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A nation can be both prosperous and able to protect environment

2 - The prompt restatement is faulty for 2 reasons : 1. The topic rewording, based on the understanding of...

Writing FeedbackKatyNguyen - May 19, 2022Holt - May 20, 2022
Science of food in school and ways to prepare it, or more significant subjects?

2 - The expectation for the paragraphs is that the writer should present at least 3 sentences in it, specially in...

Writing Feedbackminhvipham0807 - May 18, 2022Holt - May 19, 2022
Becoming an entrepreneur in the software industry; Motivation Letter for foreign university

2 - The opening statement is acceptable for the most part. However, I am confused as to whether you are applying...

Lettersnisshankaul - May 18, 2022Holt - May 18, 2022
Academic (LOR) Letter of recommendation for MS in Civil Engineering

2 - It is good but could be more informative. The first paragraph is taken as the opportunity for the recommendee...

LettersAhmed Aborai - May 18, 2022Holt - May 18, 2022
Can any obstacle or disadvantage be turned into something good?

2 - Since you are taking the accuplacer test as an ESL, you need to consider the number of words you...

Writing FeedbackCZeSAY196 - May 17, 2022Holt - May 17, 2022
A country should make use of edible insects as a food source?

3 - practice your English and make sure that the reader will understand the things that you would want to say....

Writing Feedbackbrb1995 - May 17, 2022CZeSAY196 - May 17, 2022
Education and the Correlation to the Crime Rate

2 - The writer has clearly given a lot of thought to the content of this essay and has done his...

Research Paperskashcroft05 - May 16, 2022Holt - May 17, 2022
Who Am I? (In search of African ancestral roots / How DNA test answers the question)

3 - @jfbooze Thank you Holt! You have helped me understand the weaknesses in my paper....

Undergraduatejfbooze - May 16, 2022jfbooze - May 18, 2022
"Dreaming is easy but achieving them is not!" - Personal Statement For AMA+ Scholarship

3 - Hello! thanks for giving me feedbacks and helping me out. This opportunity is very Important to me and...

UndergraduateAerin - May 16, 2022Aerin - May 17, 2022
The Software Development and Entrepreneurship Degree - Motivation letter for BSC

2 - The first paragraph is well developed and serves as an effective lead-in to the actual motivational considerations the student...

Lettersdineshni - May 16, 2022Holt - May 16, 2022
Formal education at early age or later than 7. Discuss both views, give your opinion

2 - The writer understood the topic for the essay, but failed to properly represent the 2 public opinions as required...

Writing Feedbacksontranguyen19 - May 15, 2022Holt - May 15, 2022
W1:The movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for future .

2 - Never ask the reader to look at the image reference in any case. The assumption for this and all...

Writing Feedbackquinhquinh - May 14, 2022Holt - May 15, 2022
Many people use distance-learning programs to study at home, Others think it cannot bring benefits.

2 - It is almost as if the student did not bother to read the discussion instruction before writing this essay....

Writing Feedbackanhanhanh - May 14, 2022Holt - May 15, 2022
The line graph show the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 and 2006

2 - The writer must make an effort to create a properly formatted summary overview. This is accomplished by writing at...

Writing FeedbackAn99 - May 13, 2022Holt - May 13, 2022
IELTS Writing Task 2: Some suggest that schools should make teenagers spend a short time working

3 - I think you have a bit of a misunderstanding of the topic. In this case, you should express the...

Writing Feedbackwriting123 - May 12, 2022Ann0104 - May 24, 2022
SAP Appeal Letter Review for College

2 - If the applicant is not willing to get personal with this letter of appeal by offering information that would...

Lettersabeishere - May 12, 2022Holt - May 12, 2022
Implications of employee diversity on American organizations' productivity

2 - For the introduction, the author should reverse the presentation by making the current second paragraph first, and the current...

Research Papersyuehua - May 10, 2022Holt - May 11, 2022
Accounting - Letter of explanation for study permit in canada

2 - The entire letter is not going to be believable to the consular or visa officer upon first, second, or...

LettersMikebael - May 10, 2022Holt - May 11, 2022
Specification of reasons I chose this field especially, technology, computer science (MEXT, Japan)

2 - These reasons are not developed enough to establish a solid professional goal upon graduation. The references provided are in...

Undergraduateintherighpath - May 10, 2022Holt - May 10, 2022
The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the UK in 2013 & 2014

2 - The writer has not written enough words to allowthe examiner to completely assess his English report writing skills. While...

Writing Feedbackbenio san - May 9, 2022Holt - May 10, 2022
The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales (in various formats) of films

2 - As there are several types of graphs used in a task 1 essay, the summary presentation should use a...

Writing FeedbackRiophan1007 - May 8, 2022Holt - May 9, 2022
The line graph illustrates the amount of fish and various types of meat consumed in European country

2 - It is not enough to merely meet the word count in a task 1 essay. While there are ample...

Writing Feedbackbaotran3112 - May 8, 2022Holt - May 8, 2022
Motivational letter for the University Paris-Saclay, Master's in English for Specific Purposes

2 - It should not only be shortened, it should be deleted in totality with a more appropriate motivational letter written...

LettersDina K - May 6, 2022Holt - May 7, 2022
Ielts writing test 1 - map of a museum topic

5 - You should divide your essay into different parts and your work is missing the introduction. I also see that...

Writing Feedbackkyrie - May 6, 2022Jenny3110 - May 27, 2022
IELTS TASK 2: HOSTING INTERNATIONAL SPORTS EVENT - OPINION ESSAY

4 - @Holt @writing123 Thank you so much for your help, sorry for replying so late :(...

Writing Feedbackflorairene - May 4, 2022florairene - Jul 19, 2022
IELTS TASK 2: HOUSING SHORTAGE - OPINION ESSAY

2 - The writer should have separated the discussion topic and the basis for the topic. These are 2 different subjects...

Writing Feedbackminhtamdav - May 4, 2022Holt - May 4, 2022
TWO-PART QUESTION: Big city topic

3 - Nowadays, many metropolises have faced with a number of issues, ... I suggest using the present continuous tense....

Writing Feedbackhanle1999 - May 4, 2022writing123 - May 12, 2022
IELTS WRTING TASK II ACADEMIC: violent media encourages real-life violence among young people

3 - " carelessly monitoring by parents and government is the prominent result of violent media" you mean excessive violence on...

Writing Feedbacklazidili - May 3, 2022minhtamdav - May 4, 2022
Biomedical engineering - personal statement to apply the scholarship.

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for you specific suggestions. I will revise carefully again....

ScholarshipEi Po Po Aung - May 1, 2022Ei Po Po Aung - May 1, 2022
Personal statement for the scholarship program of Pusan National University (Urban Engineering)

3 - @Holt Thanks for your detailed feedback. I will try to revise it again....

Undergraduatethantsyn - Apr 30, 2022thantsyn - May 1, 2022
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