Writing Feedback / The total rentals and sales of movies over 9 years period from 2002 to 2011 [2]

A comparison breakdown regarding the annual total of rentals and sales of films over 9 years from 2002 to 2011 in a particular store can be noticed in the chart. At first glance, we can conclude that the number of rentals and VHS sales of films declined over the period as a whole, whilst the number of DVD Sales dominated over the last 7 years.

Moving to a more comprehensive analysis, arguably in 2002 the majority of people preferred to rent films. It proved that the number of rentals of films at the time was around 180.000. However, this trend cannot survive until the last period, due to the reason that till 2011 the interest of people to rent films declined by 122.000. The similar trend was showed by VHS Sales, from 2002 to 2006, the figure for VHS sales dropped by 88.000 and over the last 6 years; there were no people who interested to choose VHS sales.

The different trend was showed by figure for DVD Sales and Blu-ray . The figure for DVD Sales in the first period started at 49.000, this figure saw a dramatic increase of around 100.000 over the period. Interestingly, in 2007 there was a new format to sale films called Blu-ray sales. However, this figure was much lower than the other formats.

Writing Feedback / After 4 years in Lower River, salmons fry will grow into smolts which have size roughly 12-15 cm [2]

The comprehensive information regarding the growth of salmon from egg until adult can be noticed in the diagrams. According to the data, we can see that there are 4 development steps which must be passed by salmon such as egg, fry, smolt and adult. Generally, they need 5 years to grow into adult.

Moving to detailed information, the first step which will be described is egg. The habitat of salmon eggs is around small tones in Upper River. In the few months later, these eggs will grow into fry which have measure around 3-8 cm. At this step, they will move another habitat; as they will prefer to stay in Lower River.

After 4 years in Lower River, they will grow into smolts which have size roughly 12-15 cm, and they will stay in Open Sea. To be adult salmon which have measure around 70-76 cm, they need 5 years.

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Writing Feedback / Museums are supposed to be affordable to all people [2]

One of the revenue sources of museums is the selling result of admission ticket to visitors. Intrinsically, I do not prompt when people must buy a ticket when they will visit a museum, due to the reason that museums are supposed to be publicly, where all people can visit this place to get plenty of insight regarding history.

The main income sources of the majority of museums come from their visitors, as the budgets allocated by governments to evolve museums is considered not enough, as to give the best service to visitors is needed large budget. According to the recent data from Cultural Assessment Centers (CAC) of Indonesia shows that there are plenty of museums are closed, as they do not have budget to manage and evolve the museums. They just depend on the budgets from governments, as they do not charge for admission. Therefore, the selling of admission ticket is pivotal to encourage the improving of museums. However, it is important to note that museums are supposed to be publicly where it can be affordable to all people.

There is doubt that museums are pivotal to increase insight of folks regarding history in the past and all people should have a right to be able visiting museums because it is public building. Therefore, museums should be affordable to all people, as it cannot be denied that one of the factors which influence the interest of visitor who will visit museums is the price of admission ticket. As a result, to increase the interest of people to visit museums, the government must eliminate the regulation regarding ticket admission. However, government must increase the number of budget allocated to museums.

All in all, intrinsically the disadvantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the advantages. I prompt that museums are supposed to be affordable to all people and the government must facilitate all people to be able visiting museums.

Writing Feedback / A comprehensive procedure regarding the making process of the frozen fish pies produced by a company [2]

A comprehensive procedure regarding the making process of the frozen fish pies produced by manufacture and the ingredients used can be seen in the pictures. Overall, we can witness that the main ingredients to make a fish pie are potatoes and fresh salmon, and the majority of this process use sophisticated machine.

Moving to a detailed procedure, the fresh salmon must be steamed in oven, however it must be mixed lemon juice and salt previously. Salmon which steamed with mild temperatures separated from their skin and bones. After that, pear and sauce are mixed on the salmon. This ingredient is already to be blended with the potatoes and the other ingredients.

Another procedure at the same time is preparing the potatoes as one of the main ingredients. The potatoes will be peeled and sliced, but previously, it must be cleaned. The next step, this ingredient is boiled and after that be chilled in the few hours. The last step in this part is mixing the potatoes, salmon and the other ingredients into the dough machine. These ingredients will be processed to make a fish pie and then be wrapped to be sold to societies.

