Writing Feedback / Traveloka now provides option to book non-economy flights [2]

Online travel site agency which known as Traveloka has introduced a new program that makes Southeast Asian consumers can book business or executive class seats for local and overseas journey in an aircraft. This system has been released on Traveloka's site, with setting up accessible on its Smartphone application for Android and iOS usages. When looking for the flights, customers are more convenience to book non-economy class seats by making alteration on their flight class from economy to executive at Traveloka's page and the system will independently filter the search. According to Ferry Unardi - office's CEO - stated that this improvement will make consumers easier to personalize their travel plans.

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Writing Feedback / Taiwan promises increased investment in Indonesia [2]

Taiwan council stated that their nation will increase investment in Indonesia regarding economic policy underlying of President Joko Widodo's management. Taiwanese authority met the President and some cabinet members on Wednesday to speak regarding investment consideration in Indonesia, especially in electronics, manufacturing, renewable energy and fisheries areas. The president claimed that the new regulations between both nations will attract Taiwan companies to give more investment in Indonesia, with creating mutual agreement toward these countries. A current data carried out by Investment Coordinating Board (BKPM) in Indonesia discovered that between January and September, the investment from Taiwan industries showed a massive number by $ 118,45 million. However, it was not followed by bilateral trade which plunged sharply at 31,87 percent from 2011 to $8,22 billion in 2015. To attract Taiwanese industries give their investment in Indonesia, Industry Minister of Indonesia, Airlangga Hartanto, said that the local council will try to make easier to plan semiconductor industries in Indonesia. The massive investment from Taiwan will boost exports activities in Indonesia, particularly on semi completed machinery and goods sectors.

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Writing Feedback / Africa's tallest tree measuring 81m found on Mount Kilimanjaro [2]

The Africa's tallest tree has been found in an urban landform on the Mount Kilimanjaro, which has 81,5 meter. The previous tree-height record was found in Limpopo, South Africa, which died in 2006. However, the world's tallest trees were not naturally found in Africa, for instance a 116 meter tall sequoia tree was discovered in North America and a 100 meter tall eucalyptus in Australian. The most important factor that made all of the highest trees was exist come from the other plants which grow nearby them. But, the green giants have faced the threat from illegal logging activity which bothering their habitat. David Seaborg at the World Rainforest Fund in California stated that protecting the habitat of old plants were bringing benefit for all of species in the jungle land.

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Writing Feedback / A special, low cost construction, located under the ground [2]

The speaker gives an explanation regarding contemporary experimental design for housing. To begin with, he stated that the most noticeable one about this construction was that it made by the professional person, but he was not an architect. The others thing that make this building special was that it constructed under the ground and the cost was low. Moreover, the present -ant recommended this house for all of societies because the light was utilized by a lot of mirrors and windows in this building. And also this settlement can provide light from the sun to generate electricity, saving much money for the occupants.

Writing Feedback / Miss Grand International 2016 Comes Home to North Sumatra [3]

Ariska Putri Pertiwi, Miss Grand International 2016, went back to her settlement in Medan, North Sumatra for the first time after won the competition. She was welcomed by the traditional music and dance from South Tapanuli. She stated that she will stay in Medan for two days. She planned to visit several places in Medan like the Rahmat International Wildlife Museum & Gallery and beauty program classes.

Governor of North Sumatra, Erry Nuraidi stated that Indonesia was satisfied with Ariska's achievement because she can promote all traditional cultures in Indonesia, especially North Sumatra. He also said that the council was developing of Lake Toba place to make it more popular in the future..

Writing Feedback / From cacao tree to the chocolate bar - ten steps of man-made linear production process [2]

The diagram reveals the information regarding the stages in the chocolate production. Overall, the chocolate production has ten steps man-made linier process which starts from cacao tree and ends in inner part.

According to the graph, the first step is that collects ripe red pods in cacao tree which grown in United States of America, Africa and Indonesia. After that, the pods harvested and take white cocoa beans. In the third step, the beans are fermented and spread it in the sun to dry. Furthermore, putting the fermented beans in the large sacks and it is ready to transport by train or lorry.

