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IELTS TASK 2: the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences
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Some learners need a structured course from high qualified teacher to know materials in a depth.
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Develop countries have created many environmental problems in the world; global warming (IELTS)
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Family - a root of happiness in human life; children and their parents seem to be less close nowaday
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Happiness is a feeling of pleasure or enjoyment. For this reason people see money as its source.
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IELTS TASK2: there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine
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Modern lifestyles are increasingly stressful, therefore people in this world are faced by stress.
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Information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workplace
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On the whole, people need to be aware of the value of food-consumed.
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Children are tomorrow asset for parent and nation. IELTS essay
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Sports unite peoples from different corners of the world. IELTS TASK 2.
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History creates value and shapes our life. For this reason law is available to protect old buildings
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Electricity transfers from high voltage cables into transformer station - one of several stages
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IELTS TASK 2: One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer
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IELTS TASK 2: Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years
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IELTS TASK 2: work for the same organization all their working life
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IELTS TASK 2: increasing number of people are suffering from health problems
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Human expression; art-based subjects should be compulsory in the curriculum - IELTS TASK 2
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One's success determines through rewarding career. People are choosing to change careers, why?
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A horizon communication these days speaks more than one language. Learning foreign language issue
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Both transportation stakeholders and commuters should participate in solving traffic problem
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Art is a product of human expression and for this case government should promote it
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IELTS TASK 2: The average age at which workers retire appears to vary widely around the world.
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IELTS TASK 2: teaching method with a teacher and students in a classroom will not exist
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A whole culture has grown up around the new possibilities of keeping in touch on the Web
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A prominent task of universities is to enroll prospective students for further next. IELTS
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First impression is an essential appear in workplace - employees should dress smartly - IELTS TASK 2
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Both - public services and impressive buildings obtain income for a city. IELTS Task 2
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To learn effectively, children need to eat a healthy meal and study in a comfortable atmosphere
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Logging of the rainforests is a serious problem and it may lead to very serious problems on Earth
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Unhealthy lifestyle - Perfect health in the way of life is a vital aspect in human life
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IELTS: The pattern of studying plays a major crucial aspect in the academic achievements
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People can easily achieve success unless they have two prominent aspects: talent and hard effort
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IELTS: Modern forms of communication increases the frequency and quality of interpersonal links
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School subjects will influence in student's future - Physical Education - IELTS TASK 2
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IELTS TASK 2: Medical Treatment; Health is above wealth for inhabitants in this world
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Children are needed to master foreign language to face the global world - IELTS
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'I argue that children's behavior does not rely on by television' - IELTS WRITING TASK 2
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IELTS: Climate change is a threat for the earth regardless of people's actions.
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IELTS: Arts are crucial to government to gain successful incomes by some events
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Age discrimination occurs when a decision is made on the basis of a person's age.
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The two methods of collecting water for irrigation purposes
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IELTS TASK 1 : The design for a wind turbine and its location
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The diagram depicts the phases of erosion of a headland
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The chart informs the number of Bulgarians moving to different countries based on level of education
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Two charts, one result in the survey of adult education; Writing task 1
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To look after the elderly - responsibility of families or the government?
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Artificial Intelligence at one of the world's prestigious University - candidate for a scholarship
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Adults education and the reasons why grown-up people continue studying - IELTS
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Kids who are not born with some sort of abilities and skills can be as successful as talented one
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'to impart negotiating skills' - Essay for Emory - Design an academic course
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The line graph compares and contrast data on the different percentage of unemployed women
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Columbia and Yamhill - population in the state of Oregon by Country - IELTS writing
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I do not agree to follow the same curriculum through all that period of time; GRE essay
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There are some huge gaps between male and female regarding teaching - IELTS
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IELTS - governments subsidize museums, theaters and other arts, and it concerns many people.
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Study once specialist subject or a series of subjects in universitiy
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HOW COLOUR CAN EFFECT PEOPLE'S FEELING
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People perceive change in different ways. Is it always for the better or not? Is vital for our lives
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Teenagers should not only watch the TV program, but also take responsibility to practice the sport
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IELTS: Big outdoor public space is necessary for all cities and towns, agree or disagree?
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What cause of people life longer ? is that positive of negative development? (IELTS Task 2)
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When possible, parents should sometimes have a trip to natural park on holiday with their children.
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There has been an immense increase in some immoral traits of human beings in modern societies.
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IELTS - the number of young people perpetrating a crime has risen significantly.
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'it is rather a common phenomenon for people to have debts' - causes of debts and prevention
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[IELTS] Writing Task 1 - Average Band Point of IELTS General Test for Some Different Participants
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Humility leads people to fulfillment in the most authentic way possible - Transition into Adulthood
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One thing I can offer NYU is motivation for future students - NYU application essay
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I wished I could be back in that garage....UC essay #1 on Overcoming Obstacles
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The noise that was cancer had disrupted my childhood - Personal Statement
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Title: there are many children in a family in the past. Which advantages or disadvantages outweigh.
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In the professional work life there is just one factor that motivates people - money
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It is believed by many that women should decide whether to have an offspring or not
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Study without teacher? You should choose the right way which suits your learning.
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Writing Task 1- process of chocolate-making and the percentage of allocation the cost
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Mankind nowadays face their natural enemy, nature. IELTS Writing Task 2
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Describe your notion of "the good life."
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I was only 17, when I gave birth to my first child - entrance into a graduate nursing program
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The dramatically fluctuations are composite by Canada, Italy, Japan and France - IELTS table chart
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Mental health is a term that ceases to exist within the Asian household - Scholarship Essay
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IELTS national teams/individual financially supported by the government/non-government organisations
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Educational system is the thing that I fairly certain that we need to change soon in our country
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[IELTS 1] Time Spent in different media by teenagers and US Adults.
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It is vital for arts to have prolific conditions to thrive and be accessible for people
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Keeping dogs and cats as companion. How it influences ownership and the community?
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Life is easier? Positive view about everything always help us for having a good life in every times.
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With the humble attitude, we can earn the respect from others and relieve ourselves.; Toefl exam!
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