Writing Feedback / The best age to send to school our children [3]

The age of children is one of pivotal consideration which must be noticed by parents when they will send to school their children in the primary school. Some people dispute that the children are supposed to not be sent to school until they are seven or eight years old. Intrinsically, I agree with this statement, due to the reason that at the age, they are ready to receive the lesson from their teacher.

The children will finish their study in young age when they begin their formal education in primary school at four or five years old. It cannot be denied that there are several benefits which will be got by children in this category. For instance, they have excellence when they enroll to be worker in the companies, as the majority of companies prefer to receive the young people aged than the old people aged based on several reasons, one of them is they can dedicate longer in the corporation. However, it is important to note that the parents are supposed to not force their children to be sent to school in the early age, as it can give rise to severe problems towards the psychology development of the children.

Some Psychologists consider that seven or eight years old is the best age from the children to be sent to school, as at this age, their brain development is ready to receive the lesson from their teacher. According to one of research results published in Psychology Journal of Humboldt University in 2014 showed that the children who mentioned previously will grasp easier every lesson received and they can enjoy their school. It cannot be denied that the children will get the high learning outcome when they can grasp their lesson and enjoy their study.

All in all, I agree that the children are supposed to begin their study when their brain development is ready. Ages 7 or 8 years is the best age to send to school the children

Writing Feedback / The Interest of students on the subjects learnt will influence the learning motivation of them [2]

In recent years, the majority of people have tended to learn science and technology than the other subjects, due to the reason that these subjects will be more useful in the modern era. However, some people consider the students are supposed to learn their interest in the university. In my point of view, it is better when subjects learnt by students should have benefits in the future.

The Interest of students on the subjects learnt will influence the learning motivation of them. They will be more spirited when they learn their favorite subject. The students who interest to learn art, but they are forced to study science and technology or technique will influence their learning motivation. It cannot be denied that is the learning motivation is one of predominant factors which can pressure their learning outcome. Therefore, some people consider the subjects learnt by students are supposed to be related their curiosity. However, the benefit of their subjects in the future is pivotal part which must be considered as important.

It is indisputable fact that some universities have provided plenty of subjects considered do not have pivotal role in this modern era such as music, art and the other subjects and a wide range of students prefer to study there to improve their interest. It cannot be denied that these subjects will not encourage their career in this era. According to the data from International Labor Institute (ILI) in 2015 showed that the majority of students who are alumni of these subjects have the opportunity bigger to be unemployment, due to the reason that their subjects needed on this era.

All in all, I consider that the students are supposed to study the subjects which will encourage their career in the future.

Writing Feedback / The consumption of bananas and coffee in several European countries [2]

A detailed breakdown regarding the sales total of Fairtrade -Labelled coffee and bananas in five develop countries located in Europe between 1999 and 2004 measured in millions of Euros can be noticed in the tables. At first glance, it can be seen that the sales total of Fairtrade-Labelled bananas saw an increase in all countries.

Moving to comprehensive analysis, in 1999 the UK, Denmark and Switzerland had the biggest revenue in coffee sector. The figures were 1.5, 1.8 and 3 close behind. These figures showed an increase of 18.5, 0.2 and 3 in 2004. Based on the data, we can see an increase dramatically in Denmark.

The sales total of Fairtrade -Labelled bananas approximately showed a similar trend with the sales total of coffee in 1999, due to the reason that the countries which had the biggest revenue were Switzerland, Sweden, and Denmark. These countries dominated the other countries in this sector. The figures were 15, 1.8 and 2 respectively. In 2004, the figure for Switzerland showed a significant rise of 32. On the contrary, the figures for Sweden and Denmark declined by 0.8 and 1.1 close behind.

Writing Feedback / The workers have a good relationship not only with their directors but also associates [3]

A detailed comparison regarding the relationships of employee with their supervisors and others employees between 2005 and 2009 can be seen in the pie chart. Catching a glimpse of, we can conclude that the workers have a good relationship not only on their directors but also on their co-workers. The number of workers who had a well relationship with their manager and the other staffs showed a steady increase from 2005 to 2009.

Moving to a comprehensive analysis, in 2005 the percentage of workers who had a good and very good relationship with their supervisors and the other employees was 87 % and 91 % close behind. In 2009, these figures showed an increase steadily at 87 % and 95 % respectively.

In addition, the percentage total of workers in 2005 who had poor and fair relationships with their director and co-workers was 10% and 8% close behind and in 2009 these figures declined by 2% and 5 % respectively.