In addition, the large sacks of beans are taken to the factory and it is roasted in the artificial machine for 350 o C. Moreover, the outer shell is removed and crushes the beans in another artificial machine. Finally, the beans are pressed in inner part and the liquid of chocolate has been produced in this section.

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Writing Feedback / The information regarding the steps and tools utilized in the cement production process [2]

The diagrams reveal the information regarding the steps and tools utilized in the cement production process and how cement usage in concrete production for construction matters. Overall, the cement-making process has six handmade linier stages which start from crusher some raw materials to the packaging cement. Meanwhile, the concrete production of cement for building purpose has only one stage man-made linier step which mixes some raw materials.

According to the diagram, the first step of cement production is that crush a limestone and clay until involves to the powder. Following this, the powder inserts to the mixer and passes through the rotating heater. In this step, the powder is heating by high temperatures and then it is grinded by grinder to produce cement. Finally, cement is packaging into bags and ready to utilize.

Turning to the produce concrete for construction matters, it collects some raw materials by the measure, for instance less than a fifth for cement, on in ten of water, a quarter of sand and a half small stones. More broadly, it is provided in the concrete mixer and after that limestone appears to be true.

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Writing Feedback / The water cycle has three natural steps which start by evaporation water through the rain process. [4]

The diagram illustrates the information regarding the water cycle works. Overall, it has had three cycle natural steps which start by evaporation water through the rain process.

To begin with, the evaporation from the sea because of Sun's heat and invisible water vapor. Other ways is that the evaporation from lakes and rivers and also transpiration from plants and trees. After that, the wind carried out water vapor to the high lands. In this step, the vapor faces the cold temperatures and it involves a cloud which contains a lot of water.

In addition, after the clouds arrive in high hills by helping from the wind, the clouds cool further and make a rainfall. More broadly, after the rain cycle, the water carried downstream by river and flows in the sea. Another way is that the ground water flows into lakes, rivers and seas. Furthermore, the water is stored in sea and the process will restart.

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Writing Feedback / The map reveals the information regarding the alteration in Brandenburg in the course of two periods [2]

The map reveals the information regarding the alteration in Brandenburg in the course of two periods. Overall, there was a significant improvement with some facilities that had been built in this city.

Looking to the left side of river, in 1990, there were many houses and green areas in this city. Moreover, it could be seen that only one a big house and apartment existed in this area. However in 2010, the flats were by far predominated in the left hand corner and house areas had been removed. Furthermore, the supermarket was constructed near by apartments and the railway was built to connect the left and right city.

Turning to the right side, by 1990, the school and hospital had been built in this area and railway station was constructed as well. It could be seen that near by the station there were big green areas and several settlements that had been built. However, in 2010, the forest was cut-down and replaced by a labor building, while other buildings remained unchanged.

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Writing Feedback / The facts about the improvement in Stokeford area over eighty year period [3]

The map reveals the information about the improvement in Stokeford area by two periods. Overall, there was significant alteration with some facilities that had been built in this city.

Looking to the south area first, by 1930, there were many farmlands near by river Stoke and there was a big settlement with large gardens. It also could be seen that there were motor way which connected from south to the north part. However in 2010, the farmland had been replaced with the construction of accommodations which showed a significant improvement. Surprisingly, a large garden had been renovated by several houses and street.

Turning to the north area, by 1930, the post office and shop centers had been built in this village. It was also followed by primary school and several occupy which located in northern of the city. Surprisingly, in 2010, the shops did not exist anymore and replaced with residential area whereas post office remained unchanged. The elementary school was redeveloped to modernized building and several houses were developed as well.

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Writing Feedback / Many simple thoughts bring enormous ideas which may lead to something great [3]

How Simple Ideas Led to Scientific Discoveries

In this TED video, Chris Aderson explained about the research from previous generation. First of all, he mentioned Richard that had been done with insertion research, used wagon as their item. Next, the speaker said about Erastothenes who carried out the diameter of earth by made a calculation way from Sweden to Alexandria. Moreover, he told Galileo research about speed of light and it had been continuing by Armand F. with light beam research. All in all, the speaker said that if someone wanted to do discover about anything, they can look at the previous research by the old Scientifics to broaden their horizon and also in order to make their research appeared to be true.

