response is actually more aligned with the Language Study Goals than the requirements for the personal statement. Have...

Scholarshiprosieloet - Sep 22, 2023Holt - Oct 7, 2023
What is an ideal society? And how can we create it?

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Writing FeedbackRizChow - Sep 22, 2023Holt - Oct 7, 2023
WRITING TASK1: LINE GRAPH - GREEN TRANSPORTATION USAGE

2 - The summary overview is not well developed. You need to learn to enumerate the required information such as the...

Writing Feedbackpnpu07 - Sep 22, 2023Holt - Oct 7, 2023
Writing Task 2: Some people think that students should study the science of food and how to prepare

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Writing FeedbackQuy Nguyen - Sep 22, 2023Holt - Oct 7, 2023
Some students want to learn additional subjects. Others think should focus on getting a degree.

2 - The essay is over written. You cannot complete 288 words within 40 minutes. The actual test does not allow...

Writing Feedbacklynnci - Sep 21, 2023Holt - Oct 7, 2023
The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income

2 - You did not clearly identify the type of chart presented in the task. The image identifier helps to increase...

Writing Feedbackhuyphamdz1902 - Sep 21, 2023Holt - Oct 7, 2023
IELTS Writing Task 2 - Governments should make universities free for everyone

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Writing Feedbackmayajuststart_0 - Sep 21, 2023Holt - Oct 7, 2023
You want to sell the televesion. You think a friend of your might like to buy it from you.

2 - There are several discrepancies in your letter that affect the clarity of the information. 1. You have not...

Lettershnhung308 - Sep 21, 2023Holt - Oct 7, 2023
IELTS Writing task 2 - The excessive use of smartphones in free time

2 - The summary paraphrase and writer's opinion are unacceptable. The writer does not meet the passing preliminary TA score requirements...

Writing FeedbackEnglishwithakat - Sep 21, 2023Holt - Oct 7, 2023
MSc program in Physics at The University of Queensland - AAS

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ScholarshipOUDOM - Sep 20, 2023Holt - Oct 7, 2023
IELTS Writing Task 2 - about artificial intelligence

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Writing FeedbackPatsy Chan - Sep 20, 2023Holt - Oct 7, 2023
Chameleon of Roleplay - Questbridge personal statement

2 - Okay, the reviewer would rather get to know you without the constant reference to other characters. I understand that...

Undergraduatehayebal - Sep 20, 2023Holt - Oct 7, 2023
Catalyst of Change: Pursuing AI Dreams from Mexico to Korea (GKS scholarship)

NEW - personal statement Hi guys I will apply for the GKS scholarship, via university what do you think of...

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ISO ideas writing "WHO AM I?" for NFL Pitch Brochure

2 - It's good but needs to better focus on your drafting skills. The how is just as important as the...

UndergraduatePMG_SportsBiz - Sep 30, 2023Holt - Oct 3, 2023
IELTS WRITING TASK 1: Plastic Bottle Production Process

NEW - Hi! I would love to see comments based upon IELTS marking criteria, and possibly a detailed band score! Thank...

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Business Administration GKS personal statement undergraduate

NEW - Hello, I wish to apply GKS. It will be a huge help to me for you to check my...

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Leadership and Influence - Chevening Essay - An Ex Employee, Currently Business Owner

NEW - Greetings! Really appreciate your help with this Leaderhip and Influence essay for Chevening application. Any input is welcomed. Thank...

ScholarshipNGP1112 - Oct 2, 2023 -
Master of Computer Science Statement of purpose - review & suggestion

NEW - Computer Science Statement of purpose Dear University X Admissions Committee, I am writing to express my ambition...

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IELTS WRITING TASK 1: The proportion of money spent on different goods and services of households

NEW - The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010. The...

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IELTS WRITING TASK 2: ATTENTION SPANS

2 - Merged: writing on topic: attention spans being affected by social media - unprecedented technology-driven era: too complicated...

Writing FeedbackZoelee - Sep 28, 2023minhhien4326 - Sep 30, 2023
Statement of purpose for MS in Computer Science programs. I'm not sure how I should structure it.

3 - @Holt That makes sense, thanks for the reply! I'll take your advice into consideration and see how to...

Graduateanu_mh - Sep 16, 2023anu_mh - Sep 29, 2023
Statement of Purpose/Study Plan for Master's in International Business.

NEW - Prompt: I am applying for a Master's in international business in South Korea and they asked for a...

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What types of things do a logistics engineer plan?

NEW - writing a logistics engineer plan A logistics engineer plan is the basis for a business to reach its...

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DEVELOPMENT MANAGEMENT STUDIES- MOTIVATION LETTER FOR SCHOLARSHIP APPLICATION

3 - THANK YOU VERY MUSH...

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