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Writing Feedback / The presence of children do not influence significantly the happiness level for their parents [2]

A comparison breakdown regarding the happiness levels for married and unmarried people and people who have children can be seen in the bar charts. At first glance, we can notice that the happiness rating of married people is much higher than unmarried people and the presence of children do not give the significant influence towards the happiness level for married couples.

Moving to a detailed comparison, married people aged 18-29, 30-49 and 50-64 have the happiness rating 45%, 44% and 40% close behind. These figures are tow fold higher than the figure for unmarried people in the same age. Interestingly, the happiness level for unmarried people aged > 65 is much higher than the other figures in the same category.

It is important to note that the presence of children do not influence significantly the happiness level for their parents. It has proved from the data which shows that all categories of married couples have the happiness level above 40 %.

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Writing Feedback / The main principle of the businesses is to get maximum profit, Do you agree? [3]

The purpose of businesses is to make money and they should concentrate only on this. Do you agree or disagree?

It cannot be denied that the main principle of the businesses is to get maximum profit. However, I really disagree when the entrepreneur do not notice some things related their business such as the surrounding environment, satisfaction of their costumer and their labor.

There is no doubt that some companies have spoiled the environment. They have produced the sewage or factory smoke in large amount. The excessive factory smoke has caused the depletion the ozone layers which will trigger the global warming. According to the recent data from United Nation Framework Convention on Climate Change (UNFCCC) the amount of factory smoke has increased every year, as the number of factories built has also rose, and as a matter of fact, some entrepreneurs do not care regarding this issue. In my point of view, they are supposed to try to reduce the factory smoke produced.

Improving the satisfaction of their costumer and their labor is one of pivotal thing which must be noticed by entrepreneur, due to the reason that the level of customer satisfaction will influence the amount of revenue. To improve the pleasure purchaser, the entrepreneur must repair the service and the quality of their product. Moreover, the satisfaction of the labor is one of things which must be noticed. It cannot be denied that some factories do not care related their labor. For instance, in recent years there were plenty of labors complaining related their working hours excessively.

All in all, the head of the factories should notice a wide range of things not only regarding the total of revenue but also related the surrounding environment, pleasure of their costumer and their labor.

Writing Feedback / The electronic media can strengthen the personal relationships between people not the reverse. [2]

The use of electronic media has a negative effect on personal relationships between people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The main purpose of the electronic media is to facilitate the humans to communicate. In spite of the fact the use of electronic media give rise to some problems; however I really disagree when the electronic media is considered as one of factors which has bestowed a bad influence on personal affairs between people.

Addiction is one of the bad effects from the use of electronic media which often is occurred on the children. They tend to spend their time with their gadget or computer than interacting with their families or friends. According to the recent data Children Protection Institute (CPI) showed that 67 % of the total of children in the world spending their time with their electronic device around 10- 12 hours per day. Therefore, they did not have plenty of time to interact not only with their friends but also with their families. Nevertheless, it is important to note that this problem has just occurred in the children and I believe that this problem can be overcome easily.

It cannot be denied that the media electronic has simplified to communicate among family members or colleague. The electronic media has provided plenty of figures which can aid the people to send and receive messages from their colleague. According to the recent data from Information and Technology Center in the UK showed that the communication intensity of the people in the world is increasing in the last ten years. Therefore, the electronic device has considered being able increasing the frequency of the people to correspond. There is no doubt that the frequency of the people to correspond will strengthen the personal relationships between people.

All in all, I still with my statement that the electronic media can strengthen the personal relationships between people not the reverse.

Writing Feedback / Crucial factors which influence the successful students to take a job between school and university. [3]

It cannot be denied that the work experience will help the students to achieve the wanted work. Therefore, some people prefer to take a job after finishing their study in senior high school. Actually, there are plenty of things which must be considered by students related this situation. Personally, I encourage students who want to continue their study in the university and preferring to take the job after finishing their study in the university.

The work experience owned by students will support their study in the university. According to the one of research published in Psychology Journal of Harvard University showed that one of the predominant factors which influenced the successful of the students is the work experience. The students who have a work experience will be much more superior to the class. Therefore, it is better when the people have the work experience before they attend the university. However, it is important to note that there are plenty of drawbacks which must be noticed by students who want to take a job between school and university.

The learning motivation of the student who worked previously will be much lower than the students who continue their study in the university directly. According to research result published in Makara Journal in 2015 showed that taking a job between school and university will decrease the learning motivation of the student when they attend the university as they have a high level of laziness. It cannot be denied, the learning motivation will influence the successful of the student in the university.