Writing Feedback / The speaker gives an explanation about the development of brain when learning a foreign language [3]

In this TED video, the speaker gives an explanation about the development of brain by learn about bilingual and multilingual languages. She discovered that the children who have learned more than one language, their brain can work differentially than others. Furthermore, she is disparate people who study about languages to two stages, active and passive learners. The active learners are doing speaking and writing whereas the passive one just learn from listening and reading. However, the active persons can get more benefits for their brain since it trains their brain for more complex situation. Finally, for the end of her speech, he said that by learning bilingual languages, it can make people smarter, healthier and also become the active person in the future.

Writing Feedback / Be Sure to Those Who Helped You [6]

These days, most of students in our generation are lazy, ungrateful and disrespectful to what came before their graduation. Based on this article, we should thank to all of people who always support us when we do our thesis. One of the ways that we can do to appreciate them is that putting their name in our final assignment and gives some regard. First of all, our parents merit more honor than anyone else. They are the most genuine people in the entire world who always give energy and time in our daily basis. They always bring many advantages and it makes us can reach many achieves. The second one is our friends that deserve our thanks. They always accompanied us to face any condition in campus life and give a lot of memories for us. The last but not the least is our lectures, professors, and senior who always share their experiences and also give much advice to us. Thus, just do the simple thing to say thank you for special people in our life.

Writing Feedback / Owner of Gudeg Yu Djum passes away [2]

The owner of a legendary gudeg (one of traditional food from Yogyakarta which contains with palm sugar and coconut milk) store in Yogyakarta, Djuhariah "Yu Djum", passed away on Monday, November 14, 2016. She was undergo for three days before passing away at Bethesda hospital in Yogyakarta. Yu Djum's boday was taken to her house and she will be buried on Tuesday, November 15, 2016. Yu Djum's gudeg is famous for its fans since the taste is delicious and the traditional cooking basis. Many citizens have sent their sympathy regarding Yu Djum's passing, including Indonesian culinary masters.

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Writing Feedback / TED Summary : The World's English Mania [3]

TED Summary : The World's English Mania

In this TED video, the speaker opened his speech with mania. Many societies have their own craziness activities, for example mania on music, education, and other things. However, the most noticeable mania base on this speaker is about English mania. It is because English become predominated language in the world and about a billion people use this linguistic. Finally, English appeared to be true as the global conversation since most of people think that it is represented hope for the better life in the future.

Writing Feedback / TED Summary : We Train Soldiers for War. Let's Train Them to Come Home, too. [2]

In this TED video, the speaker name is Hector A. Garcia. He is a psychologist who has spent his career for delivering evidence-based psychotherapies to veterans with posttraumatic stress disorder (PTSD). He works at the Valley Coastal Bend Veterans Health Care System and a clinical assistant professor in the Department of Psychiatry at UT Health San Antonio. During his speech, he shares about his experiences to take care of PTSD, identify the impact of this disease and also how to treat veterans who get this problem. As a scientist, he makes an exploration about the evolutionary of psychology and biology have influenced human toward PTSD. One of method to heal this problem is that doing the same training principles that the military uses in preparing its trainees for war. It is because in United States, the military have trained their army for war, not for coming to their home. Thus, when the army is back from the conflict areas to their hometown, their way of mentality think that they live in a dangerous environment. Another way of ending human suffering caused by war is to never go to war, but it is very hard to happen.

Writing Feedback / Article Summary : Remember to Take Time for Yourself [2]

Nowadays, most of children have spent their time to study. The reason for this is that they want to get better grade in their school or university for a great value from the environment. According to this article, all of scholars in United States have taken some classes during summer holiday and they cannot feel about day off. However, this condition especially happens for the first year learners because they want to survive in college-life and also to get the A-grade. As a result, most of them are getting stressful every day in daily life. According to Associated Press researcher in 2009 found that about eight out of ten a third level education scholar felt stress daily. Furthermore, there are some methods for students to maintain their stress. According to Deborah Rozman, a Ph.D. and CEO of HeartMath, by creating a loving feeling, people can significantly reduce their stress. Another way to help this problem is that students have to get more time for resting. A study by University of California and Stanford in 2006 discovered that with a more sleep, learners can make a better perform on their brain function. Finally, I suggest that all of students have taken more time for themselves to get better quality in their education.

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