All in all, in spite of the fact there are plenty of benefits which will be got by students who prefer to work between school and university, however, the students are supposed to notice the drawbacks of the decision.

Writing Feedback / Plenty of people have interested to be entrepreneur based on a wide range of reasons [3]

In recent years, plenty of people have interested to be entrepreneur based on a wide range of reasons. For my part, I suppose that there are a lot of benefits which will be got when we decide to be a businessman or businesswomen than the drawbacks.

It cannot be denied that people who work as an entrepreneur have a big possibility to bankrupt, due to the reason that they do not have a permanent income amount. According to the recent data from Indonesia Labor Institute (ILI) showed that there were 324 entrepreneurs who were insolvent in the last ten years. The impermanent income owned was the predominant factor which caused this problem. However, actually it is an ordinary problem for the entrepreneur. The entrepreneur needs those problems as a challenge to be better, as they will get plenty of benefits from this challenge.

To be an entrepreneur will teach us to be an independent person as we will learn to control the revenue and expenditures of our business. In addition, the majority of entrepreneurs have provided the work for unemployment as they will need the labor to help them to evolve their business. According to the recent data from Indonesia Labor Institute (ILI) showed that the entrepreneurs have a strong role to reduce the unemployment rate in the country.

All in all, based on the some considerations explained, I believe that the advantages to be entrepreneur outweigh the disadvantages. The governments are supposed to encourage people who want to be entrepreneur.

Writing Feedback / The stages which must be passed by the products before the products is ready on sale. [2]

A breakdown regarding the stages which must be passed by the products before the products is ready on sale. Overall, these stages are divided into 2 processes which consist of the flow of manufacturing process and the flow of manufacturing feedback.

Moving to a detailed process, Raw materials and manufactured components must pass wide ranges of stages such as storage, production planning, assembly, inspection, testing, packaging, dispatch and sales. These stages are the flow of manufacturing process.

To increase the total of sale, the manufacturers conduct market research to know design and the type of advertising which will be used to promote the product. The result of this process will be needed for the packaging process. These stages are pivotal due to the reason that design of product and type of advertising will influence the interest of the consumers to but the products. These stages are the flow of manufacturing feedback.

Writing Feedback / The procedure of processing cocoa beans into chocolate [2]

A breakdown regarding the procedure of processing cocoa beans into chocolate can be seen in the diagrams. Overall, the process to produce the chocolate divides into two stages. The first stage, the cocoa beans is processed into the main ingredient to makes chocolate and the second the stage, the main ingredient is processed into liquid chocolate in the factory.

Based on the diagram, we can know that the main ingredient to make chocolate is the beans of the cocoa tree which can be found in South America, Africa and Indonesia. Before the cocoa beans are sent to the fabric to be processed, the cocoa beans must go through a fermentation process then be dried using solar light.

In the manufacturers, the cocoa beans will be roasted at a temperature 350 C, and then to separate the cocoa beans from their shell, the people use the winnowing machine. The last process, the cocoa beans will be ground to produce liquid chocolate.

Writing Feedback / The situation of the village in Stokeford after changes between 1930 and 2010 [3]

The comparing regarding the situation of the village in Stokeford between 1930 and 2010 can be seen in the maps. At first glance, we can see markedly that in 2010 there were wide ranges of residential area; on the contrary we cannot find the farmland in this year like in 1930. In addition, the number of development in this place can be told increasing significantly for 80 years.

Moving to a detailed difference, the societies in Stokehard tended to use the farmland area to build their houses. In 2010 the societies used the area of farmland located beside of river stroke and primary school to be occurred as housing area. In 1930, beside of post office, there was a central shop of the societies, however the area used to occurred the residential area in 2010.

Interestingly, the location of the post office, primary school, and bridge had still stayed in the same location for 80 years.

Writing Feedback / Growth of the human population excessive has given rise up wide ranges of problems. [NEW]

Growth of the human population excessive has given rise up wide ranges of problems. Unconsciousness of the people to take a part to overcome this problem is the predominant factor which has led this problem. However, I disagree, when this problem considers as the greatest problem faced by human due to the reason that the crime rate, the juvenile delinquency, corruption are much greater than this problem.

The majority of people which have stayed in the countryside do not realize the importance to limit the number of children owned. Plenty of them have considered that the children are one of the revenue sources. According to the recent data from Indonesian Survey Institute showed that growth of the human population in countryside was three fold greater than the city. Therefore, to overcome this problem, the government must focus to give realizing to the people in countryside and try to explain the drawbacks having plenty of children.

It cannot be denied that this problem is pivotal to be overcome as soon as possible. However, it does not show that this problem is the greatest problem faced by human, due to the reason that overtime the government has tried to repair this problem. It is proved by the data from Indonesian Humanity Survey Institute (IHSI) in 2015. They showed that the total of growth of the human in Indonesia saw a declining by 2.8 billion for three years. Based on the data, we can conclude that this problem is not one of the greatest problems faced by human.

Al in all, it cannot be denied that this problem has given rise up wide ranges of problems to societies, however the problems regarding the crime rate, the juvenile delinquency, corruption are more important to be overcome as soon as possible.

Writing Feedback / The numbers of skyscrapers buildings have increased in some countries especially develop countries. [2]

As populations grow and cities become more crowded, there is pressure throughout the world to construct ever-taller building to provide accommodation and offices. Many people object to such developments, citing the social as well as the physical dangers. Do you agree with objections to skyscrapers?

In recent years, the numbers of skyscrapers buildings have increased in some countries especially develop countries. It can be denied that it has given rise to some problems. Based on the some data, I totally agree that these buildings have led severe enough problems not only on societies but also on the environment.

The number of labor who got an accident can be told very high especially on the development process of the skyscraper buildings. According to the recent data from Indonesia Labor Institute showed that the total of labor which got an accident saw a increasing dramatically of 256 cases between 2013 and 2014. Based on the data, we can conclude that these buildings have caused physical dangers to the labors. Moreover, it is important to note that; these buildings not only have caused the problems to societies but also have given rise to a big problem on the environment.

The majority of skyscraper buildings have used glass material which can produce the large amount of heat. The amount of heat excessive has given rise to a bad effect on the environment due the reason that it can harm the balance of the environment. In addition, these buildings have used Air Conditioning (AC) in large quantities. It can also produce the large amount of heat; furthermore AC can produce the Freon substance or CFCs (chlorofluorocarbons) which can cause depletion of the ozone layer. Based on the data, there is no doubt that these buildings have led severe enough problems on the environment.

All in all, in spite of the fact that the skyscrapers buildings have some benefits, however it can be denied that these buildings have led a wide range of problems on societies especially on the environment.

Writing Feedback / The health is one of the pivotal sectors which must be cared by the government. [2]

Most developed countries spend a large proportion of their health budgets on expensive medical technology and procedures. This money should be spent instead on health education to keep people well. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The health is one of the pivotal sectors which must be cared by the government. There are plenty of ways which has done by the government to increase the quality of health in the country. The majority of develop countries have preferred to spend a wide range of expenditures to buy expensive medical technology and procedures. However, I really agree that the government should also allocate the large budgets to get health education to their societies.

Some develop countries such as Singapore, Japan, Korea and the other develop countries be known as the countries which have the best medical technology than the other countries. They have allocated the large budget to provide the sophisticated equipment. As a result, there are plenty of people who come from the other countries visiting these counties to medicate their diseases. However, unfortunately some of these countries do not think how to prevent the diseases; they just focus to cure the diseases. Giving the health education to societies is the best way to keep distance the societies from the diseases.

It is indisputable fact that there are a wide range of people who need the health education. They do not know how they keep their health or prevent and cure some diseases. According to the recent data from Societies Health Institute (IHS) in Africa showed that 78 % of the total of population there did not get the health education from the government, moreover the level of societies health there can be told much lower than the other places. It has proved that there is positive correlation between the health educations with the level of people health. Therefore, allocating the large budget on health education is the best decision.

All in all, it can be denied that providing the medical technology and procedure is pivotal, however, it will be better when the government also provide the large budget to give health education to their societies.

Writing Feedback / The role of women as mothers is pivotal to build the character of their children [2]

The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

There are a wide range of problems on the young people in the recent years such as juvenile delinquency, drugs and some severe problems others. The role of the parents especially the mothers really is needed to overcome this problem. I really agree that the mother's behavior who does not give enough attention to their children will give rise to a bad effect on the children.

In recent years, some women prefer to work than staying in their home to care their children. They entrust their children to be cared by baby sister. According to the recent data from International Labor Institute in the UK showed that the total of women employee is increasing in recent years and as a matter of fact, they do not have plenty of time to care their children. It has given rise to the problems to their children due to the reason that their children did not get enough attention from their mothers.

The role of mothers to build the character of their children is pivotal than we realize it. The father, baby sister or the teacher cannot substitute the role of a mother. According to the one of recent research published in Psychological Journal of Washington University showed that the majority of teenagers who have got involved in the juvenile delinquency did not get the enough attention from their mothers. Therefore, the women should prefer to stay in their home to care their children than work in the office.

All in all, there is no doubt that the role of women as mothers is pivotal to build the character of their children and it is important to note that no one can substitute the role of a mother.

Writing Feedback / The governments have made a wide range of regulations to protect the people from danger. [2]

Governments make many rules to protect people from danger, for example, by making people wear seat belts in cars or not allowing smoking in public buildings. However, many people believe that there are too many rules nowadays. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

In recent years, the governments have made a wide range of regulations to protect the people from danger. I really agree that in the current era, there are too many rules than in the past, however it is important to note that the rules is made to the prosperity of the all people.

Some people consider that the roles made by government restrict their freedom. For instance, in the train, we must give the chair on the pregnant women or oldest people. The governments also make the rules for smoker and driver. The smokers cannot smoke in any place especially in public buildings and for driver; they must wear seat belts when they drive a car. These rules also are completed with the penalties, so people will get the penalties when they violate these rules. Therefore, for some people, it really limits their freedom. However, I believe that, these rules are made to create the prosperity of the all people.

The level of accident in the recent years has declined. According to the data from one of research published in Governance Journal of Hamburg University in 2015 showed that there were relations between the levels of discipline society on the rules with the level of accident. More and more people who obey the rules, then the level of accident will be getting smaller. It has proved that the rules of the government are effective to protect people from danger.

All in all, I agree that in recent years, the governments have made a wide range of rules; however I believe that those rules aim to create the prosperity of the all people.

Writing Feedback / Juvenile delinquency has become the pivotal problem which must be overcome as soon as possible. [NEW]

In many countries, schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Over time, the juvenile delinquency has become the pivotal problem which must be overcome as soon as possible. I believe that the parents should be responsible to educate their children in early age. Applying a sense of discipline in the school and home is one of the best solutions to build the good character on the students.

The role of parents is pivotal to build the character of the students. They should get the attention and moral education from their parents in early age. For instance, the majority of students who come from the nuclear family have bad behavior, due to the reason that their parents do not give moral education to them. According to the data from Indonesia Survey Institute (ISI) 2015 showed that 93% the children who always get involved in the juvenile delinquency do not get the enough attention from their parents. However, it is important to note that the children who get the excessive attention from their parents will make them to be spoiled person. They will depend on their parents so they cannot be the independent person. Therefore, to build the good character on the children is needed the role of parents.

Applying a sense of discipline on the children in early age is one of the best solutions to overcome this problem. The children must be accustomed with the rules and the punishment. However, the punishment which is given must educate them. According to the data from one of research published in Psychology Journal of Tubingen University in 2014 showed that introducing a sense of discipline on the children in early age will build a sense of responsibility on the children. The data prove that the applying a sense of discipline can resolve this problem.

All in all, there is no doubt that the role of parents is pivotal to build the character of the students. I believe that there are plenty of ways to overcome this problem; one of them is applying a sense of discipline.

Writing Feedback / Some packaging of goods can give rise to the bad effect on the environment. [2]

Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. While others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is indisputable fact that some packaging of goods can give rise to the bad effect on the environment. Personally, I think that not only the manufacturers but also the customers should take a part to reduce the amount of the packaging. However, it is better when the government also take action to overcome this problem.

It cannot be denied that the packaging of goods really helps the customers when shopping, due to the reason that bringing plenty of goods without packaging will bother the customers. Therefore, they should bring the shopping bag from their home which can be used every time. On the other side, the manufacturers should limit to produce the packaging of goods or they can produce the packaging which is sustainable packaging or biodegradable packaging. In the current era, several companies prefer to take action reducing the effect of the non-biodegradable packaging such as Starbucks Coffee and Coca-Cola. They have used the biodegradable packaging and plastic bottles which can be recycled to package their product.

To reduce the amount of packaging of goods, we also need the role of the government. In the current era, there is a wide range of manufacturers and customers which do not care about this problem. They still use the non-biodegradable packaging to package their product. Therefore, the government should make a regulation regarding the obligation to use sustainable packaging or biodegradable packaging. Based on the regulation, I believe that the amount of non-biodegradable packaging can be reduced.

All in all, to overcome the problem regarding using packaging non-biodegradable of goods excessive be needed the role from the manufacturers, customers and the government.